Error Correction by Steph Bradley https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35 en-us 2023-07-18 07:12:50 UTC 2023-07-19 11:42:38 UTC hello@padlet.com Points transitiontales https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647105181 1 bonus point if you answer first.
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Some people believe that machine-made products are better and more important than handmade products. I disapprove of this point.
]]> 2023-07-18 11:26:56 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647152341 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647152654 Some people believe that machine-made products are better and more important than handmade products. However, I disagree with this point of view.]]> 2023-07-18 11:27:44 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647152654 incorrect https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647155000 2023-07-18 11:33:20 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647155000 2/ incorrect shanx810 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647156450 2023-07-18 11:37:15 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647156450 shanx810 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647156656 Compared with machine-made, handmade dumplings not only taste delicious, but also health safe.]]> 2023-07-18 11:37:49 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647156656 Compared to machine-made dumplings, handmade dumplings are not only delicious in taste but also safer for health. https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647156783 2023-07-18 11:38:09 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647156783 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647157101 Compare with the machine-made, handmade dumplings are not only tasting delicious, but also be good at health .]]> 2023-07-18 11:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647157101 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647159048 incorrect]]> 2023-07-18 11:44:22 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647159048 incorrect shanx810 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647159085 2023-07-18 11:44:29 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647159085 shanx810 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647160778 Now, Chinese traditional handmade products have become cultural heritage sites. When we create handmade products, we can design them ourselves and enjoy the freedom of development and growth in private, leading to new designs.

]]> 2023-07-18 11:48:53 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647160778 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647160824 Now Chinese traditional handmade products have become cultural heritage sites, when we going handmade products can through themselves design, create freedom, development and growth in private, creating a new design]]> 2023-07-18 11:49:02 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647160824 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647161124 Now, China's traditional handmade products have become cultural heritage sites. When we engage in creating handmade products, we can design them ourselves, fostering personal freedom, development, and growth, and creating new designs.]]> 2023-07-18 11:50:01 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647161124 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647162529 incorrect]]> 2023-07-18 11:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647162529 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647162594 incorrect]]> 2023-07-18 11:54:51 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647162594 incorrect shanx810 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647162867 2023-07-18 11:55:41 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647162867 shanx810 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647165043 During the production process, machine-based manufacturing often requires higher consumption of raw materials and energy, as well as potential emissions of wastewater and exhaust gases that can lead to environmental pollution. However, manual production is more economical and environmentally friendly.]]> 2023-07-18 12:00:06 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647165043 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647165185 ln the production process, machine production often requires more raw materials and energy, and may produce some waste water and exhaust gas, which can cause environmental pollution; however, manual production is more economical and environmentally friendly.]]> 2023-07-18 12:00:24 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647165185 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647165220

In the production process, machine production often requires more consumption of raw materials and energy, and may result in the emission of wastewater and exhaust gases, leading to environmental pollution. However, manual production is more economical and environmentally friendly.

]]> 2023-07-18 12:00:31 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647165220 incorrect https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647862393 2023-07-19 11:37:04 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647862393 incorrect shanx810 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647862468 2023-07-19 11:37:17 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647862468 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647862605 incorrect

]]> 2023-07-19 11:37:41 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647862605 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647863257 Firstly, handmade products have more emotion and love, This means that if someone made a gift with her own hand to somebody, there is a highly sincere gift for someone.]]> 2023-07-19 11:39:56 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647863257 shanx810 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647863337 Firstly, hand-made products carry more emotion and love. This means that someone has personally crafted a gift for somebody, resulting in a highly sincere gesture.]]> 2023-07-19 11:40:03 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647863337 https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647864026 Firstly, handmade products have more emotion and love, This means that if someone made a gift with her own hand to somebody, there is a sincere gift for someone.]]> 2023-07-19 11:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/transitiontales/os5tssx4ceudtf35/wish/2647864026