https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7 E-Portfolio en-us 2020-06-29 05:24:25 UTC 2023-03-08 10:28:20 UTC hello@padlet.com aliasafari15 https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642609060 1. NUR SYAFIAH BINTI ABU BAKAR (2019258982)
2. NUR ALIA BINTI MOHAMAD SAFARI (2019447032)]]> 2020-06-29 05:25:03 UTC https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642609060 aliasafari15 https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642613800 Comments
On paragraph 1:
I suggest this thesis statement be written in a general statement

On paragraph 6:
In this opinion paragraph, I would want to see your own additional reasons why do you agree with the author. Right now you're just repeating the same points - you agree with the author ;  so obviously you would agree with his points too. So I need reasons that are not stated by the author why do you agree with Internet freedom

]]> 2020-06-29 05:31:38 UTC https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642613800 aliasafari15 https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642639985 Comments:
Only the last article is an argumentative article. However, the topic is a bit sensitive and complicated. You need to read more on human cloning if you want to proceed with this article. Otherwise, you can keep searching for other articles.]]> 2020-06-29 06:07:20 UTC https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642639985 aliasafari15 https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642641229 Comments:
2 & 4 no. 
1 & 3 yes
so you choose based on the topic you prefer & the ease of finding main ideas & supporting details.]]> 2020-06-29 06:09:00 UTC https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642641229 aliasafari15 https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642643236 2020-06-29 06:11:18 UTC https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642643236 aliasafari15 https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642645445 Comments
On Main Idea 1:
Do not express the whole idea about the main idea, please read again, understand & revise.

On Main Idea 2:
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On Main Idea 3:
Also needs to be revised

]]> 2020-06-29 06:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642645445 aliasafari15 https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642646305 2020-06-29 06:15:19 UTC https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642646305 aliasafari15 https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642650503 2020-06-29 06:21:26 UTC https://padlet.com/aliasafari15/opudprm1hs0684z7/wish/642650503