https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk Please write here your comment on the Higher Order Concerns (HOCs) of the Personal Essay (Why I Remembered What I Remembered) en-us 2022-01-13 01:53:00 UTC 2025-11-18 11:24:38 UTC hello@padlet.com koreanteacherpoako https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1989413635 2022-01-13 01:55:27 UTC https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1989413635 koreanteacherpoako https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1989413841 2022-01-13 01:55:39 UTC https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1989413841 koreanteacherpoako https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1989414195 2022-01-13 01:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1989414195 koreanteacherpoako https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1989414330 2022-01-13 01:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1989414330 https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1991516512 Paul Montana

- the central idea of the story is that they cheated death by sacrificing themselves out of 154 people that they didn't know. They are lucky enough]]> 2022-01-14 02:10:12 UTC https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1991516512 https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1991519517 THESIS
-For me, I have a hard time finding a thesis statement in the beginning not until you read the whole essay and finish it so that the reader can make a thesis statement. It has a main idea that focuses on the writer’s experience during the family vacation.

AUDIENCE
-The writer intends to share his experience with the reader who may have had the same experience with him. A person will have an interest in reading this essay to relate and confirm if they have the same feelings and thoughts before and after the incident.

ORGANIZATION
-The organization of the idea which is well and properly organized.

DEVELOPMENT
-It is also interesting to compose the story in the essay because there is a mystery as to why he is the only one who remembers everything while others in the family seem to have forgotten it. From the beginning of the story to the end it went well.]]> 2022-01-14 02:12:49 UTC https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1991519517 https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1991519753 Paul
The audience involved is my classmates and mam francis
The purpose of the story was realizing the fact that what happened is really not your time to die. You still have a mission to do. You still got a lot of things to achieve]]> 2022-01-14 02:12:58 UTC https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1991519753 https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1991521714 The important details are they crasged the airplane and luckily, they got to land on the wrong airplane and the airplane that they we're supposed to land on, had crashed ]]> 2022-01-14 02:14:42 UTC https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1991521714 https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1991522403 The organized is properly organized]]> 2022-01-14 02:15:16 UTC https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1991522403 https://padlet.com/koreanteacherpoako/oxmj1s8phz5f6uwk/wish/1991522776 Thesis/Focus:From the title itself, it focuses about why the writer remembered the things he/she remembered which is a sudden brain flash about the past accident the might have been experience and living and experiencing life right now suddenly gives him the relief and guilt.

Organization: The first 2 sentence is written in a present form while the rest is written on how or what are the things that happened in the present form.

Audience and purpose: It is appropriate for us audience because it can understood easily and precisely.

Development: The details that needed are in the material is shown to understand very well.

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