https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw What did you notice? Give examples en-us 2021-05-12 16:30:50 UTC 2021-05-13 17:27:53 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518583755 I think that Hailey Hardcastle had the better presentation and message. She was able to relate to everyone and even gave examples of how we can help make a change. She used personal experiences as examples and had a specific subject that she wanted to speak about. ]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:33 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518583755 rmcginnis0504 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518583964 Michaela and Hailey's talks are both different as Michaela talks about other peoples mental health struggles, while Hailey talks about her own. Moreover, Hailey is more effective in spreading information about youth mental health. Hailey created an organization and a law for the students in Oregon to have mental health days. ]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:36 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518583964 alempa1218 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584133 Both speeches did a good job of appealing to the audience but I feel like Hailey had a stronger impact. Hailey shares her mental health journey and how mental health days benefited her. Hailey also used research to support her argument. Lastly, Hailey took action and got a law passed about allowing students to have mental health days. ]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:38 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584133 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584157 I think Hailey's TedTalk was more effective because it was targeted more towards a specific topic, and she talked about the benefits that came from giving students mental health days. ]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:38 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584157 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584297 I think Hailey's message was more effective because she talked about her own experiences with mental health while Michaela talked about other peoples mental health and couldn't really relate, so there wasn't a lot of facts and details to support her speech.]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584297 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584369 I think both of the girls speeches are very powerful and meaningful to the audience they were targeting. I believe that Michaelas speech was more to spread awareness about teens mental health, while Hailey's was more about her solution to the problem of teens mental heath. This made it very challenging for me to pick a side, However I think Michaela's speech was more effective. My reasoning for this is because she gathered information anonymously from students. I think most of the people in our class would agree with me when I say, teens are more likely to express how they feel about certain things over an anonymous form/website/etc. I think that students are more likely to express true emotion and feelings in ways where people won't know their true identity. The responses that she shared are also more likely to touch parents deeply, considering the topics students talked about. On top of that though, Michael is more pushing for the adults in teen's lives to do things about the situation. While she did this, Hailey provided more  of a solution to the problem.]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:41 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584369 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584484 When comparing Michaela's and Hailey's speeches the are under the same topic, however Hailey's was more of a direct target at a problem and solution while Michela just tells us about stress and how that effected some people. One can see that Michela's main argument was that teens experience and cope with this stress in many different ways and the preferred to tell an anonymous survey about their problems then a professional. Yes, this is a very big deal, however, this   argument lacked the use logos. Her message has a very powerful meaning but lacks the support and facts behind it. On the other hand we see Hailey's speech. This was a well rounded argument that used ethos, logos, and pathos. Her problem had a solution, as well as a cause. She applied her speech to everyone making it a universal experience. On top of all this she has already set her solution in motion; making mental health days a real thing in the state of Oregon.  Both girls are doing amazing things and have a bright future. 

]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:43 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584484 acroke1217 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584599 Hailey's speech was more effective because she gave specific, real life examples about how she relates to the topic and she made comparisons to other things to help people understand what she was saying.]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:45 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584599 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584693 Hailey had a much greater impact. Hailey was very persuasive and explained why mental health days are very important. Michaela explained how she was helping people and so many kids were stressed. Michaela did not really mention how she was helping or taking initiative. They both talked about topic that are very important and need to be talked about in today's society. ]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:46 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584693 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584866 Both of the Ted Talks were good, but I believe that Hailey had a better speech. She used Ethos, Pathos, and Logos to her benefit more. She established herself as president of a Student Council organization and part of another organization who passed a bill. She used emotions by mentioning suicides in her area, along with her ending line of "As my mom would say..." Finally, she used statistics such as suicide being the second leading cause of death for people her age.]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:48 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584866 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584959 Even though both speeches had a strong message, I feel that Hailey's was more effective. She used ethos, pathos, and logos. She was specific in getting her point across and did a good job of balancing the different methods of appealing to the audience. ]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:50 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518584959 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518585009 Both girls did a good job getting their point across, but Hailey included an equal balance of personal stories and factual information to prove her point. ]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:51 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518585009 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518585460 Both Michaela and Hailey's speech showed the important of mental health and its awareness. However, Michaela's speech was more impactful. Michaela Horne used Pathos to communicate with the audience how serious mental health is. She shared personal stories of how she received responses from a variety of students who felt unworthy and suicidal. She even stated how one student shared the exact date of when they were going to commit suicide. This story shows the audience how stress and overwhelmingness can impact just one person. These experiences that Michaela had proves to the audience that mental health can be just as serious as ALS. ]]> 2021-05-12 17:51:57 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518585460 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518587072 Hailey's speech appeals more to adults with positions of power in law, while Michaela's is aimed more at students and school administrators.  Hailey's speech focuses more on legal aspects of teen mental health, explaining how she and other students in Oregon passed a bill that treats mental health days like sick days in schools. Michaela addresses the issue in a different way, plucking at the listener's heart strings to try and get them to empathize with teens struggling with their mental health. Both reached their target audience while still portraying the same idea: Teens need more time to focus on their mental health.]]> 2021-05-12 17:52:19 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518587072 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518589421 In my opinion, Halley's speech felt more genuine and likely hit close to home for many. I find it absolutely astonishing that a teenager was able to pass a law for students to have mental health off days when they feel burned out and depressed. That honestly gave me a lot of hope, as it shows that you can do anything if you put your mind to it.]]> 2021-05-12 17:52:48 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518589421 khouston1118 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518590504 Both girls made a very large impact, however Hailey proved her point very well and even helped set a law about her topic into place. Hailey used personal stories of her's that showed just how often these problems occur.]]> 2021-05-12 17:53:01 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518590504 vmcallister1216 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518590635 I believed that Hailey's Ted talk was better and had a greater impact on those listening. She had a specific message and goal that she pursued and accomplished. She also used pathos, logos, and ethos to her advantage to appeal to the audience. Hailey organized and helped pass a bill to give students in Oregon mental health days which she believed were necessary for students when they needed. This shows her credibility and is when she took advantage of ethos. She also used facts such as suicide being the second main cause of death for teenagers to back up her goal of giving mental health days. This fact also worked as pathos because of its emotional impact it had on the audience.]]> 2021-05-12 17:53:03 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518590635 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518590897 I think Hailey´s speech was more effective because she had facts to back up her speech as well as personal experiences. Also, she made a bill for mental health days and created a mental health organization. ]]> 2021-05-12 17:53:07 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518590897 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518591238 Both speeches were well presented but when comparing the two I think that Hailey's speech was more effective because it gave personal experience but also explained how she used her personal experience to get results.]]> 2021-05-12 17:53:11 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518591238 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518592110 I would personally prefer to listen to Hailey’s speech compared to Michaelas… to be continued tmr]]> 2021-05-12 17:53:23 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1518592110 https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1521070164 I believe that Hailey's speech had more of an impact due to her presenting her personal experience and providing a type of solution for the problem that she spoke about. The fact that a group of teenagers pushed for a law to be instated about allowing children to take mental health days in school once in a while and actually achieved such a goal is astounding. ]]> 2021-05-13 14:01:43 UTC https://padlet.com/arneyd/or55dlpnfjtk5ykw/wish/1521070164