FOURTH by Jennifer Lee https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc Made with a lightning strike of genius en-us 2018-03-06 16:08:00 UTC 2018-03-06 16:46:00 UTC hello@padlet.com Ryan Demit https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238706335 Make Longer
Describe more]]> 2018-03-06 16:19:08 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238706335 Mona Mahdavi connermartin11 https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238706693 Run on sentences
Use Quotes

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Incorrect MLA Format ]]> 2018-03-06 16:19:37 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238706729 Matthew Peuster https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238706738 Transition Statements

MLA Format

]]> 2018-03-06 16:19:38 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238706738 Logan Allen 2000120510 https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238707294 Blend quotes
Add transitions]]> 2018-03-06 16:20:30 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238707294 Makayla Weaver makaylaweaver4 https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238707310 Run on sentences 
MLA format
Add transition sentence 
Make it a bit longer

]]> 2018-03-06 16:20:32 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238707310 David Kramer 2000098179 https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238709012 MLA Heading
In text citations]]> 2018-03-06 16:22:57 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238709012 Shaye Polk https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238709415 Blend paragraphs
Make sentences flow better ]]> 2018-03-06 16:23:32 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238709415 Brooke Falcone brookefalcone https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238710336 Don't say their name so much
Use 12 point font]]> 2018-03-06 16:24:47 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238710336 Gabby LeTourneau 11002782612 https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238710423 less opinions; more facts 

]]> 2018-03-06 16:24:56 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238710423 Grant Moelter 11002770481 https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238710551 run on sentences
punctuation]]> 2018-03-06 16:25:04 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238710551 Lily Hall 1100300823 https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238711850 MLA format
Make sure thesis goes with the body paragraphs]]> 2018-03-06 16:26:43 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238711850 Mark Van De Water https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238715291 Add sources at the bottom 
Include in text citations in MLA format
Add last body paragraph and conclusion]]> 2018-03-06 16:30:59 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238715291 Annastacia Regnier https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238721741 Double Space in the MLA format.
Instead of using their names every time change some to pronouns.]]> 2018-03-06 16:39:08 UTC https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238721741 Max Haag 1100277230 https://padlet.com/leejy2/ovirp3x06coc/wish/238724698 Add more facts about your person
Get into deeper detail

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add more transitions
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