Editing & Revising by https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit These are the things you should make sure checking EVERY time. If your paper doesn't meet the question, make some changes en-us 2013-09-09 18:48:41 UTC 2023-03-15 12:25:59 UTC hello@padlet.com http://d2s8n7nv9yizdf.cloudfront.net/assets/thmbs/notebook-917a880d5d6f4a35c87d19b6a8c2333f.jpg Is your punctuation correct? missrink https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12801782 Make sure you are using these correctly.. . , ? ! ; " ( ) :

]]> 2013-09-09 18:50:03 UTC https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12801782 Are there any run-on sentences? missrink https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12801887 If there are complete thoughts on each side of the comma, it is probably a run-on.

Try reading it out loud. If you lose your breath before you get to the period, it might be too long.

]]> 2013-09-09 18:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12801887 Is your grammar correct? missrink https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12801986 Look at the tenses of your verbs (past, present, future)

Make sure everything is correctly capitalized & that there are no stray capitals.

]]> 2013-09-09 18:52:29 UTC https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12801986 Are you missing words? missrink https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12802141 Try reading it out loud and see if it makes sense.

]]> 2013-09-09 18:54:23 UTC https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12802141 Are there places to improve (spice up) your vocab? missrink https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12802279 Try synonyms that elevate your language but still make sense.

]]> 2013-09-09 18:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12802279 Are you are on topic? missrink https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12802386 Look back at the prompt, are you answering it?

Is there flow to what you're saying?

]]> 2013-09-09 18:56:53 UTC https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12802386 Is your formatting right? missrink https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12802539 Is each paragraph indented correctly?

]]> 2013-09-09 18:58:39 UTC https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12802539 Does it hold your attention? missrink https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12802591 Is it interesting?

]]> 2013-09-09 18:59:17 UTC https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12802591 Does every paragraph have a topic? missrink https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12804218 Is there a clear topic sentence?

What about details supporting?

]]> 2013-09-09 19:22:23 UTC https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12804218 Does every sentence look the same? missrink https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12852665 If every sentence starts with a pronoun (I, he, she, they, we...) try to change it up.

Try for sentences of varying length, some short, some long.

]]> 2013-09-10 14:10:44 UTC https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12852665 Is there a hook? missrink https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12852961 Does the paper start off with a sentence that is interesting and makes you want to read furthur?

]]> 2013-09-10 14:13:47 UTC https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12852961 Is everything spelled correctly? missrink https://padlet.com/missrink/sageedit/wish/12854283 If you aren't positive, check it on the iPad.

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