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Number the stars

2024-10-25 02:42:20 UTC

The title is Number the Stars The background is historical fiction

The background is the time when Germany occupied Danmark.

The main character's family helps his Jewish friend.

Ellen is a 10-year-old girl and has a close friend, Annemarie.

The theme of the novel is tense.

When the Germans came to my house in Chemter 6, Annemarie's father called Ellen with a picture of his dead sister.

Because Ellen is a Jew.

The part of the topic that came out well was when the German army came to the house and looked for the Jews.

What I felt after reading this book was that I was nervous and Ellen must have been grateful to Anne Marie's family.

20212 박채빈

2024-10-25 03:02:48 UTC

The title of the book is Number the stars by Lois Lowery. The Genre of the book is historical fiction. This book starts its story in the third year of the Nazi occupation of Denmark. Annemarie, protagonist in this book wanted to keep her Jewish friend Ellen safe from the Nazis. With the help of her family and the resistance. Annemarie bravely delivered an important package that helped Ellen's family escape to Sweden. I was truly inpressed by Annemarie. She is a girl who tries to help her Jewish friend Ellen. What I was so impressesd about her is her bravery for friend Ellen. I guess the theme of the book is criticism og history. This is shown clearly in chapter 5, when Annemarie hides Ellen's necklace from Nazis soldiers. This scene implies the situation of the period, 1943. Annemarie did some action because she wanted to hide that Ellen is a Jew, so that Ellen doesn't have to be caught. Such actions are effectively shown through the use of flashback and tone. Additionally, the use of tone emphasizes the theme. Especially in the scene that Annemarie telling Ellen to take her necklace off, and hiding it all along. The world can be tough, so the value of criticism of history isn't always easy to see. However, this great book shows it really well. It shows the negative sides of racial discrimination and persecution by borrowing Annemarie's words. After reading the book, I thought that racial discrimination is a bad thing ruining one's life. I won't do such thing. In the end, "Number the stars" is a story that everyone will remember for a long time.

6번 김아은

2024-10-25 03:23:19 UTC

1.I read a Historical fiction ‘Number the stars’ by Lois Lowry

2.In third year of the Nazi occupation of Denmark, Annemarie wanted to keep her Jewish friend Ellen safe from the Nazis.

3.with the help of her family and the psi stance Annemarie brave delivered ed important package that helped Ellen’s family escape to Swedes

4.I was truly impressed by Annemarie, one of the main characters

5.she is just and brave

6.the theme of the book is brave

7.this is shown clearly in Chapter 4 when told the Soldier hat it was lise, not Ellen

8. Because she Protects Ellen and Ellen's family

9. such actions are effectively shown throagh the use of imagery.

10.Additionally, the use of Dialogue

emphasizes. the Theme

11.In the scene that Annemarie's parents talked to Ellen as their daughter

12.The world can be tough, so the value of brave ish't al ways easy to see

13.However this great book is shows it really well

14.But this great book shown it really well I tount Annemarie was brave to help her friend an is was cool

15.In the end, "Number the stars" is a story that everyone will remember for a long time

20208 김하윤

2024-10-25 15:45:08 UTC

1. I read a historical fiction "Number the Stars" by Lois Lowry

2. It's about Annemarie's family defending the Jewish Ellen.

3. And fleeing from Nazis.

4. I was impressed by Peter, who is Lise's fiance.

5. He is Danish resistance's member.

6. The theme of the book is resistance against the Nazis

7. This is shown clearly in Chapter 10, when In a letter Peter wrote in prison, he said he loved everyone, not afraid, and was proud to do what he could for freedom without being scared

8. Peter did this because Peter wanted freedom.

9. Such actions are effectively shown through the use of dialogue.

10. Additionally, the use of dialogue emphasizes the theme.

11. In Chapter 10, Peter and Annemarie's family plan to escape the Jews.

12. This scene shows that Peter is a member of the danish resistance.

13. Peter fought against the Nazis, but eventually died.

14. I was sad to read this book and know that the Nazis were really cruel and many people were sacrificed

15. In the end, "Number the Stars" is a story that everyone will remember for a long time.

20206 김아은

2024-10-28 05:04:11 UTC

1.I read a Historical fiction ‘Number the stars’ by Lois Lowry

2.In third year of the Nazi occupation of Denmark, Annemarie wanted to keep her Jewish friend Ellen safe from the Nazis.

3.with the help of her family and the pesi stance Annemarie brave delivered ed important package that helped Ellen’s family escape to Sweden

4.I was truly impressed by Annemarie, one of the main characters

5.she is just and brave

6.The theme of the book is brave

7.this is shown clearly in Chapter 4 when told the Soldier hat it was lise, not Ellen

8. Because she Protects Ellen and Ellen's family

9. such actions are effectively shown

through the use of imagery

10.Additionally, the use of dialogue

emphasizes. the Theme

11.In the scene that Annemarie's parents alked to Ellen as their daughter

12.The world can be tough, so the value of brave ish't al ways easy to see

13.However this great book shows it really well

14.But this great book shown it really well I tount Annemarie was brave to help her friend was cool

15.In the end, "Number the stars" is a story that everyone will remember for a long time

20211 박지오

2024-10-28 05:05:15 UTC

The book I'm dealing with today is a coming-of-age novel 'Number the Stars' by Lois Lowry.
Under Nazi rule, the main character of this book, Annemarie, tried to protect her friend Ellen. Annemari's family and Ellen went to Sweden to help Ellen.
The character that impressed me the most was Annemarie.
She is a 10-year-old brave and considerate girl.
She has a little sister, Kirsti and Jewish friend, Ellen.
The theme of the book that I think is friendship.
I could see it in Chapter 5, when Nazi soldiers came to Annemarie's house to find Ellen.
Annemarie grabbed the Jewish necklace that Ellen was wearing and protected her until the end in a dangerous situation.
She helped Ellen because she cherished Ellen more than anything else as a friend.
From this point of view, I could see Annemarie thought friendship is very important.
Such actions are effectively shown through the use of imagery and dialogue.
Also, the use of tone emphasizes the theme. In the scene after listening to Ellen's parents' situation from her dad, Annemarie said, "We must help them,too!"
She said it in a hurry tone because she thought she had to protect her friend's parents.
Sometimes, the value of friendship isn't always easy to see.
But I could see the value in this book.
Annemarie and Ellen really thought about each other and the friendship that was maintained until the end in difficult situations was wonderful.
In conclusion, 'Number the Stars' is a book that impresses many people.

20209 김효재

2024-10-28 05:07:20 UTC

1. The title of this book is Number the stars and it's written by Lois Lowry.

2. This book covers historical fiction

3. The background of this book is Denmark in 1943

4. The plot of this book is the story of Annemarie who tries to protect her friends from German soldiers

5. I think AnneMarie is the most impressive

6. This girl is 10 years old, courageous and calm even in dangeruos stuations

7. I think the theme of this book is a little girl's courage

8. When German soldiers suspect a friend's hair color

9. Annemarie lies that she is her older sister and protects her friend

10. Because l wanted to protect my friend

11. Such actions are effectively shown through the use of Tone

12. Additionally, the use of Dialogue emphasizes the theme

13. When the Germans questioned Ellen, saying her hair cobrwas diffrent, Annmarie courageously explanied that she was her older sister

14. The world can be tough, so the value of a young girl's courage isn't always easy to see

15. I also wanted be a brave and rellable friend

16. In the end, [Number the stars] is a story that everyone will remamber for a long

20204김가연

2024-10-28 05:11:18 UTC

1.I read a coming-of-age novel Number the star's by Loise lowry.

2. In Danmark,Annemarie wanted to keep Jewish friend Ellen safe from Nazis.

3. It's about challenges and adversities of the main characters.

4. I was impressed by Kirist.

5.She is an honest and cute girl.

6. The theme of the book is nervous.

7. In chapter 6,when they on the train Kirist showed off her shoes to soldiers without asking that Ellen was her older sister.

8. I think Kirist is clever.

9. Because she understood situlation,she knew that Ellen wasn't her sister,but she didn't tell the soldiers.

10.But she pretended that Ellen was her sister in order to deceive the soldiers.

11 .Annemarie parents told about Lise of the first time.

12. Use of flashback emphasize the theme.

13. Parents had spoken of Lise first time three years.

14. It seems to be a book that Ellen and Annimarie overcome together in difficult situation.

15. I think Number the Star is a book that children can read at least once.

20201 간정현

2024-10-28 05:12:59 UTC

I read a historical fiction 'number the starts' by Lois Lowry

2. Inthe third year of the Nazi occupation of Denmark Annemarie wanted to keep her Jewish friend Ellen safe from the Nazis

Annemarie wanted to keep her Jewish friend Ellen safe from the Nazis with the help of her family and the Resistance Annemarie bravery delivered an important package that helped Ellen's family escape to Sweden

I was really impressed by Annemarie one of the main charact
she is ten-year-girl her best friend Ellen
the theme of the book is bravery
this is shown clearly in chapter 5 when Ellen was Jewish and had to esale before she was caught by the Germans but at first she was bright because she was a child and didn't care it she heard a soldier so the got caught running matches but I was encouraged because but I was encouraged because I thought something big was going on to happen
Ellen Jewish so she had to esape before she gt caught
such actions are effectively shown through the use of tone,smile
Additionally the use of imagery emphasizes the theme
in the scene that I mustered up my courage because I thought something big was going to happen
the world can be tough so the value of 5 isn't always easy to see
However this great book shows it really well
but this great book shows it really well it's great to have courage for a close friend and it's something to emulate
in the end "Number the starts" is a story that everyone will remember for a long time

20213 오수경

2024-10-28 05:22:09 UTC

① I read a book called 'Number the Stars'. The author of the book is Lois Lowry, and the genre is historical fiction.

② In the third year of the Nazi occupation of Denmark, the main character Annemarie helps her friend Ellen.

③ Annemarie helps her family and friend Ellen's family escape to Sweden with the help of her family and a Resistance.

④ I was most impressed by the main character's mother.

⑤ She helps the main character, Annemarie, Annemarie's friend Ellen, and her family.

⑥ I think the theme of this novel is either 'help' or 'friends'.

⑦ When the German soldiers try to open Great-Aunt Birte's coffin, Annemarie's mother runs out of the room, slaps the German soldiers, and lies to prevent them from opening the coffin lid.

⑧ In fact, Great-Aunt Birte's coffin contained old clothes, not a human body. Because she planned to give those clothes to people.

⑨

20212 박채빈 수정본

2024-10-28 05:41:46 UTC

1. I read a book about the time of Nazis's occupation of Denmark, written by Lois Lowery. As this book tells the historical story by setting the character Annemarie and stories she experience, I think te genre of this book is historical fiction.
2. Like I mentioned earlier, this book starts in the third year of Nazi occupation. Annemarie, protagonist in this book tries to save her best freind Ellen from Nazis. 3. Since Ellen is a Jewish, she has to move to other country without Nazis occupation, and that lead Annemarie to do some things for her friend like delivering an important package.
4. After reading this book, I was impressed by Annemarie.
5. I want to tell you that she is a thoughtful girl and tries to help her friend with her spirit of sacrifice. She showed me what a desirable spirit is. She has done many lies, and many hazardous jobs. I learned upright attitudes from Annemarie, and it made this book worth of reading.
6. I think the theme of the book is criticism of history.
7. In chapter 5, it is shown clearly when Annemaroe hides Ellen's necklace from Nazi soldiers. This scene implies the situation of the period well, too.
8. Annemarie did some action because she wanted to hide that Ellen is a Jew, so that Ellen doesn't have to be caught.
9. Also, the action I mentioned above has a special literature technique, flashback and tone.
10. The use of tone especially emphasized the theme,
11. In the scene that Annemarie told Ellen to take her necklace off and hides it all along.
12. As I'm now finalizing this book report, I want to talk about the theme of this book, criticism of history in detail.
13. This book showed the negative sides of racial discrimination and persecution by borrowing Annemarie's words, and displayed the theme very well.
14. In this context, I thought racial discrimination ruins one's life terribly. Nazis's discrimination made most of the Jewish peopleI(in the period of Nazis's time)dead, and discirmination in the America made a black civil rights movements. I would not do such things ever.
15. In the end, this book has made me think of upright attudes in ethical sides, and made me think deeply about racial discrimination. I want to recommend this book to my ages.

20208 김하윤

2024-10-28 15:42:05 UTC

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1. I read Lois Lowry's historical fiction book, Number the Stars.

2. It's about Annemarie's family defending the Jewish girl Ellen.

3. And fleeing from Nazis.

4. I was impressed by Peter, who is Lise's fiance.

5. He is member of the Danish resistance.

6. The theme of the book is resistance against the Nazis.

7. This is shown clearly in Chapter 10, when a letter Peter wrote in prison, he said he loved everyone, was not afraid, and was proud to do what he could for freedom without being scared.

8. Peter did this because Peter wanted freedom.

9. Such actions are effectively shown through the use of dialogue.

10. Additionally, the use of foreshadowing emphasizes the theme.

11. In Chapter 10, Peter and Annemarie's family plan to help the Jews escape.

12. This scene shows that Peter is a member of the Danish resistance.

13. Peter fought against the Nazis, but eventually died.

14. I was sad to read this book and know that the Nazis were really cruel and many people were sacrificed.

15. At the end, the Number the Stars taught me a lot about the Dane and German solider.

20217 정채원 'Number the Stars' 독후감

2024-10-29 06:42:59 UTC

1. I enjoyed a Historical fiction 'Number the Stars' by Lois Lowry.
2. The era of this book is the third year of the Nazi occupation of Denmark.
3. The plot of the book is about Annemarie trying to save her Jewish friend Ellen from the Nazis.
4. I was moved by Ellen.
5. She is a 10-year-old girl who is Jewish.
6. The theme of the book is bravery.
7. In Chapter 5, when Ellen lied to the Nazis that she was Lisa, Annemarie's dead sister.
8. She did it because if the Nazis found out that she was Jewish, she and Annemarie would be in danger.
9. These actions are effectively shown by Tone, and Dialogue.
10. The literary devices used in this theme are Tone.
11. In Chapter 5, Annemarie whispered, to Ellen "Take your necklace off"
12. The theme of the book I chose is bravery.
13. This book shows it well.
14. I feel like I am growing up after reading this book.
15. In the end, 'Number the Stars' is a book that will be loved by everyone.

20215 이서영

2024-10-29 10:38:48 UTC

1. I was impressed by "Number the Stars" which is written by Lois Lowry.

2. When the Nazis conquered Denmark, Annemarie and her family tried to help the Jewish family of Ellen.

3. Ellen was able to escape with the courageous help of Annemarie and her family.

4. I was impressed by Annemarie, one of the main characters.

5. She is a girl who has close loyalty to her friend.

6. The theme of the book is Friendship and Bravery.

7. This is appeared effectively in chapter5, when Annemarie grabbed the little gold chain, yanked with all her strength, and broke it.

8. Annemarie did this because she think that she must to protect her friend from Nazis soldiers.

9. These actions are clearly shown through the use of Imagery and Dialogue.

10. Additionally the use of Imagery emphasizes the theme.

11. In Chapter 5, Annemarie commanded "Hold still" to Ellen and broke her necklace for protect her friend from soldiers.

12. Friendship is difficult to appear and judge easily.

13. Nevertheless, this book express the theme really well.

14. After I saw this book, I realized that friendship can protect one's friend from dangerous, and make closer relationship.

15. Finally, "Number the Stars" is a book that give opportunity to people for deepen their thought.

20207 김하나

2024-10-29 13:00:23 UTC

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1. I enjoyed reading Lois Lowry's book a coming of age novel 'Number the Stars'.

2. In 1943, three years after the Nazis ruled Denmark, Annemarie wanted to protect her Jewish friend, Ellen, from the Nazis.

3. Annemarie succeeds in sending Ellen safely with the help and sacrifice of many people around her.

4. Annemarie, a teenage girl in the novel who wants to protect her best friend Ellen from the Nazis, was the most impressive.

5. I think the theme of the book is bravery and friendship between Annemarie and Ellen.

6. This is shown in Chapter 5, when soldiers went to Annemarie's house at night.

7. When they went to her house, Annemarie grabbed Ellen's necklace, yanked with all her strength, and broke it which Jews must wear.

8. Because she does to protect her friend, Ellen from Nazis who want to find Ellen's family, even though she was very scared.

9. And also it is a story about the growth of Annemarie and the people around her.

10. This can be seen in the scene where Annemarie, who was afraid of the German army, confronts her confidently, lying to protect her friend.

11. Such actions are effectively shown through the use of Foreshadowing, Dialogue, Imagery and Flashback.

12. In addition, Imagery is one of the factors that the better reveal the theme.

13. Annemarie commanded "Hold still" to Ellen and broke her necklace to protect her friends from soldiers.

14. The world can be difficult, so it's not always easy to see the value of friendship and bravery.

15. However, this great book shows it really well.

16. After I read this book and I realized that closely friendship and bravery can protect one's friends from dangerous.

17. And I also want to be a brave and dependable friend.

18. In the end, "Number the Stars" is a story that everyone will remember for a long time.

20202 강서후

2024-10-29 13:36:37 UTC

I read ‘Number the stars’ by Lois Lowry impressively.
This book was about Annemarie‘s family tried to protect the Jewish Ellen’s from the Nazis in 1943.
I thought the value that the author wanted to show in this book was ‘Love’.
So I was most impressed with Inge among the characters in this book.
She was a wise and responsible person.
One day, she told Annemarie and Ellen that Great-aunt Birte had died.
But in fact, from the beginning, Birte was a fictional character that was not in this world.
She lied because she loved Annemarie and Ellen so much.
She thought that the lying would protect them.
The author used a method called Tone to effectively express the scene.
In addition, she used a method of dialogue in Chapters 12 and 13 to show Inge's love
She injured herself while trying to get home quickly, worrying about her family, after taking Ellen's family safely to Henrik.
As I got older, it became harder to feel the warmth of love.
But Inge's love warmed my heart throughout the book.
The warmth reminded me of my mother's love.
Maybe all mothers in the world feel the same way.
I want you to read this book and feel your mother's love that you forgot.

20205 김민선

2024-10-29 13:57:11 UTC

1.I read 'Number the Stars', a war novel by Lois Lowry.

2.In 1943 Denmark, Annemarie tries to save Ellen from the Nazis.

3.These are the things that happen while helping Ellen avoid being discovered as a Jewish.

4.Of all the characters in the novel, I like Annemarie the most.

5.Annemarie is a 10-year-old child living in Copenhagen, Denmark.

6.In my opinion, the theme of this book is friendship.

7.This is clearly shown in Chapter 5, when Annemarie removes Ellen's necklace and holds it tightly when Nazi soldiers break into the house.

8.Because she was scared of the Nazis, but she helped her friend.

9.Such actions are effectively shown though the use of Tone.

10. Additionally, the use of Dilogue emphasizes the theme.

11.When Nazis soldiers come to the room, Annemarie breaks Ellen's necklace.

12.The world can be tough, so the value of courage isn't always easy to see.

13. However, this great book shows it really well.

14.I was touched to see a young child have the courage to protect her friend.

15.In the end, "Number the Stars" is a story that everyone will remember for a long time.

20216 이은율

2024-10-29 15:10:02 UTC

1.I read a really interesting novel, "Number the stars" by Lois lowry

2.Once upon a time in Denmark, the nazis discriminated against jews,so Ellen runs away from the Germans solders

3.Ellen‘s friends Annemarie helps keep Ellen out of the side of German soldiers

4.I think Ellen is the most important person in this book

5. she’s jewish and has been running away with Annemarie by the German soldiers

6.The theme of this book is Jewish discrimination

7.The scene of Ellen and Anna Marie’s family fleeing to their uncle’s house due Jewish discrimination appears in chapter 6

8.because if Ellen doesn’t run away, she could be caught and killed by German soldiers who discriminate against Jews

9.such actions are effectively shown through the use of dialogue, tone, and foreshadowing

10.also, the use of dialogue emphasizes the theme

11.when footage of Anna Marie’s family talking to protect Ellen from the German soldiers

12.The world can be tough so the value of Jewish discrimination isn’t always easy to see

13.However, great book shows it really well

14.this book made me feel sorry about Jewish discrimination.

15after reading this book, I realized how hard life was for Jews in the old days

16.lastly, this book seems to have made me feel the situation of Jews at the time

이규원 20214

2024-10-29 21:20:02 UTC

After I learn about World War One, I became interested in historical fiction. And I read ‘Number the stars’ by Losi Lowry. The back ground of novel is Nazi occupation Denmark. That’s why Annemarie escaped Ellen from Denmark. While reading this book, Annemarie, the main character was the most memorable. She considered Ellen her best friend even though she is Jewish, and she is a character who values the friendship of trying to protect Ellen from the Nazis. When I look at the characters and think about the theme of the book is friendship. In chapter 7, Ellen ask Annmarie “where is my necklace?” And Annemarie said “A very secret where no one will ever find it. And I will keep it there for you until it is safe for you to wear it again” the character is well represented in the scene where they talk. Because if Ellen’s necklace was discovered by the German soldiers, and Annemarie worried about Ellen being taken away. This part was well expressed as a dialogue between two girls. The theme was expressed through imagery, it was well seen in chapter 4, when Ellen and Annemarie play with paper toy. And in chapter 7 Annemarie ran across the heigh grass meadow with Ellen. In this novel , we have a Jewish Ellen as a character, making it difficult to be friend, nevertheless, it showed well that friendship connects through discrimination. The story of fighting for friendship made this novel a long lasting novel in my memory.

20203 김가빈

2024-10-31 23:42:35 UTC

(1) I read Lois Lowry's novel "Number the Stars".

(2) The background of this book is set during World War II

(3) It is the story of a girl named Annemarie saving her Jewish friend Ellen from the Nazis.

(4) I was most impressed by Anne Marie among the characters in the novel.

(5) Anne marie is a 10-year-old little girl.

(6) I think the theme of this novel is the courage of a young girl.

(7) The young girl kept her composure in front of the German soldiers without fear.

(8) Anne marie was caught by German soldiers while traveling in a basket to help her brother.

(9) Anne marie is terrified, but she hides her fears and struggles for her family.

(10) Additionally, the use of tone emphasizes the theme.

(12) The world can be tough, so the value of a young girl's courage isn’t always easy to see.

(13) However, this great book portray it really well.

(14) I think Annemarie has a great sense of responsibility to protect her family, recognizing the risks, even though she is a young girl.

(15) In the end, “Number the Stars” is a story that everyone will remember for a long time.