https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani en-us 2021-11-18 01:36:34 UTC 2021-11-30 19:50:06 UTC hello@padlet.com npwmwmzpx8 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1898385001 It was my first project on which i started working on in this course and learned about technical reading and writing skills. For this project i worked on Drager Oxylog Ventilator]]> 2021-11-18 01:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1898385001 npwmwmzpx8 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1898390394 I am Hariom Godhani, 3rd Year York university student pursuing ITEC Major and currently enrolled in WRIT 2201 Course which is helping me in learning effective technical writing.]]> 2021-11-18 01:58:51 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1898390394 npwmwmzpx8 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1898399539 This project was focused on both technical writing as well as taking illustrative photos to explain the reader how to fix things accurately.]]> 2021-11-18 02:03:31 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1898399539 npwmwmzpx8 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1899999610
SEO

- Minor but important, Check Grammar and punctuation.
- Write concise and relevant information.
- Avoid using marketing strategy.
- Think from reader's perspective.
- Highlight keywords and keep title in bold fonts.
- Learn how search engines prioritize your website as per readers need.

Fast Fix

- Use small steps to explain the procedure.
- Write concise, relevant procedure.
- Don't include extra unnecessary steps.
- Use different bulletpoints.
- Use caution bulletpointer to mark most important step.

Photography Techniques for Fast Fix

Other than Writing skills this project also focused on illustrative photos of the procedure.
- Photos must be bright and clear.
- Use first person perspective.
- Background must be white or plain.
- Use markups to highlight important details.

Course eportfolio

- Organizing alot of information.
- Making a map that make sense to reader.
- Understanding reader's perspective.
- Combining all the skills and work learned in this course.
- Using different sticky notes, so we can arrange it easily.
- learned how to use softwares like this (Padlet).




]]> 2021-11-18 16:30:04 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1899999610 npwmwmzpx8 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1900005364 Writing a proposal was a important step for both the project works because we used to discuss for user-testing in class with people working on same projects to get relevant feedbacks and make changes before emailing to iFixit.

After getting feedbacks from user testing and making changes to the draft proposal, we need to email our draft to iFixit team and get their approval before moving on to next step and make changes if needed.]]> 2021-11-18 16:32:16 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1900005364 npwmwmzpx8 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1900074600 - Add informative titles.
- Write a meaningful short introduction, so user knows that they are at the correct place for what they are looking for.
- Don't forget to summarize/conclude your writing.
- Make checklist before starting your project because it helps you to keep everything on track and you will not miss essential parts.
- Good research is the key to write a best technical project.
- Get feedback from potential users.

]]> 2021-11-18 16:59:47 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1900074600 npwmwmzpx8 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1909407295 While writing email to iFixit make sure
- You match all the requirements and checklist before mailing them.
- Try to be formal and start with a good morning/evening, End with thank you.
- Include your professor in CC while mailing your proposals.
- Include Team tag in subject line.
- Send your proposals as PDF.

]]> 2021-11-23 23:22:15 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1909407295 npwmwmzpx8 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1909413852 It was quite difficult to select a topic for SEO Project because we needed to gather information on a medical device like ventilator which was not easy to start with and there was a list provided by iFixit of the devices which were not taken already. So i started sorting out 3 devices for me and tried to do some research on them and saw if there is quite good amount of concise and relevant materials found on net. I finally decided to work on Drager Oxylog 1000 which was a compact ventilator]]> 2021-11-23 23:29:16 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1909413852 npwmwmzpx8 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1909426542 For me this was the toughest part of the project, because selecting a topic for a repair/fix needed to be unique or one which was not done by someone else before. But i am an international student in Canada and i live in one small room so finding something broken or something to fix was quite impossible so i contacted my friend if he had some idea but then even he couldn't help and finally i had a printer at my place and thought about a fix that i always used when my ink Cartridge got dried and i guess every other person who owns a printer has this problem. So i got my topic to work on and started working on it.]]> 2021-11-23 23:44:53 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1909426542 npwmwmzpx8 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1909432401 - Selecting a topic 
- Researching relevant information
- Making rough points on paper]]> 2021-11-23 23:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1909432401 npwmwmzpx8 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1909544113 iFixit is a website whose goal is to help people and make them aware about increasing e-waste and help them to fix things and devices around them and provide with concise and relevant and valid information. In this course we became part of iFixit's initiative and did two projects one is SEO (Search Engine Optimization) in which we learned about how to make a useful device page and how the search engine works and the other project was Fast Fix Repair in which we made a guide using visual and writing skills to help reader repair the device they have been looking for.]]> 2021-11-24 01:18:44 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1909544113 npwmwmzpx8 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1909595995 After selecting topic for each project the next step is collecting and sorting information and doing research is the most important part of the project.
-Make rough notes.
- Make checklist for all the requirements by iFixit.
- Collect information from valid sources.
- Citing someone else work is the most important thing and is a good work ethics.

]]> 2021-11-24 01:51:54 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1909595995 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1921281698 Some of the info here is specific to communicating with iFixit. Readers won't know this! It would be helpful if you separated general points about email from specific points for iFixit.]]> 2021-11-30 19:43:10 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1921281698 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1921289406 It looks as though these are skills for communicating technical info in writing (be specific). The heading suggests the skills are from 'all' projects so it is not clear why you then separate the points by project! Overall, it looks as though the skills are listed in the order you thought of them. Can you make them easier for readers to follow by reorganizing them into a meaningful sequence or subgroups? (It is often helpful to use timelines to organize info - here, think about the order you might apply these skills in any project.)]]> 2021-11-30 19:47:32 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1921289406 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1921292419 the eportfolio is another project but you have tucked it under 'skills from both projects'.
It will be easier to construct and navigate your eportfolio if you organize it with a consistent structure based on projects or skills.]]> 2021-11-30 19:49:02 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1921292419 https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1921294408 Can you integrate these into the rest of your eportfolio so that they don't look like an afterthought?]]> 2021-11-30 19:50:04 UTC https://padlet.com/npwmwmzpx8/HariGodhani/wish/1921294408