https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z Under each column, give a final score to each essay and a brief explanation as to how your group made your evaluation. Please write your group members' names in the subject line! en-us 2023-08-28 16:10:32 UTC 2023-08-28 18:40:35 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675534747 Our group gave this essay a 4 since the thesis and points made were very clear and established, however it was extremely repetitive and lacked creative skill. ]]> 2023-08-28 18:37:14 UTC https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675534747 https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675535134 Our group gave this essay a 5 she had a strong thesis and a lot of specific evidence. She didn't have any nuance or broader perspectives to earn the 6th point.]]> 2023-08-28 18:37:38 UTC https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675535134 https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675535173 Our group gave this essay a 3/6. We thought that this writer gave a lot of evidence but did not connect it back to their thematic statement or the prompt. ]]> 2023-08-28 18:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675535173 https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675535206 2023-08-28 18:37:42 UTC https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675535206 https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675535270 Our group gave this essay a 4 because the evidence was clearly stated. There was also a lot of repetition in the commentary which costs her one of the points. The essay could have had more depth. ]]> 2023-08-28 18:37:45 UTC https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675535270 https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675536017 We gave this essay a score of 3. There is a thesis, however the conclusion does not connect back to it. The commentary is limited, and only touches on the basics of her points. She only briefly mentions familial hierarchy, and societal expectations, rather than explaining them thoroughly. ]]> 2023-08-28 18:38:29 UTC https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675536017 https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675536491 Our group gave this essay a 4 because her thesis was present and she had evidence. Her commentary lacked substance and was confusing to read. ]]> 2023-08-28 18:38:55 UTC https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675536491 https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675536693 Our group gave this essay a 3 since the paper failed to give clear and extensive details, lacked a specific thesis, and was just overall generic and lacked professionalism and advanced writing skills. ]]> 2023-08-28 18:39:08 UTC https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675536693 https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675536791 We gave this one a 4 because they did have a good thesis and great evidence from the book, but lacked in sophistication. Although they were good points, they were very repetitive and the order of them didn't flow very well. The commentary was the same for multiple examples that could have been condensed into less paragraphs and flowed better.]]> 2023-08-28 18:39:13 UTC https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675536791 https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675537089 2023-08-28 18:39:31 UTC https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675537089 https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675537445 Our group gave this essay a 6/6. This essay received the sophistication point because it situates the work in a broader context while also connecting her points to her thesis statement. There was also clear commentary and eloquent connections.]]> 2023-08-28 18:39:51 UTC https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675537445 https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675537986 In the second essay our group decided to give the writer a 3 because it was mainly summary and repetitive. She had good points but didn't back it up well enough and instead reiterated herself they whole time. But at least her hand writing was nice.]]> 2023-08-28 18:40:25 UTC https://padlet.com/steph_faucette/ovtyz8wttmvdxl4z/wish/2675537986