GRAMMAR FEEDBACK Week 2 by Karen's class https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd Sentences from 'Zoo' essay en-us 2019-05-01 20:52:41 UTC 2019-05-02 01:57:54 UTC hello@padlet.com 10 YUE ctsleo9599 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003289 Currently, increasing cities have established their zoos.]]> 2019-05-01 23:09:42 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003289 14 Leo ctsleo9599 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003292 It will focus on both educational reasons and the protection of endangered animals .]]> 2019-05-01 23:09:43 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003292 3 Hugh https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003322 Zoos make some animal studies easier because researchers do not search for fauna in their habitat necessarily.]]> 2019-05-01 23:09:56 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003322 Jerry for 6 jerrychen5297 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003374 ·Animals have their own rights. In that case, zoos should provide safe environment.
· Despite animals having their own rights, zoos should provide safe environment. 
· Despite the fact that animals have their own rights, zoos should provide safe environment. 
· Despite of the rights ainimals have, zoos should provide safe environment. 
]]> 2019-05-01 23:10:19 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003374 13 KAI https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003457 This study has shown that approximate 86% of visitors go to zoos for  social or recreational purposes.]]> 2019-05-01 23:10:42 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003457 1 Lisa https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003495 Nowadays, zoos have been established education centers by dedicated teams who aim to improve public natural knowledge,  especially the young generation. ]]> 2019-05-01 23:10:55 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003495 7 Phoebe Gao 193474215gh https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003500 In addition that animals in zoo do not need to worry about necessary resources of survival.]]> 2019-05-01 23:10:56 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003500 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003508 15 Vicky

For this reason, a suitable environment could be provided by zoos to ensure animals to survive and thrive.]]> 2019-05-01 23:10:58 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003508 8Eric https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003531 Proponents claim that zoos provide safe sanctuaries and play roles of education, while opponents believe that it is cruel to keep animals in zoos because it is against their rights.]]> 2019-05-01 23:11:09 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003531 5Carol https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003602 It benefits protection of the animals diversity and avoids animals being hunted]]> 2019-05-01 23:11:37 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003602 9 Sharon https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003606 The revenue of zoos can also be utilized for animal preservation, such as free treatments for disabled animals.]]> 2019-05-01 23:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003606 2 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003644 2019-05-01 23:11:56 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003644 2. Lee https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003648 For instance, pandas, one of the endangered species in China, have suffered the plight of  near extinction over the past decade.]]> 2019-05-01 23:11:58 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003648 4 Shuo https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003673 Therefore, this progress could rise the awareness of the public and hold more activities to protect animals.]]> 2019-05-01 23:12:04 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003673 12 sophie https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003720 Due to the increasing popularity of visiting zoos, more zoos are established around the world, which makes the number of animals that are kept in zoos grow.]]> 2019-05-01 23:12:23 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003720 16Jan https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003817
Secondly, zoo could make researches to protect the endangered animals and it also contributes to the animal protection in academic field.]]> 2019-05-01 23:13:03 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003817 11 Tony mardiantony https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003868 Moreover, it is a popular form of entertainment in cities, which benefits the tourism industry.]]> 2019-05-01 23:13:21 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356003868 ctsleo9599 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356004449 2019-05-01 23:17:21 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356004449 ctsleo9599 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356004469 2019-05-01 23:17:27 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356004469 ctsleo9599 https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356004532 2019-05-01 23:17:49 UTC https://padlet.com/karen_fong/opwougvlqqyd/wish/356004532