Year 4 Descriptive Story Writing Board by Hursh Haria (HAR012 - 5SB) https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd Made with creativity en-us 2021-01-20 14:49:27 UTC 2025-01-21 20:01:17 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f44d.png coc200 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182200039 My story]]> 2021-02-09 14:08:31 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182200039 coc200 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182202534 2021-02-09 14:08:57 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182202534 coc200 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182204103 2021-02-09 14:09:12 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182204103 The Tigers Prey mil800 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182329458 I was strolling around the Amazon Jungle, hunting for some delicious food. I saw different animals as I walked past .I cut up leaves, they were wet and soggy so I decided to find some better smooth leaves.
As the night drew a grey cloak across the sky, I found myself scared 
as I did not know what to do. A damp, muddy path was right in front of me. I took a big breath and tiptoed on my way to the end of the mysterious path. 

When I got there I realised that there was a big den so I decided to sleep there for the night. As the morning came I woke up and my rucksack had gone. I searched that morning and there was no sign of it. I had searched everywhere and wondered where it could be. Horrifyingly, I heard a bush rattle. I screamed but no one heard me. 

“WHAT IS HAPPENING?” I shouted in horror but still no one heard Me. 
Eventually, a streak of  tigers ran out of the bush. One of them had my rucksack. “Give it back“ I shouted in an angry way. They did not give it back. I started running until I didn’t know where I was. I was Lost. 

It was a dark night that night and I had nightmares wondering what will happen next in this mysterious adventure. It was morning and I rushed deeper through the forest to find my way out. I rushed through the dark forest until I could see the tiger from the green rattling bush I was in.
Eventually, I jumped out of the bush and grabbed the rucksack. The tiger raced after me, I knew it was angry.  Horrifyingly, the tiger ran straight into the tree and then fell over. The tiger was out and I knew it wasn’t long til it was going to wake up. As fast as I could I rushed out of the forest and never came back again.

]]> 2021-02-09 14:29:25 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182329458 My story hug5001 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182335709 2021-02-09 14:30:26 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182335709 har012_2 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182825066 2021-02-09 15:45:47 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182825066 Brandon’s story yap200 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182825238 2021-02-09 15:45:49 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182825238 har012_2 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182826531 2021-02-09 15:46:02 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182826531 My story loc200 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182902346 2021-02-09 15:57:49 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182902346 Croc to the Job IshSachdev4HP https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182929326 2021-02-09 16:01:48 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1182929326 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1183423692 Aarav’s Snake Attack]]> 2021-02-09 17:15:31 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1183423692 Deven har014 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1183423855 Predator and Prey]]> 2021-02-09 17:15:33 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1183423855 Jaguar pat056 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1184293454  
As a black cloak engulfed the sky, Charles found himself covered in a mass of broken and disheveled twigs .The rain clattered down ,every drop sounded like gun shot, it crashed down on his face .Every step of the way there was a crunch of a leaf and then scuttling .The ivy was hanging  down hopelessly from the oaks and the cobwebs covered the trees.
 
Charles carried on trecking with just his small nike backpack and his blood red coat .His nerve level was rising really high .For one serious reason .Every few steps  there would a quite russel from behind him getting louder and louder.Charles‘s pace quickened as if he were running. After a while he slowed down .  
 
Suddenly, out of the shadows pounced .A jaguar .Two meters long with its long broad tail and a ferocious face with fangs  50 cm long .Charles was caught by surprise but instinctively lashed out with a karate move (he was a black belt at karate) .It caught the jaguar by surprise and it fell back unconscious.
 
Charles seized his chance and ran into the hollow of an oak tree .After a while the jaguar regained conciseness. It slowly got to its feet and started scouting around for him it .At one point it was right next to him. Charles could smell its rancid breath. Suddenly  he saw a spider on his hand. He would have screamed out to the whole world but this was a life or death situation ,so he stayed dead still until the jaguar carried on into the distance 
 
As he climbed out of the hollow, the jaguar pounced .It leaped onto him. Charles screamed for help as the jaguar dug its claws his shoulders .As if someone heard his calls a black panther bit the jaguar’s neck. Charles took his window of opportunity and pelted away from the viscous creatures. He ran like had he had never ran before ,his heart pounding. He didn’t stop until he came out of the jungle .                                                                                                                                                                                             By Sai Patel
]]> 2021-02-09 19:37:04 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1184293454 The Puma By Vivaan Obhrai 4HP. obh200 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1186116669 My story.


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]]> 2021-02-11 09:36:40 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1191365908 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1191367408 2021-02-11 09:37:05 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1191367408 Ari1st https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1191926148 2021-02-11 12:37:47 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1191926148 Ari1st https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1191936862 2021-02-11 12:41:02 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1191936862 Mikaeel Daya Story Miku_D https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1192030443 Mick and the wolf
Mick was playing football in the garden when his mum asked him to pick fresh strawberries in the forest so of course he said yes but as he looked at the forest, he gulped. It was a thick forest with a spidery tangle of trees, bushes, thorns and gnarled limbs and was cloaked in a thick mist like ghostly stooped figures. “Ok then”said his mother. “Here’s the basket. Off you pop.”
    As Mick tip-toed towards the forest, a thick grey blanket covered the sky. He was greeted by rotting leaves and dead branches and a writhing carpet of buzzing, crawling insects. Immediately his hair began to stand on end, his throat tighten, his teeth chatter, his hands sweat and shake, his knees knock, and his toes curl. It didn’t look like there would be strawberries growing in that forest. “Let’s give it a try.” Thought Mick. So he took a deep breath and entered. He trembled as he tip-toed in, keeping his eyes peeled and his nose sharpened for that faint whiff of fruit. He didn’t realise it but he was slowly moving deeper into the forest. Was that the smell of strawberries? Now his nose was leading the way. The sky cleared and the moonlight revealed a sprinkling of red on a bush in a clearing 3 or 4 feet away. Mick ran towards it. He picked them all and put them in the basket. He heard a loud howl. He spun around and was paralysed with fear, a few hundred feet away was a wolf. He must've stood there for five seconds before he bolted. The forest with a dark tangled maze and it was almost impossible to find a way through it, but he kept on running until he came out of the forest but he didn't stop there to catch his breath he kept on going until he got home he burst through the door through us the basket and is mother and ran all the way to his bedroom. He buried himself under the covers and said “never again!”]]> 2021-02-11 13:07:49 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1192030443 Raghav sin002 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1192154131 2021-02-11 13:36:39 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1192154131 Raghav sin002 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1192159221 2021-02-11 13:37:44 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1192159221 pat056 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1192161363 2021-02-11 13:38:12 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1192161363 Raghav sin002 https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1192161619 2021-02-11 13:38:15 UTC https://padlet.com/har012_2/orl5fl9x97ivrcd/wish/1192161619