Atmosphere Model by Rhonda Henson

Gabe Aho

2017-09-12 16:58:14 UTC

make it look more realistic with better stickers

Paige M

2017-09-12 16:58:16 UTC

Me and Hannah G could make our model authentic by making it pop like the colors and make the model 3D.

Mercury

2017-09-12 16:58:37 UTC

We could make it three dimensional.

Jordan

2017-09-12 16:58:40 UTC

We could show how far away from the earth they are.

Jazlyn

2017-09-12 16:58:51 UTC

we could add more stickers that show more about the Earth

Hannah D

2017-09-12 16:59:00 UTC

We could make the model look 3d.

Barrett

2017-09-12 16:59:43 UTC

We could add more words and information about are atmosphere.

Mason

2017-09-12 17:00:57 UTC

by labeling how much air ther is in each layer

Britney M

2017-09-12 17:01:02 UTC

I think we could make our model more authentic by maybe showing which phere means what and how far away it is from earth.

Hannah G

2017-09-12 17:02:41 UTC

I think you could add more stickers.

Katelyn H

2017-09-12 17:44:17 UTC

How could we make our model more authentic, I think we could make our model more authentic by adding how far away it is from earth and add more realistic pictures to make it seem like it's real.

Guadalupe

2017-09-12 17:44:20 UTC

You could add more and make it look realistic and add some pictures and you could make it look 3D and it will look good.!

Ashira K.

2017-09-12 17:54:15 UTC

I think we could make it look more realistic.

thorne

2017-09-12 17:54:42 UTC

you could put the air peris.

Samuel C

2017-09-12 17:55:54 UTC

To make the model more authentic we could add clouds and show the air pressure in the layers.

Bryson

2017-09-12 17:57:41 UTC

I think we can make it more authentic by putting more detales in it.

I think to make models better, we should draw circles as layers and draw earth in the middle to make it more realistic. - Georgia

2017-09-12 17:57:49 UTC

Gracie L

2017-09-12 17:58:26 UTC

I think to make it more authentic we should make the stickers pop out and have like little people and see how far the ansturnots have traveled.

William B

2017-09-12 17:58:30 UTC

I think that to make this model more authentic we could color/sketch it better color wise to make it more believable because it kinda looks like a rainbow!

Madi

2017-09-12 17:58:56 UTC

I think we could make authentic by putting the measurements by the name.

Chloe t

2017-09-12 18:01:10 UTC

i think we can make it like we are in spaces.

Lea

2017-09-12 18:02:32 UTC

Having less coloring to do.

will

2017-09-13 13:06:30 UTC

If we could add the temperature then it would be beutimes because the people who looks at this will know the temperature.

Emily

24brackettemily — 2017-09-13 13:10:56 UTC

We could add temperature or mass to make it more authentic. We could do that so people know if they walked by that they can learn/ know

Myles

24stauffenekermyles — 2017-09-13 13:13:08 UTC

One thing you could do is mark the altitude of each layer using the notes.

Chloe Hines

2017-09-13 13:14:42 UTC

I think we should have less color to do and not make it a rainbow and I also think that we need more stickers to know what each layer is.

Isaac.A

2017-09-13 13:14:59 UTC

we can make stars or make the atmosphere thicker on the paper

Kylie

2017-09-13 13:16:06 UTC

I think that we should've added a lot of pictures and make it more detailed and making it more authentic is to make it neater and make it like it would pop out to others

Ethan :D

24coplestonethan — 2017-09-13 13:18:30 UTC

Probably we could color a little bit better. :P

Grant

2017-09-13 13:19:35 UTC

I think we could make it more authentic by coloring a little bit better and we could have done our measure more accurate.

Brandon

2017-09-13 13:20:34 UTC

I think we could add lighter color than just dark or medium color so we see the words.

colton

2017-09-13 13:23:24 UTC

we can put more detail and make it bigger

Debby

24gordindeborah — 2017-09-13 13:32:10 UTC

We could put the % or air and the the % of air pressure!

Chloe Bishop

2017-09-14 13:53:13 UTC

We could have made it like a sphere or circle because that is how it is in like real life so it would have been more realistic.

Klayton

2017-09-14 13:53:49 UTC

We could have added some more things like the air percent.

Elijah

2017-09-14 13:54:11 UTC

We can put like the clouds, and the moon, the stars, the sun, the earth,
and other planets.

Halle.A

24ahohalle — 2017-09-14 13:55:15 UTC

Use thicker paper and write down how much air pressure is in each area

Bryce

24leeabbigail — 2017-09-14 13:55:27 UTC

You could have made a circle paper and made it look more round plus maybe not rolling it up so it dosen't take that long to role something up.

Seth J

2017-09-14 13:55:49 UTC

I think we could add more detail in coloring the pictures and we should't have rushed also how high the altitude is

Seth

2017-09-14 13:56:01 UTC

I think me and Seth could improve are project by being more net with the colors and lining up with the yard stick better to be more accurate.

Katlyn S.

24shortkatlyn — 2017-09-14 13:56:04 UTC

I could have put where the air was more or less dense and figured out how much density it had.

Drake.L

24loudermilktyler — 2017-09-14 13:56:04 UTC

We could have colored it neater and made it were you can see the words see able.

Mackenzie P.

24pulliammackenzie — 2017-09-14 13:56:18 UTC

Thicker paper, lighter colors, and a different shape.

Jackson

24andersjackson — 2017-09-14 13:56:30 UTC

I think we could have measured it a little more accurate.

Mellia

24gravittchloe — 2017-09-14 13:56:37 UTC

I think we could of worked better on the northern lights. We scribbled. :) LOL j

TAYLOR DUNNING

2017-09-14 13:57:10 UTC

WELL WE COULD MAKE ALL THE GASES IN EACH LAYER ON THE STRIP INSTEAD OF LEAVING THE INSIDE BLANK

sarah

2017-09-14 14:58:31 UTC

I think we could have add more detail

SaNyah

2017-09-14 15:01:37 UTC

Umm I think we could maybe have like real pictures instead of stickers.

Aly

2017-09-15 17:53:27 UTC

We could make it pop out more and give it more color. We could also give it more stickers in each section.