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         <title>Read: The Parts of a Thesis Statement</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Parts of a Thesis Statement</strong></div><div>A thesis sentence has to contain two parts:<br><br></div><ol><li>Topic – What the essay is about.</li><li>Angle – Your idea about the topic. This second part, your <strong>idea/insight/claim/argument</strong> about a topic, is the important characteristic in creating a thesis sentence for a college essay. The angle makes a promise to your reader about your insight into, claim, or logical argument about the topic. Your angle in your thesis sentence indicates and controls what the rest of the essay will be about.</li></ol>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-18 23:59:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Instructions:</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>1.</strong> <strong>View</strong> the video on How to "Write a Strong Thesis Statement."<br><strong>2</strong>. <strong>Read</strong> "Parts of a Thesis Statement" <br><strong>3</strong>. <strong>Write</strong> one thesis statement that contains both the topic and the controlling idea. <br><strong>4.</strong> <strong>Optional</strong>: (You can copy the post from the discussion board about your purpose, audience and the general topic.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 00:26:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Rita Chan</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><br>The thesis statement:&nbsp;<br>Restful sleep is very important because some people seem to neglect a sleeping habit that is totally affected your immune system and your physical health condition.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 01:37:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Harold Cruz</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong><mark>Thesis Statement:</mark></strong><br>"Knowing the Origin of Life the human beings will understand the mechanisms of how the cell works, therefore the cure of many illnesses can be found"</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 01:39:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tsae Li Kao </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The thesis statement: Reading can improve your concentration, open your mind, help you relax, improve your memory, make you sleep better, and make you the person you should be.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 01:43:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ginger</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/transitiontocollege1/ovhbp1pwe9i2m2j2/wish/2346176735</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Traveling can not only let you enjoy the scenery, but also help you learn about different cultures which contain a lot of interesting knowledge such as language, architecture, food, people, etc. <br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 01:48:07 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>The first five years are crucial for kids.</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Magda</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 01:49:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Mariano Valdovinos</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong><br>My purpose:</strong> Help people concentrate better while studying for a test by listening to classical music.<br><br></div><div><strong>My audience:</strong> People having trouble focusing when learning a new concept or studying for a test.<br><br></div><div><strong>My general Topic:</strong> Benefits of classical music in learning.<br><br></div><div><strong>Thesis Statement:</strong> Listening to classical music helps people focus and relax when studying for a test or learning a new concept.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 01:51:48 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Oksana from Ukraine</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><br>My purpose: How you can stay resourceful and in balance&nbsp;<br><br></div><div><br>My audience: For people who have mental-health problems<br><br></div><div><br>My general topic: If you work more than you rest, your body does not have time to restore strength and the resource state is disturbed.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 01:53:00 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Tony Yu</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>My purpose: More and more people can realize the importance of the health.<br><br></div><div>My audience: The people who don't care their health but focus on earning money only.<br><br></div><div>My general topic: Health is always the priority for us.<br><br></div><div>The thesis statement: No matter how successful you are in your career, no matter how rich you are in your asset, health is always the priority for you.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 01:55:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aria Toryalai </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The Thesis statement&nbsp;<br>War side effects&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>My purpose:Because I suffered from this condition.<br><br></div><div>My audience:people how are living in war.<br><br></div><div>The war in developing countries has significant Side effect on the new generation’s mental health &nbsp;.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 02:00:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Mary Z</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The thesis statement: Learning English writing is crucial for any immigrates because writing can help them developing skills in listening, speaking, and&nbsp; reading even thorough someone may disagree. &nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 02:00:43 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Maksym Zaiets</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>My purpose</strong>: Help people get success in your own brand-development<br><strong>My audience</strong>:&nbsp; Fast-learned and ambitious high-tech entrepreneur <br><strong>My general topic</strong> is organizing your own business, adding IT tools, and automating your storage and orders. <br><strong>The thesis statement</strong>: Importance of creating the brand and business scaling by adding software to make it easy and examples of automating.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 02:00:47 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sofya Sakhaeva</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis statement. Reading, analyzing and writing mathematical theorems and definitions in a notebook is very important for a deep understanding of mathematics.</div><div>My purpose was to teach humanities students mathematics.</div><div>My target audience was students of the humanities.</div><div>When I taught mathematics to students at the University of Culture and Arts, I tried to convey to this audience how important it is to write detailed mathematical calculations for understanding certain sections of mathematics. Many students of non-mathematical specialties do not want to write theoretical material on such branches of mathematics as integral calculus, differential calculus, mathematical statistics and others. However, when you write mathematical definitions, several types of memory work in your head at once and logical connections are born. Then the students begin to decide consciously. And only in this case there is a memorization and understanding of the material for a long time. Mathematical material remains in memory and, if necessary, students can apply this material to solve mathematical problems.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 02:03:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title> Linh</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><br><br><strong>My purpose: </strong>The benefit of reading.&nbsp; <br><strong>My audience:</strong> ESL students.&nbsp; &nbsp; <br><strong>My general topic:</strong> Reading is one of the way learning English second languages. <br><br><strong>Thesis Statement</strong>: Reading&nbsp; can build vocabularies, open mind and be as pleasure.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 02:05:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Arturo</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis Statement:<br>Writing will improve our communication skills in both, written and spoken. By practicing, we will become better writers on a higher level.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 02:06:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Arminda</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis Statement: Violence in media provokes high negative behavior mainly in young people.<br>purpose: Identify harmful TV shows and games.<br>Audience: Parents and other adults.<br>General Topic: Avoiding violence</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 02:08:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>My purpose :How to laser help us in or life</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>My Audience: my class students.<br>My general topic: explanation of laser applications<br><br>Applications of lasers in our daily life.<br>Lasers are involved in almost all aspects of these fields,<br>from “light shows”to compact Disc(CDs) and digital videos Discs (DVDs) to special effects in the movies.Some other commonplace application of lasers are as Laser pointers ,barcode scanner, laser printer , precision medical and industrial instrument and etc.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-19 02:12:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis statement,&nbsp;<br>obviously a thesis statement should be very clear, for reader, for instance a thesis statement,&nbsp;start with Topic, Goal, Objective Martial and Methods, and every part need to be analysis and interpret.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-11-03 02:55:09 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Serova Ekaterina</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Thesis statement.<br>When time comes, and problem can not be avoided anymore, we have to leave all fears behind, find courage and fight to win, just as firefighters.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-11-25 19:37:59 UTC</pubDate>
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