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      <title>Level 2 Writing exam tasks by Minerva Ocolisan</title>
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         <title>Khatol </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Mrs Susan Holt<br>Mitterdon Community Centre<br>19 Church Street<br>Stok Port <br>SK87DN<br><br>Dear Mrs Holt,<br>I am writing regarding&nbsp; the position of voluntary, which I saw advertised in the metro on 20th of March 2021. The job reference is 2312.<br>There are several reason why I would like this position. Firstly, I have  Diploma in sport and PE at level 2, <mark>obtained in 2019</mark> from Aston college. This voluntary work is an excellent opportunity for me to gain experience. In addition, I am a good organizer, which help me to help people from different types of ages. Moreover, I am a good communicator, and speak three different languages, English, Farsi and Turkish, which help me to attract more people. Last but not least, I am patient person, which help me to help&nbsp; people patiently.<br><br>There are several reason why I would like to join this voluntary position. Firstly, it would be a brilliant opportunity to improve my abilities, which help me to make my&nbsp; career in the future. Moreover, I am available to start this work immediately, as my family are living with me, and they are looking after my children. Last but not least, I would like to work with people from different background, and help them to achieve their goals.<br>In conclusion, I believe that the abilities, qualities and qualifications that I mentioned above give me this advantage to be suitable candidate for this voluntary position. If I offered to this position, I could run the following classes, dance classes, tango classes and pilates classes.<br>If any further information, please contact me by my email address or leave me a massage on this number. My email&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; contact number&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;<br>Yours sincerely&nbsp;<br><br>Khatol &nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-03-22 20:24:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Task 1</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Write a letter to a council representative to argue in favour or against creating two new football pitches in your park and improve the existing one.<br>Advantages , build up fitness.....<br>Disadvantages, you can use the money to improve other aspects of your area.<br>Task 2<br>Write an email to your friend George who is having friends coming over at the weekend and would like some recommendations on places to visit, shops and restaurant.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-06-06 20:15:11 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Khatol </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Dear Sir or Madam,<br>Last week, the first of May, I read an advertisement&nbsp; in the local news paper about a council decision to create two new football pitches in George Park.<br>In this letter, I would like to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this proposal and to give my own opinion.&nbsp;<br><br>Some people think that there are advantages of creating more football pitches in the park. Firstly, it seems a great idea to create them because after in month summer the holiday will start, and it would be a good opportunity for students to spend their holiday and enjoy playing football. In addition, last year&nbsp; people were at home because of COVID, which was a terrible time for everybody. Creating these football pitches is a great idea for people to go out and enjoy this year's summer holiday. Moreover, lots of people are still scared to go out or meet people, which is not good for people's mental health. Football would encourage them to go out and socialise with each other.&nbsp;<br><br>On the other hand, I believe there are serious disadvantages to creating more football pitches. Firstly, around George park, there are&nbsp; a lot of elderly people and families. The noise of made by the players and&nbsp;football fans would disturb them, which would create a high health risk for elderly people and young children. In addition, if these football pitches were created, students would get distracted from their homework because they would spend lots of time in the park, which is not acceptable.&nbsp;<br><br>In conclusion, I believe the disadvantages are higher than the benefits and the council should reconsider this issue.&nbsp;<br>In my opinion, instead of football pitches, we could grow trees, which are good for the environment. Moreover, we could repair the park's equipment for children to play and have fresh air, which would help their physical and mental health. Furthermore, put some chairs and tables for families to come and enjoy the sunny weather.<br><br>Thank you for spending time to read my letter. I am looking forward to hearing from you.<br>Yours faithfully,<br>Mrs K Ahmadi<br><br>NEW HOMEWORK<br>A new supper market will be build in your area to replace a park.<br><br>Dear Sir or Madam,&nbsp;<br>Yesterday, I read in the  local news paper that the council has decided to build&nbsp; a new supermarket&nbsp; in our area, to replace the park. I am writing to give my opinion on the matter.<br>Some people believe that it is a good idea to keep this park safe because of the following&nbsp; reasons. Firstly, this park is a good opportunity for those people who would like to have exercise or would like to walk everyday. Secondly, there is a playground for children with state of the art equipment, which is a best place for children to play and spend their time. Last but not least, there are families living around the park, who are live in flats and have no garden. For them, this park is an excellent place to have barbecues at the weekend or go for a picnic and enjoy spending time outdoors.<br>However, there are some benefits of building the supermarket. Firstly, it is a brilliant idea because we do not even have a convenience shop around. When we need something, we have to to go to Tesco, which is far from us. <br>In addition, if this supermarket is built, it can attract more people into the area, which will have positive impact on our local job market. Building this supermarket is a excellent opportunity to create more jobs, which help those people who&nbsp;have lost their jobs during lookdown.<br>In conclusion, I believe that building a new supermarket is an excellent idea because people who are living in this area desperately need it. I will support the council on this proposal.&nbsp;<br>I am looking forward to hearing from you.<br><br>Yours Faithfully&nbsp;<br>Mrs Khatol<br><br><br><br>Task 2,<br>Hi George,<br>Wow! it's a great news that your friends visit you in the weekend. Also it's a excellent idea to ask me for recommendation. I'd recommend The Botanical Gardens to you .<br>Last weekend, we were there it was really nice place. Everywhere covered with exquisite flower arrangements and tropical plants, the atmosphere of garden is brilliant. Around the garden, there are lots of chairs with decorated tables, which you can sit on and have a chat with friends and family. Also, in the back of the garden there is a small but beautiful coffee shop, which attract you to visit and spend your time with your friends.&nbsp; The polite and friendly waiter, which encourage us to come there every weekend. The live and slow music will send&nbsp; you in a dream world . Another excellent news, the weather in the weekend is lovely and sunny. If it happens to rain you can find shelter in the covered area of the café, where there is&nbsp; facilities, like TV, tea, coffee and fresh fruits, which is free. Before I forgot, there is a place for children with a playgroup where they can have a great time together. Don't miss out this lovely place. I will be there at the weekend to enjoy the sunny day, lovely weekend and delicious coffee.<br>Any questions, I'm here.<br>Best wishes&nbsp;<br><br>A New Sport Centre in Lozells Birmingham<br>Are you looking for a fantastic sport centre in your area?<br>Do you want to enjoy your free time with your friends?<br>We are here to help you and provide you different kind of facilities, which are enjoyable and up- to date.<br>Equipment facilities<br>1. tread mills , which is easy to use . Also there is a trainer that help you.<br>2. rowing machine, which is perfect and new version.&nbsp;<br>2. bicycles, which is new version and easy to use for over weight people.<br>Also, we are here to keep our customers happy and satisfied by our Relaxation facilities.<br>. Coffee ,which is tasty, affordable and enjoyable.<br>. Healthy snacks, which boost your&nbsp; energy.<br>. Free car park for customer, for your convenience.&nbsp;<br>In addition, we have facilities for your lovely children, which are enjoyable for them.<br>State of the art equipment, which updated recently.<br>Swimming pool, which is important for everyone to learn swimming.<br>You can book online in our website<br>WWW.lezells sport.com.&nbsp;<br>Don't missed out this opportunity, come and enjoy our facilities. You will have a brilliant experience if&nbsp; you use our centre one time.<br>Think about you health and your lovely family health.<br>We are always here.<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;<br>Start 1 May&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Free for a mount&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;free swimming&nbsp;<br><br>lesson for kids.&nbsp;<br><br><br>Writing Task.<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Charity Dinner for the Jane Bauer Foundation&nbsp;<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;By Khatol&nbsp; page 73<br>Last week, on the 03 of May, I went to the Charity Dinner the Jane Bauer foundation event. The event was about to raising money for the City Hospital. I would like to write about my experience at this event, which was great and excellent.<br>The event was located in Cannon Hill park. There were lots of people with their family. The dinner included an auction,&nbsp; speech by the head of foundation<br>( Mr James dohnson). In the auction, there were lots of antiques and raffle including, flower pots, gramophones, nice painting and old coins from one century ago. The best thing was a flower pot, which was decorated with beautiful women. This flower pot attracted me to bit for it. Unfortunately, someone else got it. Also, there were lots of delicious and tasty foods. For example, Boreks, Dolmas and rice with chicken. Lots of people were in the queue to buy it. On the left side of the park, there was raffle with selection of great prizes. The prizes were different types of sweets, snacks and toys for kids. In event car park ticket money went to charity, which was an excellent way to raise money.&nbsp;<br>In conclusion, it was nice and great event where lots of people came.&nbsp;<br>The charity target was to raise about £2,500. Fortunately, the auction, the raffle and the parking tickets fetched £5,000.<br><br>Complain email.<br>Dear Sir or Madam,<br>I am writing to you to complain about the poor quality of your product and service, which I experienced last week.<br>Last week on the 03 of May 2021, I ordered a game from your ABC online company. My game name is Racing Car, The order number was 12344.<br>I ordered this game for my son's birthday to surprise him. Unfortunately, I was disappointed. When I entered the code number into my game console, for the first time it did not work. I tried again but I receive a massage that I should wait for two hours. After two hours, it did not work again. I contact with your company, a lady on the customer service was on the line. I explained all of the problems, but she did not help. I tried in my laptop and installed unfortunately, there was virus and my laptop effected by virus. I was really disappointed because of your unhelpful service.<br>For compensation, send me the new racing car gam and provide me full refund(£30). I will wait for 5 work days. If I did not receive any respond from you, I would take further action, which would complain to Ombudsman authorities and other consumer rights groups.<br>Yours faithfully&nbsp;<br>Mrs Khatol&nbsp;<br><br><br>Letter to council<br>Task 4<br>LOCAL CINEMA TO BE DEMOLISHED<br>The local council is planning to demolish the historic Burton cinema to make way for a new school.<br>The cinema has a restaurant and games arcade and many people would like be sad to see it go. The nearest cinema would then be over ten mils away.<br><br>Yesterday, I read in your news paper that the council is planning to demolish the historic Burton Cinema to make for a new school. I am writing to give my opinion in the matter.<br>Some people believe that keeping historic Burton Cinema is a good idea because of some reason. Firstly, it is a nice and remarkable place for someone, who has a good experience from there. Secondly, it is our responsibility to keep our old building safe, which excellent way for new generations to know about the past facility. Last but not least, instead of demolishing the old place, repair it and keep it safe for new generations.<br>However, there are some benefits for build new school. Firstly, most people do not have their won property. They have to to move and got new rent house. The opining new school is a brilliant idea for new family, who will not be for longer time in the queue. In addition, build new school is a excellent opportunity for mature student, who are looking for voluntary work in school, which help them to learn and help pupils. Moreover, some of schools&nbsp; are old and need new equipment, which are expensive to repair or install. The new school would be a great news to make or install new version.<br>In conclusion, in my opinion build new school is excellent idea. It would be an excellent way for those people who are looking for job and for those students who&nbsp; are living for from their school.&nbsp;<br>I am looking forward to hearing from you.<br>Yours faithfully<br>Mrs Khatol<br><br><br><br><br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Dear Sir/Madam,<br>I am writing to give my opinion regard the council decided to create two new football pitches in Canon Hill Park.<br>There are many advantages of creating two new football pitches in our park . Firstly, it is a good opportunity for the people who live there to build up their fitness and make exercise. Secondly, I believe that the football sport is a popular sport in the world, which will be attractive for many people to join. Moreover, there are large number of teenager in this area who are being very satisfied for creating new football pitches near to them. In addition, it is a good idea to create new football pitches ,especially during this time because last year all the people had difficult time during the lockdown of Covid-19 , so it is an excellent chance to relieve their stress ,entertain themselves and spend good time.<br>On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of creating two new football pitches. Firstly, T think it would be better to spend this money to improve the services of recycling and cleaning in the city rather than spend it to create new football pitches. Secondly, it will be dangerous to increase the cases of&nbsp; Covid-19 in the area because not all people are vaccinated yet. Also, it would increase the pollution in the area, which will affect our health negatively.<br>In my opinion I believe that the advantages far out weigh the disadvantages. It is good to go ahead to create new football pitches in Canon Hill Park.<br><br>If you have any question please do not hesitate to contact me at asmaelkhatim@yahoo.com.<br>Thank you for taking the time to consider my letter .<br><br>&nbsp; &nbsp; Yours faithfully,<br>&nbsp; &nbsp;Mrs. Asma Elkhatim</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-06-07 17:23:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Gazala </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Task 1<br>I am writing to give my opinion on that council's decision to create two new football pitches in Burberry Park.&nbsp;<br>Some people believe that there are some advantages of creating new football pitches. Firstly, it could be a great idea of making new football pitches in our area. It will be a good opportunity for local residents who live near to the park. Secondly, playing football can keep you fit and healthy and regular practice can build up your fitness ability. In addition, summer holidays are coming soon so many children can join the park and have some good experience playing football with their friends. Last but not least, making new pitches at this time can give some happiness to the people, because last year everyone was so stressed and panicked because of Covid 19.<br>On the other hand, I believe there are some serious disadvantages of having new football pitches. Firstly, there are many elderly people who live around the park and who would be disturbed by the noise from football players. Secondly, two new football pitches would attract a lot of traffic from football fans, increasing pollution and noise in the area, which will be a very serious problem for everyone who lives there. Last but not least, it could attract crime in the area because there would more people coming to see matches.&nbsp;<br>In conclusion, I believe that two new football pitches would cause a lot of harm to our area. Instead, the council could spend the money on improving the rubbish collection. For instance, they should come twice a week to collect rubbish and give more recycling&nbsp; bins to houses, which will keep our area clean. Secondly, the council could plant some trees around the area, so we can get some fresh air and support to improve a better environment for everyone.&nbsp;Moreover, some money could be spent on creating nice playgrounds for children in the park because they do not have where to play. <br>&nbsp;It will be good if the council reconsiders the issue of creating football pitches in the Burberry park.&nbsp;<br>Thank you for taking the time and reading my letter. I am looking forward to hearing from you.&nbsp;<br>Yours faithfully&nbsp;<br>Gazala Anwari&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-06-07 20:03:52 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Task 2<br>Hi George,&nbsp;<br>Wow!&nbsp; That's a great news that your friends are visiting you this weekend. I m very happy that you asked me for my recommendation. I'd recommend you to take them Star City. You can do so much there!<br>Last week I was there with my family. It was really nice there. Now many cinemas and restaurants are open, so you can watch a movie with your friends. We watched a movie and in the interval we had some hot popcorn. After the movie finished we went to Sher Khan Restaurant for food because we were very hungry. We ordered some Asian food for all of us. The food was hot and delicious, so we all enjoyed our food. Also the service of restaurant was very nice staff was very happy and friendly. After the food my children asked for ice-cream so we went to dessert shop and we ordered some ice-cream. I never had such a tasty ice-cream in my life! Before I forget, there are some indoor games as well for children. My children loved it very much.&nbsp;<br>If you want to give them a good experience of authentic Asian food, then take them to Stratford Road for dinner.&nbsp;<br>OK, then, have a lovely time with your friends and if you need any help, call me.&nbsp;<br>See you soon&nbsp;<br>Gazala&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>I am writing to give you my opinion about creating two new football pitches in our park and improve the existing one. I read about this project in the montly journal of Birmingham . There are so many advantages and disadvantages to create two new football pitches and to improve the existing one.<br><br>One of the advantage is the creation of new pitches on our park can make the young and the teenager alike want to do more sports, which will lead them to maintain their health, be more fit and improve their cardio. Another of advantage that the fact that there is more pitches, the young people will want to go outside more, no longer stay on the front of the TV or the Play station, which will lead them to make the new friends and socialize more. And by doing this, they will gain more self-confidence. In addition, our young people need infrastructure. By create the pitches , there will be less delinquency and it will lead to less gang, crime knifes, drugs in the streets.<br><br>The disadvantage is that it will cost a lot to the council and the tax payer. We could see our taxes increase. Another disadvantage is that create less parking space for people who live around, which will lead people to park anywhere or on the kerb.<br><br>I think, It will be good to improve the current pitch because the pitch is large and it will cost less money. Also, I suggest to create only one new pitch of the same size. I think that will be enough, then we will always have enough parking space for the people .<br>I hope you will take my letter on consideration. You can contact me by e-mail, on this address: SihamCelerier@hotmail.com.<br><br>Yours faithfully,<br>Mrs Siham Celerier<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp;<br>Council representative&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 77 Tenby Road&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;B13 8AH<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 0121788991234<br>Birmingham city council&nbsp;<br>Phone: 01212467788<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;<br>Dear madam/sir<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;I am writing to discuss the build of the two new football pitches. I understand the point was made about the noise in the park for residents, also the concern about more litter pollution. As a member of our local community, I assure you, and I mean assure! These goings on will not be going on no longer! We will all be on full patrol! Making sure these litter bugs are caught and held responsible. Citizen’s arrest will be made and to monitor these hooligans and terrible their behavior we are recruiting more neighborhood watchers. Regarding the noise this matter has been closely investigated and reported back that there is no possible way that the noise from the park will not affect the residents. as head of the neighborhood watcher, I take my roll extremely serious to communicate with as many people as possible from our community therefore I am strongly confident these improvements to the park will only benefit and bring joy to our neighborhood. Not only will this improve the overall layout of the park this will bring people out of their homes and encourage exercise, also the younger children in the area will have somewhere to go and play instead of being outside the local shops. For anymore details please be in contact.<br><br></div><div>&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>Yours sincerely Ms. E Thompson&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-06-08 10:18:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nimaa<br>Hi George,&nbsp;<br>How are you and your family, it was great to hear from you .Thank you for asking me to suggest some places .<br><br>There are many places I can think of around Birmingham that are quite appealing.&nbsp; My top recommendation is Cannon Hill Park .There are many activities at the park, which include: boating , fishing and&nbsp; tennis. Also, there are train rides around the whole park every half an hour. In addition, the park is near the city centre where all the fancy and delicious restaurants are located . At the centre of Cannon Hill Park, there is the MAC, which contains a theatre , a dance studio, where music and comedy performances take place. It is nice place to come for exercise and a breath the fresh air, as well as to enjoy the beautiful views.&nbsp;<br><br>Also, there are loads of places to eat in Birmingham. I would recommend the Botanist, a restaurant in the city centre. I am not sure where to start as l have eaten there so many times. Firstly, the interior is beautiful, which has&nbsp; lots of light wood , decorative lights and outside areas. I really like the place and the food because it is reasonably priced. The&nbsp; service was attentive and not to bad because they brought the food on time and they were polite.<br>Enjoy your time with your friend and let me know how it was.&nbsp;<br><br>Write a paragraph about a shopping centre you would recommend.&nbsp;<br>See you soon&nbsp;<br>Nimaa&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Ruzina<br><br>Dear Sir / Madam&nbsp;<br><br>I am writing this letter regarding the council planning. The council has decided to create football pitch in our local park. I would like to give you my views and suggestions on this matter. <br><br><strong>Firstly</strong>, the football pitch is very important for our local players because there is no football pitch nearby this area. Due to the football pitch our local young players have faced many problems. For example every week players spend a vast amount of money for&nbsp; football pitch which would be extremely hard to managed for some people. <strong>Also</strong>, if the council will create football pitch into the park local young people able to play freely and independently&nbsp; without spending lot of money. <br><br><strong>Moreover</strong>, the Football Pitch will help players to play whatever the weather, all year round. They won’t have to worry about getting mud on their kit or slipping over the rain.<br><strong>Last but not least</strong>, to play football on the pitch will be comfortable, somth, soft and safe because it will&nbsp; make by artificial grass. As well as this it will help to reduce the injury. <br><strong>On the other hand</strong> there are some negatives aspects to create the football pitch into the local park. <br><br><strong>firstly</strong>, the local park is convenient for all ages people because it help people to keep them busy and engage with people from different cultures. <strong>However</strong> , the football pitch might not suitable for some people for example people who have physical disability problems. <br><strong>Also</strong>,the local park is very important to our local community. If the park will closing down the local people will not able to do outdoor&nbsp; exercise and activities,which could affect&nbsp; their mental health. As well as people might involve to do crime and more addicted on the social media. <strong>Moreover</strong>, there will be a lot of noise while playing football, which will affect people who live nearby. <br><strong>Last but not least</strong>, the football pitch will bring many people, which will lead more traffic and more pollution in our local area.<br><br><strong>In conclusion</strong>, I believe the council should renovate the local park instead of creating football pitch into the park. In order to improve the park to provide new equipments, replace broken and damaged stuffs. if would be possible to put on&nbsp; CC&nbsp; cameras it will be easier to caught the dumpers. I&nbsp; also consider that if the council creates football pitch any available area of the place apart from the park would be more appreciate.&nbsp;<br>&nbsp;<br>I look forward to hearing a positive response from your earliest convenience.&nbsp;<br><br>Yours faithfully&nbsp;<br><br>Ruzina&nbsp; Begum&nbsp;<br><br><br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
         <pubDate>2021-06-09 10:26:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Dear sir,Mafam,<br>I am writing this letter to confirm that the council has decided to open new football pitches in Handsworth park, which was advertised in the local newspaper on 10th of May 2021.There are some advantages and disadvantages in opening it. Then I will give my opinion about it.<br>Advantages:<br>One of the advantages is that it gives a good opportunity to the local people, especially young people, which encourage them to join in and work as a team as it is beneficial for the community. In addition, having new football pitches in the area gives a chance for the people to not drive a car and walk instead, which is a good exercise due to walking by. Last but not least, it is an excellent idea for your people to practice their skills and train harder, because it helps them to improve their health and safety.<br>On the other hand, oopening new pitches makes a lot of noise while they taking place and supporting their team, which is not respectful for people in the area, especially old people. Also, the players can leave plastic bottles, wrappers and energy drinks, which makes the council to serve the place more than usual.<br>In my opinion, they should open the new football pitches because I discussed all advantages and disadvantages above. I strongly believe that , during the pandemic, there has been a lack of exercise, which makes all people lazy, especially the young people, so the people will need to do more activities, such as football matches.&nbsp;<br>Thank you for reading my letter. I will be looking forward to hear from you.<br><br>Yours faithfully&nbsp;<br>Shaima Sadeq&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
         <pubDate>2021-06-09 15:43:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Task&nbsp;<br>Hi George!<br>It is such a great idea to ask your friend to come over at the holidays! Thanks for asking me to help you about this decision. If they have kids, I'd&nbsp; recommend recommend&nbsp; the Science Museum at the Millennium point, which has old trains and planes , as well as a breathtaking planetarium.&nbsp;<br>In addition, the ThinkTank Museum&nbsp; is very beneficial for kids, because they design all the display in a scientific way to develop their knowledge. For example, they have rooms specified on Dentists, Doctors and Nurses so the children can choose a character they wish to be in the future and what role they choose, inspite of having a variety of character, such as Shopkeepers, Chefs and Engineers. Furthermore, they have a Planetarium, located in the final floor, which is a brilliant view, whilst watching and listening it would make you feel like you are really moving towards the sky and leaving the Planet Earth for a few minutes. Also, they have a lovely garden outside of the building, which is called Science Garden, and is totally different compared to a normal playground, as all the surroundings work in a scientific way, which improves the children's knowledge.<br><br>Last but not least, if you want to have a great meal after a tiring day, you can go to Soho Road, which is a place with lots of restaurants, especially Kurdish ones. They have fantastic Kababs, Dolma and rice with special lamb (Qozy) and different Currys, such as Oktra, Corzhet and Orbengine ( called Tabsy).<br>Even though the service is very quick, the price is very cheap.<br>Enjoy your time with your lovely friend and let me know if you had a good time!<br>I hope to hear from you soon and have a wonderful holiday,<br>See you soon,<br>Shaima </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-06-09 20:09:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[Write a letter to a council representative to argue in favour or against creating two new football pitches in your park and improve the existing one.
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         <pubDate>2021-06-14 20:38:24 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Khatol</title>
         <author>khatol8193</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Hi Bilal and Kristiyan <br>This is looks like a very interesting discussion. I would like to join in, if I may. Playing games is bad and make real life in stress. I don't like playing games.<br>First of all, I agree with Kristyan. Play games encourage person to lives in fantasy world, and most of the time he/ she think about how can gets more points and numbers from games. Another reason, when a person plays game he/ she would gets social distance and escape  from family's communication, which make them shy person. Moreover, they would learn bad word from games and most of the time use them against family. In addition, when a person lost the game, he/she would starts aggressive behaviour, which is bad for others children's behaviour.<br><br>On other hands, there are lots of educational games to helps person to build up their skills, such as reading, writing and punctuation. When a person using games for reading, it helps to correct pronunciation. In addition writing, which is important for different type of age to help themselves and families with writing. Last but not least, a sentence without punctuation sometimes doesn't make sense and make the reader confused. Is it any?<br><br>In conclusion,  I believe play games is waste of the time and we never enjoy our real life.  <br>In my opinion, instate of playing game make a cup of green tea and read your favourite book. I think it is enjoyable time than playing a game. What do you think, Am I right ? Join and answer my question. I will be here.<br>Bey for now. <br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-07-07 18:25:44 UTC</pubDate>
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