To avoid being too descriptive in writing use the PEA structure and use evidence to support a balanced argument. Using and applying evidence to support the viewpoint. Rather than simply providing evidence without applying it.

Use your box plan to categorise paragraphs using the PEA method to lay out your structure. Ensure you have covered all revenant points and you have stuck to your source.

Make sure you have given your balanced argument to the reader with every bit of detail. Ensure you have analysed your point and evidence clearly and back up your point using a balanced argument.

2, Have you used reliable and credible sources for the work.

Using the PEA paragraphs ensures that you are not being too descriptive. This gives you the opportunity to balance your argument and provide evidence to back it up.

Always use for and against

Promote evidence using references

Argue the case with evidence

Do not waffle make it clear .

2 • Do lots of further reading

1 • Do not waffle ! - try to be objective

Use reliable sources when referencing

Use PEA paragraphs

use your box plan and stick to it. short topic sentence, link for evidence, as little bullets for evidence.

Use third person correct language

Use x2 evidence for every point made

Don't say too much stick to point keep it clear

Don't use I, we etc

1. Conciseness. Avoid 'descriptive' language and focus on telling a POINT, not a STORY.

1. Avoid being to descriptive by ensuring your points have good sourcing and referencing. Make sure they engage and add to the academic debate through evidence based discussion rather than simply describing someone else's point.

2. Focus on the language I use in my work, to ensure it remains critical and academic.

3. Make sure to use reliable sources your arguments.