https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz What do we need to do to make an "ADVANCED" score? en-us 2018-03-18 21:36:15 UTC 2025-11-22 17:44:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243660875 2018-03-19 17:46:33 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243660875 0152418 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243662876 uses mostly clear reasoning supported by relevant text-based evidence in the development of the claim or topic;

is organized with mostly clear and cohearant writing;

establishes and maintains a mostly effective style


it means that you used good supporting evidence  and uses a good writing style

yeeeeeeeeeee]]> 2018-03-19 17:49:22 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243662876 0139264 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664151 demonstrate some organization with somewhat coherent writing;has a style that is somewhat effective

keep you idea in a nice and neat order, make it have a persuasive effect on other

]]> 2018-03-19 17:51:10 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664151 0139734 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664187 Demonstrates limited comprehension of ideas stated explicitly and/or inferentially by providing minimally accurate analysis. 

Write a short ]]> 2018-03-19 17:51:13 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664187 0140019 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664231 demonstrates basic comprehension of ideas stated explicity and/or inferentially by providing a generally accurate analysis;
addresses the prompt and provides some development of the claim or topic that is somewhat appropriate to the task, purpose, and audience;

this means that the students essay had some ideas that was kind of accurate and that the student provided some development in the essay that relates to the topic.]]> 2018-03-19 17:51:16 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664231 0140503 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664256 uses clear reasoning supported by relevant text based evidence in the development of the claim or topic;
is effectively organized with clear and coherent writing;
establishes and maintains an effective style ]]> 2018-03-19 17:51:18 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664256 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664259 -demonstrates comprehension of ideas stated explicitly and/or inferentially by providing a mostly accurate analysis;
-addresses the prompt and provides mostly effective development of the claim or topic that is mostly appropriate to the task, purpose, and audience.

]]> 2018-03-19 17:51:18 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664259 6289987 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664279 The students response demonstrates full command of the conventions of standard english at an appropriate level of complexity. There may be a few minor errors in mechanics,grammar, and usage, but meaning is clear

It is some what good but there are some errors in the prompt that the person wrote. ]]> 2018-03-19 17:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664279 5009685 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664308 uses clear reasoning supported by relevant text based evidenced in the development of the claim or topic;
is effectively organized with clear and coherent writing;
establishes and maintains an effective style;

]]> 2018-03-19 17:51:21 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664308 0139954 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664322 addresses the prompt and provide minimal development of the claim or topic that is limited in its appropriateness to the task purpose, and audience ]]> 2018-03-19 17:51:23 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664322 0144361 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664450 uses limited reasoning and text-based evidence;
demonstrates limited organization and coherence;
has a style that is minimally effective.

]]> 2018-03-19 17:51:32 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664450 0140929 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664460 Uses some reasoning and text-based evidence in the development of the claim or topic;
Demonstrates some organization with somewhat coherent writing;
Has a style that is somewhat effective


]]> 2018-03-19 17:51:33 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664460 0142840 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664474 the student response demonstrate comprehension of ideas stated explicitly and or inferentially by providing a moslty accurate analysis]]> 2018-03-19 17:51:34 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664474 0139430 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664576 2018-03-19 17:51:44 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664576 0135038 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664765 Uses a few reasons and text-based evidence . writing shows only a little bit of organization and writing is whack.]]> 2018-03-19 17:52:00 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664765 0141569 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664870 the students response demonstrates  limited command of the conventions of standard english at an appropriate  level of complexity. there may be errors in mechanics, grammar, and usage that often impede understanding. 

the student put little effort into the attempt to write the essay.  the grammar, mechanics, and usage is hard to understand.]]> 2018-03-19 17:52:09 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664870 0132703 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664894 . addresses the prompt and provides ]]> 2018-03-19 17:52:11 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664894 0139815 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664908 limited information]]> 2018-03-19 17:52:13 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243664908 0139815 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243667014 has a style that is somewhat effective.
Demonstrate some organization with somewhat coherent writing.
uses some reasoning and text based evidence in the development of the claim or topic.]]> 2018-03-19 17:55:16 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243667014 https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243667971 The Student response demostrates some command of the conventions of standard English at an i hate this class]]> 2018-03-19 17:56:28 UTC https://padlet.com/juliesmith4/oony3f67ufdz/wish/243667971