Ten: Whole Text Study (PAIR work) by Ashley SK Tan

Instructions

ashley_tan_sk — 2017-07-11 02:53:45 UTC

I cover my face with my hands. I cannot bear to watch.

I peep through the cracks between my fingers. I have to watch.

I go all limp with fear, like a player feigning injury to waste a few extra seconds of the time remaining in a game.

1. Join sentences from line 77 - 80 using suitable connectors.
2. Which sentences are more effective (the combined ones or the short repetitive ones)? Why?

E.g. (name1) & (name2)

ashley_tan_sk — 2017-07-11 02:54:10 UTC

1. I cover my face with my hands as I cannot bear to watch.

2. The sentences are more effective because...

Mabel & Jarren & Domini c

2017-07-11 04:34:59 UTC

1) Maya covers her face with her hands and can't bear to watch.
2) Maya peeps through the cracks between her fingers but she has to watch.
3) Maya goes all limp with fear, just like a player feigning injury to waste a few extra seconds of the time remaining in a game.

Carys and Yi Fei

2017-07-11 04:35:13 UTC

a)I covered my face with my hands, as I can't bear to watch.
I peep through the cracks between my fingers since I have to watch.

Wen Hui and Xiang Lin

2017-07-11 04:35:24 UTC

1. I cover my face with my hands as I am scared and fearful to watch.
2. I peep though the cracks between my fingers as I must watch or I will miss one of the penalty kicks.
3. I go all limp with fear, as if a player pretending to be hurt to waste the last few seconds

Felicia and Kayzier

2017-07-11 04:35:28 UTC

I cover my face as I cannot bear to watch I go all limp with fear,like a player feigning injury to waste a few extra seconds of the time

I peep through the cracks between my fingers because I have to watch

Jason and Kaiyi

2017-07-11 04:35:29 UTC

1I cover my face with my hands as I cannot bear to watch. I peep through the cracks between my fingers because I have to watch. I go all limp with fear, like a player feigning injury to waste a few extra seconds of the time remaining in a game.
2)

Navanshi and Ezanne

2017-07-11 04:35:29 UTC

1) I cover my with my hands because I cannot bear to watch. I peep through the cracks of my fingers but I have to watch. I go all limp with fear like a player feigning injury to waste a few extra seconds of the time remaining in a game.

2) We think that the short repetitive ones are more effective as they keep the re

Joel and Jiale

2017-07-11 04:35:31 UTC

I peep through the crack between my fingers, as i have to watch.

I cover my face with my face i cannot bear to watch.

Xian Yun and Bokai

changxianyun — 2017-07-11 04:35:37 UTC

1) I cover my face with my hands as I could not bear to watch, since I have gone all limp with fear like a player feigning injury to waste a few extra seconds of the time remaining in game, but I still peep through the cracks between my fingers while telling myself I have to watch.
2) The combined sentences are more effective. Though they are slightly longer than short repetitive sentences, the sentences provide a great usage of connectors and gives more information than short repetitive sentences.

Wei Ming and

2017-07-11 04:35:37 UTC

1) I cover my face because I could not bear to watch.

I peep through the cracks between my fingers as I have to watch what happens.

I go all limp with fear as if I was like a player feigning injury to waste a few extra seconds of time remaining in a game

2)The combined sentences are more effective. As it gives more information

Kaelyn & Jaymee

2017-07-11 04:35:41 UTC

I peep through the cracks between my fingers and I go all limp with fear, just like a player feigning injury to waste a few extra seconds of the time remaining in a game.

Princeton, Chien Ying and Julian.

2017-07-11 04:35:47 UTC

I cover my face with my hands as i cannot bear to watch but I peep through the cracks between my fingers

Archer and Danial

2017-07-11 04:35:47 UTC

1) I cover my face with my hands and i could not bear to watch as I have gone all limp with fear like a player feigning injury to waste time.
2) The short repetitive ones. It is easier to read and understand

Timothy & Jed

2017-07-11 04:35:52 UTC

I cover my face with my hands as I cannot bear to watch. However, I peep through the cracks between my fingers. I have to watch.I go all limp with fear, just like a plyer feigning injury to waste a few extra

Pearlyn & Wan Qin

toh_wan_qin — 2017-07-11 04:36:18 UTC

I cover my face with my hands not bearing to watch, while spying through the tiny holes my hands have left knowing that I still have to watch, as fear flooded

Jonas and Tiang Yeow

tang_zuo_zi_jonas — 2017-07-11 04:37:26 UTC

I cover my face with my hands but i cannot bear to watch

Elisha and Ning xun

2017-07-11 04:39:29 UTC

I cover my face with my hands as I cannot bear to watch.

2017-07-11 07:19:06 UTC