https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df Jan Information en-us 2023-03-10 07:44:20 UTC 2023-03-10 09:33:02 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511590836 No abbreviations, well defined structure. ]]> 2023-03-10 09:27:42 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511590836 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511591488 Contractions, inappropriate for a mail register, grammar errors (no syntax agreement)]]> 2023-03-10 09:28:19 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511591488 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511591926 No exclamation marks]]> 2023-03-10 09:28:50 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511591926 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511592325 Destinatary. He could have said "Dear Director of" or "To Whom May It Concern"]]> 2023-03-10 09:29:15 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511592325 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511592334 the content is structured in a very logical way.]]> 2023-03-10 09:29:16 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511592334 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511592524 Thanks -> thank you]]> 2023-03-10 09:29:28 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511592524 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511592721 Kind regards ]]> 2023-03-10 09:29:42 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511592721 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511593347 2023-03-10 09:30:21 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511593347 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511593504 maybe more passive forms to make it less personal]]> 2023-03-10 09:30:30 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511593504 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511593808 You have to write the full name of VUB]]> 2023-03-10 09:30:43 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511593808 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511594730 It’d be = it would be]]> 2023-03-10 09:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511594730 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511595012 2023-03-10 09:31:46 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511595012 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511595197 Don’t = do not]]> 2023-03-10 09:31:55 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511595197 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511595511 My studies help, not helps ]]> 2023-03-10 09:32:13 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511595511 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511595650 A portfolio with some personal projects related to skills in informatics or in business. Extra that he already said.]]> 2023-03-10 09:32:20 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511595650 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511595790 I wouldn't  write in detail about the difficult customers, but instead just mention that you have relevant experience in sales and customer help]]> 2023-03-10 09:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511595790 https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511596096 ‘If you want, you can have a look at my CV …’  is more polite than ‘find my CV …’]]> 2023-03-10 09:32:48 UTC https://padlet.com/donatalisaite/oxang21mxq4919df/wish/2511596096