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The emotional trauma that one suffers due to war could bring about devastating psychological effects to its survivors.

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This is because derogatory aspects of wars such as bloodshed, violence and the loss of loved ones have especially far-reaching effects on our mental wellbeing, and . As victims of wars, survivors have witnessed such atrocities first-hand. These gruesome memories of wars are etched indelibly in the depths of their minds and could well take a toll on their psychological well-being. The memories of these nefarious atrocities they have been through could in turn lead to a vastly negative and despondent outlook on life, adversely impacting their social interactions and perspectives towards others and themselves.

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For example, many Jews have suffered in the expanse of concentration camps across German-occupied territories in WW2 and approximately 6 million of them had have lost their lives within them. However, there were many Jews who emerged from the war and despite being unharmed physically, they but have been devastated and torn mentally.  and Many more have committed suicide as a result of the emotional trauma of losing their loved ones in a matter of seconds, be it within the walls of gas chambers in the compounds of the camps or shot by soldiers in the wilderness of the battlegrounds of war. Struggling to integrate into a post-war society, they have been subject to extreme undergone negative emotional bouts of grief and many have been leading "lifeless lives" ever since, overwhelmed with by the harsh reality of the war and its aftermaths.

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Evidently, the grappling consequences of wars has have immensely impacted the lives of those who have been through it and despite the apparent "triumph" of surviving a war, one must never forget that the emotional hardships one would have to face later in life could eventually evolve into a life-long emotional battlefield itself.

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]]> 2021-11-07 13:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733134 ritatllake https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733137 P/T: War causes a lot of psychological pain and grief to survivors that last long after the war has ended.

E: War consists of large amounts of senseless killing, bloodshed and loss of loved ones. All this is these are very traumatic to experience and these memories will keep resurfacing, causing the survivors to have to relive these agonising moments of their lives over and over again. This makes it very hard for survivors to return back to a normal, quiet way of life as they will still feel the pain and grief from the war.

EG: Eva Schloss, one of the few remaining survivors of the Holocaust, explains that she shares her story with others to help her remain sane from all the trauma and grief she experienced got from the war. She also mentioned that memories of her lost loved ones would come and haunt her at night when there was nothing occupying her mind. In addition, Eva mentioned and repeated a few times how she wanted to "go back to normality", which highlights how she feels she is unable to return to a normal life even 80 years after the war. 

L/S: Therefore, war impacts survivors greatly with trauma and grief that do not stop haunting them many years after the war itself. ]]> 2021-11-07 13:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733137 ritatllake https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733139 P/T One major example of the effects of wars is Post Traumatic Stress Disorder ( PTSD).


E This usually occurs to those who are survivors of traumatic experiences like war. It occurs because they cannot escape from the thoughts of those that they lost and of the terrible experiences that they had to go through. This prevents them from living a stress-free and peaceful life, as these survivors are haunted by the nighmarish thoughts of the past.


EG As shown in the video, even though For instance, Eva Schloss, one the remaining Holocaust survivors, Eva had survived and lived through the Holocaust, she still wears grey clothes because she does not feel happy in life, grieving for those that she had lost in the war. Furthermore, she shared one of the more hellish occasions when she had to witness her naked mother, forced by the Nazis to do the death march to the gas chamber. She also relates that, even though decades have passed since the war, she cannot get over the loss of her father and her brother who died tragically on the long march to the concentration camp in Austria. ^{(Add more egs - at least 3 short instances, I have added the highlighted parts for you to make it 3 egs)}


L/S War certainly is a very traumatizing experience, as it involves the murder of many people, something deeply scarring and undoubtedly unforgettable. Thus, one of the horrific major effects is undeniably the trauma associated with it. In ^essence, this is why people suffer from PTSD, a terrible condition.]]> 2021-11-07 13:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733139 ritatllake https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733140 Linked to our Holocaust Memorial Day - "Here's to one that we lost"]]> 2021-11-07 13:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733140 ritatllake https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733142 P/T
One of the major effects of wars is that it leaves great emotional scars on those that live on.

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Victims have to live through horrific times in war, as people in power lose their humanity. But even Even when it is all over, people still relive these times over and over again in their heads minds and are unable to escape from the traumatic experiences.

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Eva Schloss, a Holocaust survivor is also plagued by memories of times in the war. She struggles and suffers from nightmares and flashbacks of the Holocaust. This comes to her especially at night when she is not that busy. She clearly suffers emotionally as she relates that even though decades have passed since the war ended, she cannot get over the loss of her father and brother. Both died tragically on the long march to the concentration camp in Austria.

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From this, Thus, we can see that it is undeniable that the gruesome experiences of war leave great scars on the minds ands hearts of victims.]]> 2021-11-07 13:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733142 ritatllake https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733146 P/T There are many types of war, cold war, colonial war, invasion, range war, religious war, and many more. However, they all have the same effect on people, which is depression. One of the major effects of wars is depression in war survivors.
E Whether it is during or after the war, depression will always be terrorizing each and every individual in the war Depression can strike war survivors even long after the war has ended. The loss of a loved one, the constant destruction of the surroundings, the living in constant fear, will all lead to depression. They would turn into long-term effects which makes one grief about the past even if the war is over. This leads to depression for individuals. In addition to psychological depression, economic depression may also come into play. Most of the money needed for war is used for the military, hence would not have enough for the other basic essentials. At the end of the war, money is also needed for the rebuild of buildings, which also needs a huge sum of money.  _{( Don't repeat or place irrelevant details)}
EG For example, 75 million people died in World War 2. The loved ones of these large number of people would definitely grieve over them and may feel a sense of deep sadness. Some may even feel depressed because they may feel that their loved ones they might be,  who played a  huge part in their lives are not there anymore. and without them, they would be depressed. World War 2 cost about $4.1 trillion and this money could be used for better things. This amount of money is simply wasted because of war and this led to more people being depressed. 
L Hence, depression is undeniably one major effect of war. 

]]> 2021-11-07 13:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733146 ritatllake https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733147 P/T: There are many effects of wars on one's mental and physical health, but one of the major effects of the war is Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD).

E: During the wars, there are many lives that are lost and many people find it very difficult to let go of the ghastly memories. of the war. This leads to them having PTSD where they have flashbacks and nightmares of the events of the traumatic event, in this case the war. Individuals can be impacted very much because the war can not only impact you, but also impact those around you, especially your loved ones. If your  their loved ones have passed away during the war, it will only exacerbate the pain you feel, leading to PTSD.

EG: Eva Schloss is one individual who has suffered from PTSD after World War II. Eva Schloss had lost her brother and father just a few months before the war had ended., and She even mentioned distinctly that she has mentioned that she could not get over the loss. Both her brother and her father died tragically on the death march to the concentration camp in Austria. Eva Schloss has also experienced symptoms of PTSD as she sometimes sees images of her suffering at the concentration camp at night. This shows how experiences during the war would have affected an individual's mental well-being, causing many survivors to suffer from PTSD.

L/S: Although I have never experienced the effects of war before because I have never been through war, many people who have been through the horrifying and gruesome experiences in war suffer from Post Traumatic Stress Disorder.]]> 2021-11-07 13:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733147 ritatllake https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733154 P/T: One of the major effects of wars is that victims are adversely affected mentally, causing them to suffer from post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD).

E: Victims can experience severe anxiety, flashbacks, persistent nightmares, insomnia and anger due to their memories of war. They may feel great stress, fear and even guilt because of their experiences of being put through abuse and tortue, witnessing the deaths of loved ones or even killing people themselves. Symptoms last for more than a month but  may even huant  haunt victims for years or longer.

EG: For example, Eva Schloss, was a Holocaust survivor who experienced the horrors of the  Auschwitz-Birkenau Nazi concentration camp. She still remembers losing her father and brother a few months before the war ended. Both father and brother died tragically on the death march to the concentration camp in Austria. Sometimes at night, when she was not busy, Eva even sees saw images of her suffering at the concentration camp. As she was trying to cope with the grief and her loss, she still wears grey and needed to ease herself slowly into wearing more colours. Because Furthermore, as she was unable to she cannot forget her experiences, Eva spoke up. She participated in the USC Shoah Foundation's Visual History Archive project, creating a hologram of herself where people can ask questions and receive recorded answers from.

L/S: Thus, many Many people experience traumatic events during the war which they cannot forget, affecting their mental health and wellness in horrific ways. While fighting against PTSD cabe a hard struggle, one should always have hope.]]> 2021-11-07 13:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1872733154 ritatllstu2 https://padlet.com/ritatllake/opwl67uhxisyy398/wish/1874280138
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One of the many impacts  major effects of war is the physical and psychological impact on the survivors and generations to come.


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The psychological impacts includes nightmares, sleeplessness, negative imagery, "flashbacks", problems with concentration, weeping, generalized anxiety and distress. caused by situations recalling the war. Such things would cause irritation and anxiety which also  might trigger violence. Many also depend on taking drugs just to try to leave those horrific memories and ghastly vivid images behind as they have to relive those moments again and again. Suicide is also common for war survivors who are haunted by the past.


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One such example is Eva Schloss, a survivor of the Holocaust.


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