Much Re-make, Such Wow. Sick Book. by Matthew McKnight https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke Remake of Book, Breathing Underwater. en-us 2016-01-12 16:08:22 UTC 2024-09-12 04:22:25 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/93036340/136efa8d801066fec64d5c7d2e1c5b0f6027e645/75262b5ccece66c15a84bd7b9b4fe719.png 1) Conflict much solved? Such Conflict. Do explain.  77729 https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke/wish/88910605 The conflict of this story was Nick Andres 16 year old child. Went to highschool, was really popular had a lot of friends. He met this girl named Caitlyn McCourt. He fell in love with her instantly, They soon started going out. She thought she found the love of her life, what she really didn't know was his past and his anger. His father was highly abusive and soon he became abusive, both physical and emotionally. He would call her terrible names.

]]> 2016-01-12 16:14:01 UTC https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke/wish/88910605 2) Much Potential. Sources of Conflict. Sequel?  77729 https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke/wish/89597443 The potential sources of conflict for a sequel is Nick should go for Caitlin. He should try his hardest to show her he is a changed man. That he has gone to classes, and has controlled his anger. He should fight for her, and not let her slip away between his fingers. He had a grip on her and now he is losing it. He should go for her and do all in his power to make it up to her.

]]> 2016-01-15 16:00:39 UTC https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke/wish/89597443 3) Dialogue formatted? How so? 77729 https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke/wish/89598922 Nick finds out where Caitlin's dad's house is.

He sits outside her house for over a hour thinking about what he is going to say, if he should go to the door, what would she say, he was thinking about taking off and forgetting about the whole idea but he drove over 3 and 1/2 hours.

After some time he gets the courage to walk up to her door and knocks three times.

the door is opened and standing in the door way was this tall, bulky, freshly shaved, suit and tie wearing man. He spoke with in a deep voice

"Hello? How can I help you?

"H-h-i-i my name is N-nick, Is Caitlin home?" Nick stuttered.

"NO! Go away" Screamed Caitlin.

"I just want to talk to you" Said Nick.

"Go away, I never wanna see you again" Caitlin yelled.

Nick said " Please just hear me out, after that ill never speak with you again"

WHO KNOWS HOW THIS WILL TURN OUT.

]]> 2016-01-15 16:06:01 UTC https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke/wish/89598922 4) Such Outcome. Logical? Much Story. Cool End. 77729 https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke/wish/89602384 The most logical outcome after the story ends is after a long amount of searching Nick finds out where Caitlin has been living at. He shows up at her house tempting every choice he has ever made up to this moment knowing this will be his hardest one yet. After he confronts her and her dad, and a bunch of yelling they finally talk. Caitlin see's the truth in Nick's eyes and forgives him.

]]> 2016-01-15 16:19:31 UTC https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke/wish/89602384 5) Much Suspense? use sensory. Carry Tone/Mood. 77729 https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke/wish/89603429 Nick joins the Navy, after being sent away to war on terror. He gets a letter finding out how Caitlin is pregent with octuplets.

]]> 2016-01-15 16:23:38 UTC https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke/wish/89603429 It is very good and detailed you did a good job and you just need a few more details and your good im proud of you 77789 https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke/wish/93511038 2016-02-05 16:31:38 UTC https://padlet.com/77729/otdo72mnqke/wish/93511038