Writing review by https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a What was similar / different about my partner's work? en-us 2017-10-03 03:59:35 UTC 2020-06-14 04:05:49 UTC hello@padlet.com Mrs Colquhoun Thisuli https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193264042
Miss Davis' writing had paragraphs and so did mine.
We also both  included a simile.
Miss Davis included a metaphor and I did not.]]> 2017-10-03 04:01:49 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193264042 Gianluca 👌🏾 https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193334720
Sofia didn't have metaphors but I did but we used AANVA. We both used pronouns but she didn't use fronted adverbial phrases.

Hoor's work is good for me and maybe for you .Phrases it had but it didn't have metaphors.she did very well and she was excellent.]]> 2017-10-03 10:03:12 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193334720 Siraj https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193334843 My partner and I both used AANVA  and did not use paragraphs.]]> 2017-10-03 10:03:46 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193334843 Siraj https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193335150 Nikhil and I both had good outstanding words]]> 2017-10-03 10:05:25 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193335150 Aoun added verbs and adjectives just like me. https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193335272 BY:Sofia.c]]> 2017-10-03 10:06:12 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193335272 Cuties(marissa& zeynep) https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193335356 (My partner did include metephore I didnot.z)(My partner use similes & I did not.]]> 2017-10-03 10:06:35 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193335356 https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193335407 I had simile but niki did not.FROM SIRAJ]]> 2017-10-03 10:06:51 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193335407 Artem https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193335852 AANVA,Ajecives,metaphors,
Openers,verbs,nouns,adverbs.
 🤑👍👌]]> 2017-10-03 10:08:44 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193335852 Hugh and saif https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193335959 We used Adjectives and Verbs
Hugh used Questions 
Saif used Setting ]]> 2017-10-03 10:09:05 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193335959 My story is short but Sofia's story was long . aounf_wis1 https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193336226 2017-10-03 10:10:19 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193336226 Harib https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193336482 The W's:  What, Where Who.]]> 2017-10-03 10:11:29 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193336482 Kate https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193336718 my partner Ben used AANVA]]> 2017-10-03 10:12:41 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193336718 https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193337090 NIKHIL DID NOT HAVE SIMILIES,AANVA BUT I HAD EVERY SINGLE ONE OF THEM]]> 2017-10-03 10:14:27 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193337090 Faisal https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193337101 I used pronouns and so did Zeynep, But I used BFG style wording and she did not.]]> 2017-10-03 10:14:32 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193337101 https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193337329 Aoun didn't add verbs and adverbs.]]> 2017-10-03 10:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193337329 Hoor https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193337589 I saw Ganluca's story and the handwriting is lovely! He did excellent!!! ]]> 2017-10-03 10:16:41 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193337589 Shayan https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193337783 🤑🤑 Laura and I  both used  adjectives to describe the BFG.

]]> 2017-10-03 10:17:34 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193337783 Sofia C https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193337895 Aoun didn't add aanva but I did.]]> 2017-10-03 10:18:10 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193337895 Mounir https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193338451 Harib I both have adjectives we both did not use paragraphs.]]> 2017-10-03 10:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193338451 Hoor https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193338917 Ganluca used:
Metaphors 
AANVA
Fronted adverbial phrase
Phrases
Similie
Pronouns
And Adjectives
✔Check]]> 2017-10-03 10:22:11 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193338917 My story was short but Sofa c's story is long but we both never used paragraphs. aounf_wis1 https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193339019 By: AOUN! 👍😁😀😄😎]]> 2017-10-03 10:22:39 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193339019 My parter is fasial, he used lots of fantastic things in his writing like fronted adverbials. https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193339319 2017-10-03 10:23:46 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193339319 Filippo https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193339933 Marisa used more detail
than me but neither of us wrote in paragraphs or used an AANVA.]]> 2017-10-03 10:26:11 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193339933 Laura https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193340279 My partner Shayan used adjectives and so did I]]> 2017-10-03 10:27:46 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193340279 Hoor https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193340696 Ganluca did a great job writing a story!]]> 2017-10-03 10:29:24 UTC https://padlet.com/thisuli/p4br6u4rqq4a/wish/193340696