Strategic planning - Abi Eng LK by Janene van Pletsen https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj Begin with the end in mind! en-us 2021-04-13 08:22:05 UTC 2025-10-30 15:35:39 UTC hello@padlet.com Begin with the end in mind janenevanpletsen1 https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1410936836 2021-04-13 08:28:58 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1410936836 Plan should include(Post 1) janenevanpletsen1 https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1410939022 A clear outline of the structure (pararagraphs) of the text
The topic and concluding sentences
Bulleted points of key content
AFB 2 - Line references

** Use a separate page for your planning to make referring to it easier **]]> 2021-04-13 08:29:37 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1410939022 Write with the end in mind janenevanpletsen1 https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1410956463 0:41 - 2:38]]> 2021-04-13 08:36:12 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1410956463 Minimum 6 strategic moves Ms Vp wants to see in this text type! janenevanpletsen1 https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1410983057 2021-04-13 08:40:02 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1410983057 Plan janenevanpletsen1 https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411309937 2021-04-13 11:01:34 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411309937 Outline https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411396768 -sources: ´Countries are not doing enough to keep earths temperature drom rising to near catastrophic levels, a UN report says' 
Author: Scottie Andrew
Published on 11/26/2019 on CNN

'Turning carbon dioxide into cash' by Roger Harrabin, published on June 24th 2019 on BBC News

-both texts are excerpts from articles 

-what information will be outlined: the measures recommended to reduce carbon dioxide emissions (text 1 and text 2)

-measures referred to in CNN article: 
higher commitement of countries to reduce cO2 emissions  (according to WMO and UN)
-creating better emission standards, promoting public transportation
-penalizing big CO2 emitters through carbon rates
-using renewable energies
-involving society 

Measures referred to in BBC article:
-turning CO2 into products, using it as valuable resource
-increase in products with less CO2 emissions or by using up more CO2 than emitting it (name the three mentioned success stories)


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Article 1 sources:
  • Title: “Countries are not doing enough to keep Earth’s temperature from rising to near- catastrophic levels, a UN report says” 
  • Author: Scottie Andrew
  • Published: CNN, Nov. 26, 2019
Article 2 sources: 
  • Title: “Turning carbon dioxide into cash”
  • Author: Roger Harrabin
  • Published: BBC, June 24, 2019
- Compare the means used in the CNN and BBC articles

Body

Paragraph 1 CNN
Introductory sentence (analyze which means the author has used)
Devices:
  • line of argument 
  • title
  • use of numbers and statistics/expert opinion (l.12)
  • emotive language
Concluding sentence (above devices underline urgency)

Paragraph 2 BBC
Introductory sentence (analyze and compare which means the author has used)
Devices:
  • line of argument
  • title
  • subtitles (l.25)
  • successful examples (l. 30)
Comparison of both texts
Concluding sentence (Devices underline positive solutions)

Conclusion
  • similarities/differences in other words
  • BBC article: highlights ideas/positive points
  • CNN article: focusses on facts 

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Main Information
Author's Opinion:
- Analog media balances out increased usage of digital

Body
- Structure:
- Fascination with digital >  Downsides of increased usage + Facts > Increase of analog media (examples) = Solution (Balance)
- more relatable for the readers (fascination and downsides, need for balance)

Personal Pronouns:
- title, ll.1-2, l.15
- justifies his pov by connecting it to his personal experience

Comparison:
- l.53
- shows the advantage of analog

Conclusion
- use of clear structure, personal pronouns, and many stylistic devices to underline his opinion
- makes it relatable to the readers

]]> 2021-04-13 11:43:01 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411407582 The 6 most important strategies for writing an outline/Assessment criteria https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411437104 -objectivity, no personal opinion or pronouns
-use own words
-no repetitions
-no unessecary details, only the  information referring to the task
-write less than about one third of the original text 
-change direct into indirect speech]]> 2021-04-13 11:53:45 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411437104 The all importance of climate protection https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411451700 Introduction
- topic: climate change, climate goals
- sources: Scottie Andrew CNN "Countries are not doing enough to keep Earth's temperature from rising to 
near -catastrophic levels, a UN report says" 26 Nov. 2019
- quote: “Climate protection and adaptation
investments 
will become a precondition 
for peace and stability [...]
.”
-context: report of the WMO states to double efforts, in arcticle solutions are presented
-personal position: climate affects everthing f.ex. food, ppl do anything to survive -> war

Body
Ppl of the opposition say that.... i however think that....
 P1: common suffering brings people together
P2: Already enough money invested in alternative research for uses of Co2 nothing came out of it
P3: renewable energies would be way more expensive than coal ect.

Concl.
- climate change is a sensitive topic, but should be more prioritised and reserch should be publicly supported
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 Title:"our love affair with digital is over"
 Source:"New York Times" online
 Author: David Sax
 Date: November 18. 2017
 Topic: In the article David Sax reflects on the impacts, negative and positive, the growing use of digital media has one the population and how it affects our view on analog media

Main part:
digital media associates with dependance, recounts beginning digital age, happy almost romantic feeling towards dogital media
-Years later says public warry of social media and dogital media
-Dont trust into smartphones and social media
-people scared of shutting off not very likely to happenin future
-becoming more balanced with analog interests again
-younger generations interested in analog media such as vinyl etc 
-more costly but adds to quality of life

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1. introduction sentence relating to the task
2. relate to the question / keep the task in mind
3. 3 seperate paragraphs
4. structure (topic/concl. sentence)
5. no personal pronouns 
6. close analysis


]]> 2021-04-13 12:02:27 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411462730 Assessment criteria https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411465368
Clear register 

Arguments  supported by 3 sub- arguments, facts , examples 

patagraphing

Personal opinion but in general a formal language

Strong conclusion]]> 2021-04-13 12:03:21 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411465368 Discussion https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411504833
Introduction:
- Source details (cartoonist, publishing date, etc.)
- Message of the cartoon
- what will be the following task

Body:
First paragraph: PRO
Topic sentence: Digital media has a positive impact on several aspects of our lives.
Subarguments/facts/evidence:
  • connecting people 
  • Cultural exchange
  • Working fast and more efficient
Concluding sentence: All in all, you can say that the role digital media plays in our everyday lives comes with a lot of positive change.

Second paragraph: CON
Topic sentence: On the other hand digital media brings a lot of damage and responsibility in the modern world.
Subarguments/facts/evidence:
  • Fake news and manipulation
  • Anxiety and depression
  • Constant confrontation with a screen represented in all ages and in every activity
  • Climate change
Concluding sentence: In conclusion, digital media has several negative aspect that we need to face everyday which causes a lot of problems.

Conclusion:
To conclude, I came to the point that the question is not to decide if we should rather live in an analog or digital world but to find a healthy balance for ourselves and society.
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  • Structure: Introduction, Body/two paragraphs (pro or con),Conclusion
  • Body: One Argument with at least 3 sub-arguments (referring to material that support your arguments)
  • Conclusion: You can use personal pronouns
  • Use your own knowledge about the topic
  • Linking words (connect ideas and sentences in a convincing way

    • ]]>     2021-04-13 12:15:33 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411505080     Assessment criteria https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411552174
  • Only refer to passages/scenes that are relevant to the comparison
  • Close analysis
  • Linking words
  • Quotation
    • ]]>     2021-04-13 12:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411552174     Strategies https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411565708 1. subjective tone
    2. emotive language
    3. topic/ substantiate, reference the text + personal opinion
    4. comment on the opposition!!! And justify with 3 examples]]>     2021-04-13 12:32:37 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1411565708     Plan janenevanpletsen1 https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1413422858 text - speech
    operator - assess = discuss
    audience - Write a speech for the UN Youth Parliament
    register - neutral to formal

    Introduction:
    Greeting
    Topic -  assess the role media (analog and digital) coverage of climate change and its effects plays in changing people’s attitudes towards the environment 
    Overview of PRO and CON position

    Paragraph 1: CON
    - Role of fake news (e.g. Fox News - Trump)
    - Facts replaced by subjective opinion (e.g. algorithms)
    -  Science undermined ( e.g. conspiracy theories)


    Paragraph 2: PRO
    - Increased awareness
    Co2 producing 
    -companies/countries held accountable
    -Increase in action/protest by interest groups
    -Changing legislation on national and international groups


    Conclusion:
    While recognise CONS the PROS outweigh them

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    Use at least 5 stylistic devices as much as possible ( e.g. anaphora, enumeration, contrast, emotive language and alliteration) ]]>     2021-04-13 18:26:06 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1413422858     6 Strategic moves janenevanpletsen1 https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1413487621
    Keep balanced objective tone required by this operator (assess = discuss)

    Use stylistic + rhetorical devices

    Structured use of paragraphs

    Write clear topic and concluding sentences

    Pro and con position outlined

    Persuasive conclusion were I take a stand and state my postion.


    ]]>     2021-04-13 18:39:33 UTC https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1413487621     Plan janenevanpletsen1 https://padlet.com/janenevanpletsen1/ov5cx8g6nbkazmpj/wish/1413513289 text - article
    audience -  international youth project website on human migration in the 21st century
    register - neutral formal
    reason -
    present initiatives which promote integration in their countries. 
    outline the information on the two initiatives introduced in the articles by Katharina Pfannkuch and Christine Eichelmann.

    Headline: German initiatives promoting integration

    Introduction:
    Introduction of topic and reason for writing
    2 x Source details + translated titles
     

    Paragraph 1: 
    - YouTube channel "Deutschland für Anfänger" = Germany for beginners
    - initiators two volunteers: German woman and immigrant from Syria
    - aim: providing explanations in German about everyday life, translated into Arabic, to help refugees 
    - contents of YouTube clips: practical issues of life in Germany and cultural differences compared to refugees’ home countries
    - reasons for initiative: refugees not allowed to attend language and integration classes before being granted legal status, they often lack German acquaintances and are left to their own devices

    Paragraph 2:
    - "Über den Tellerand kochen" = cooking beyond boundaries
    - founded by young Germans, initially students’ project for Berlin university competition with the prize-winning publication of recipe booklet
    - due to booklet’s success professionalized project: cooking classes for a fee with growing team of refugees as chefs including recipe cards, presentation of refugees’ home countries and shared meal
    - participants: Berliners with different backgrounds from all boroughs
    - impact: reducing prejudices, barriers and exploring new worlds through cooking

    Conclusion:
    Both are exciting initiatives that help refugees aim to intergrate successfully


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