https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo What questions do you still have? What are you goals? What are you proud of so far? en-us 2017-09-28 11:45:36 UTC 2026-03-17 02:41:47 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018641 I'm feeling pretty good and I like my 2nd paragraph more than my first]]> 2017-09-28 12:01:12 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018641 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018648 I feel like my paragraphs are getting repetitive... I keep saying "individualist" and "collectivism" ]]> 2017-09-28 12:01:14 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018648 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018666 It's not going the way I want it to... I'm never going to have 2000 dollars .. which is a LOT for an essay about a book that's basically the giver but more political and less fun to read 

]]> 2017-09-28 12:01:19 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018666 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018720 It's going pretty well, my prompt is really easy to write about which is good]]> 2017-09-28 12:01:32 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018720 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018739 Not so bad i get the whole idea of what I'm supposed to do. Just kinda worried about if I am doing my second body paragraph right 

]]> 2017-09-28 12:01:36 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018739 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018757 I feel pretty fine about where I am]]> 2017-09-28 12:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018757 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018819 I'm a little worried that there isn't a good transition between my first and second paragraph]]> 2017-09-28 12:01:54 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018819 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018824 2017-09-28 12:01:55 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018824 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018881 I feel like mine is really repetitive, but other than that it is good.]]> 2017-09-28 12:02:08 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018881 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018909 I'm going to be honest, 1/2 the class doesn't have much of paragraph two done and we're going way too fast. We have a lot of work so writing a paragraph for something not many of us want to do is something that can slip out of our minds. I personally feel like quality work takes time and this is so fast.

]]> 2017-09-28 12:02:14 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192018909 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019021 I'm very confused honestly and I'm so behind, idek what we are doing, I'm very very much so lost with everything ]]> 2017-09-28 12:02:38 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019021 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019056 Lowkey good, I haven't got the time to work on it as much, with all my other work.]]> 2017-09-28 12:02:44 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019056 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019065 I feel like the class in general needs more guidance. Some people may Be right on track but I do feel like more guidance and maybe more conferencing would benefit the whole class. Other than that my first paragraph is better than my second but they both are pretty good]]> 2017-09-28 12:02:46 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019065 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019128 It's going good so far, not sure how good my third body paragraph will be though]]> 2017-09-28 12:02:57 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019128 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019154 I feel good I think I need to put more information in my paragraphs ]]> 2017-09-28 12:03:01 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019154 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019217 I feel like my paragraph is just dragging on. I won't to make it more spiffy]]> 2017-09-28 12:03:13 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019217 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019228 I need more time I'm not even done with the second paragraph :/]]> 2017-09-28 12:03:16 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019228 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019443 Pretty good rn. I got this in the bag. ]]> 2017-09-28 12:03:53 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019443 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019602 I'm a little confused about how much textual evidence we need to give ]]> 2017-09-28 12:04:20 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019602 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019730 I need some more time to be honest or I feel like I'm rushing ]]> 2017-09-28 12:04:38 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192019730 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192020172 My vocabulary is getting repetitive, so I've been on thesaurus.com a lot. I really want to combine my ideas for my second and third paragraph. And my ideas for my fourth paragraph are all over the place. ]]> 2017-09-28 12:06:01 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192020172 https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192020517 2017-09-28 12:06:59 UTC https://padlet.com/carrie_ferreri1/oydwfd37f0bo/wish/192020517