Yr 9 CER Paragraphs by Kate Garrett

David Stefanescu English CER punctuation

2024-10-29 23:34:36 UTC

Punctuation is utilised to display the Monster’s reaction and lack of vocabulary. When the Monster describes his life experiences, truncated sentences such as “…for every living creature- I wanted to help them…” and “…set their dogs at me- and even the dogs turned away…” are used to describe his limited vocabulary and understanding of full sentences. The em-dashes are utilised by the author to convey the Monster’s original feelings and intentions for the wildlife and the reactions of the humans and dogs upon looking at him, which ultimately leads up to him contradicting Frankenstein’s ideas of a ‘perfect human’.

David Stefanescu English CER complex sentences

2024-10-29 23:35:25 UTC

Complex sentences are used to express the Monster’s emotions during the novel. During the Monster’s speech about his life, he expresses how Frankenstein “turned away in horror… as soon as [he] saw what [he]’d done…” before explaining how “…when [he] tried [to help protect them], [the humans] stoned [him] and shot at [him]…” The use of complex sentences allows the author to portray his anger and sadness towards Frankenstein and humanity. This positions the readers to sympathise with the Monster and feel sorry for his past trauma.

Borjan Complex sentence CER

2024-10-29 23:42:47 UTC

Shelley uses complex sentences to demonstrate the Monsters feelings.

An eclipses is used for when the Monster is describing his emotions, which implies on how he has a break to think on what he’s going to say to Frankenstein about how he has ruined his life. As an example the Monster says “ and even the dogs turned away in disgust … Frankenstein, has any man in history ever been more cruel than you have been to me?”

Positioning the audience to feel empathy for the Monster as he has been de-humanised his whole life.

cer

2024-10-29 23:45:31 UTC

The use of punctuation in the Monster's writing shows his reaction. He expresses that "even the dogs turned away" and finishes the sentence with an ellipsis (...). This shows how he trails off in thought and hints how he feels betrayed.

The use of complex sentences are used to epress the Monster's emotions. He says, "I came to life full of goodwill and friendship for all living creatures" to demonstrate his kindness and how he was before the betrayal of Frankenstein.

Coopers Complex sentence spooky Scary skibidis

2024-10-29 23:45:37 UTC

In the play Frankenstein, by Mary Shelley, complex sentences are used to evoke emotion from the reader based on the harsh treatment of the monster. While arguing with Victor, the Monster cries, "And as soon as you saw what you'd done, you turned away in horror, and you left me to find my own way through the world." This complex sentence explains how the monster was mistreated and abandoned by Victor due to his ugly appearance. This sentence evokes emotion in the reader through words such as "you turned away in horror," as this quote dehumanizes the Monster, making the readers feel bad as the Monster didn't receive fair treatment. Additionally, the words "left me" show how the Monster had to do everything himself without a mentor. A mentor usually helps one, however, without one, the Monster would have a very depressing life due to his loneliness. Overall, Shelley used complex sentences to help express the emotions of the Monster in Frankenstein.

Puctuation CER

2024-10-29 23:46:01 UTC

Punctuation is used to represent the monsters reaction in a negative way. This the reader feel hatrid towards the monster. This idea can be supported by "a vision from a nightmare." This implies that the monster is not a friendly creature but one that likes to yell and scream at everyone. The exclamation mark helps deliver a message across to the reader. In this instance, the monster has been portrayed the wrong way and has been misunderstood for being a bad guy.

C Q3

2024-10-29 23:47:05 UTC

Throughout the excerpt it is evident that due to the mistreatment the Monster has experienced, he is upset, but with the use of complex sentences it is able to show the Monsters feelings in more depth. This is evident when the Monster is talking to Frankenstein and says "... as soon as you saw what you'd done, you turned away in horror and left me to find my own way through the world". Shelley has used complex sentences to add extra detail and to further list more events where he had been mistreated. The use of complex sentences is used to help the reader understand the Monsters feelings in more depth and to make them feel empathy towards him.

Kayla - complex sentences

2024-10-29 23:50:35 UTC

Complex sentences are used to convert the emotions in which the Monster feels. For example, “And as soon as you saw what you’d done, you turned away in horror and left me to find my own way through the world”. The use of this complex sentence describes the Monsters undying hatred for Victor due to him leaving as soon as he was created. It identifies that although Victor thought he would create a beautiful creature, as soon as he way the monster, he ran off. This portrays to the reader that Victor is the real Monster in the story and the monster should have never been created, therefore, allowing the body parts to be laid to rest.