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      <pubDate>2016-12-02 09:30:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Some positive feedback and ideas that we received from our peers was the following :</title>
         <author>Badruddin</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/Badruddin/ougivfk0pbim/wish/141327529</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. Good research <br><br>2.Very detailed <br><br>3.Interesting ideas <br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-12-02 09:32:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>We did also receive some improvements from our peers:</title>
         <author>Badruddin</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/Badruddin/ougivfk0pbim/wish/141328034</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. Too much detail <br><br>2. How would we present and prove we created the bruisers with makeup and the process</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-12-02 09:36:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>My opinion:</title>
         <author>Badruddin</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/Badruddin/ougivfk0pbim/wish/141328680</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>In my opinion our pitch was effective and well presented. All the members of my group help plan and we all worked together to get our pitch to the expectations we had.We all prepared the pitch tasks we were assigned to and also presented it giving detail and explaining it well.  Our pitch was clear and straight to the point and we didn't waffle about each pitch task.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-12-02 09:40:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Targets:</title>
         <author>Badruddin</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/Badruddin/ougivfk0pbim/wish/141329017</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div><br>We received feedback from our teacher Louisa says that in our title sequence we are telling too much information and we should cut off the last couple scenes.&nbsp; Also we were told the audience will become disconnected from our sequence as theres to much information to process and they will also become disinterested. We also received feedback from Louisa saying we should end with a 'one year ago' blackout.This will make the audience more engage with the title sequence and create some sort of mystery .To improve on our other target our group will show evidence of the bruisers on our main actress. Faiza will be in charge of doing the makeup and she will create time lapse of the process of the make up being done.Also she will create a tutorial of how she achieved the overall outcome.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2016-12-02 09:42:08 UTC</pubDate>
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