THE MYSTERIOUS SIMPSONS by Ünal Arabacı https://padlet.com/unal_arbc_80/oul27bslmyju Be late but not be hard en-us 2018-10-21 14:48:16 UTC 2026-01-12 20:46:01 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png THEMYSTERIOUS SIMPSONS unal_arbc_80 https://padlet.com/unal_arbc_80/oul27bslmyju/wish/295187338 The Simpsons is the most famous TV series in the world (I think). People like them. Even teenagers watch them too. Because the subject is a family life. And it's so funny. It has continued since 1989. Some people say " The Simpsons is seeing the future ". For example, recently it knew Donald trump will be president and so on. If you ask me, i think, it's true. And all of these make it the most famous TV series.
 
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]]> 2018-10-21 14:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/unal_arbc_80/oul27bslmyju/wish/295187338 My comments senaevren https://padlet.com/unal_arbc_80/oul27bslmyju/wish/295380166 To begin with, thanks for the fun topic.
Topic sentence: you can state I think at the beginning, no worries. Also, you can focus on its 'popular' notion; but this one is OK.
Supporting sentences: Firstly, Funny (add one example), Secondly surprising&dazzling (Donald Trump example). It is better to explain point by point by using connectors and giving examples for each.
Concluding sentence: You summarized the whole paragraph, well-done!

Some mistakes:
...watch them too because the subject.... (there cannot be any punctuation -. , ; :- before because)
it has been continuing... (use present perfect continuous if it still continues:)
..is seeing the future.... (use simple present 'sees' with some verbs such as see, smell hear taste etc.)


In a nutshell, this is your first trial and it looks nice. Only try to adhere the rules for how to write a descriptive paragraph and write more supports. Go on! :)]]> 2018-10-22 11:17:05 UTC https://padlet.com/unal_arbc_80/oul27bslmyju/wish/295380166