"Harlem" Rewrite: 6th Period by Mrs. Manchester https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak Begin with the line, "What happens to a dream achieved?" Then, imitate Langston Hughes' writing, this time using similes and word choices that create a HOPEFUL mood and a PROUD tone. en-us 2020-09-16 11:29:45 UTC 2025-11-10 03:28:57 UTC hello@padlet.com Paxton McGary https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752601222 Does it light up the sky like a comet?
Or strike like a bolt of lightning, and then thunder with success?

Does it shine like the sun on a warm summer day?
Or feel like you're living a dream?

Maybe it just takes off like a rocket ship.

Or does it explode like confetti?]]> 2020-09-16 17:36:23 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752601222 Sarayna Jacob https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752603512 What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it fly like a bird?
Or sprout like a flower, and then bloom?

Does it save like a superhero?
Or grow like a like a puppy growing into a adult dog?

Maybe it just food like a cake being cooked in the oven.

Or does it go like a promotion for a job?]]> 2020-09-16 17:36:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752603512 Faith Shin https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752604022 Wat happens to a dream acheived?
Does it move like a dance in a festival?
Or does it fly like a bird , and then soar?

Does it move like a swift of a paintbrush?
Or does it swish  like the waves in the blue ocean?

Maybe it just gleams like the sun in the sky

Or does it chirp like a cricket in nature?]]> 2020-09-16 17:36:56 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752604022 Jasmine Simon https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752604146 What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it ____Sparkle_________ like a _fireworks display______________?
Or _____look______ like a ____star in the night__________, and then shine____________?

Does it ___light up the sky___________ like _lightning _bolt________?
Or __fly high__________ like a ___bird_________?

Maybe it just ___looks________ like a __an art display__________.

Or does it _have the beauty of northern lights___________?]]> 2020-09-16 17:36:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752604146 eurora 00065585 https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752604533 What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it rise like a cake in the oven?
Or flow like a leaf in the wind and then land?

Does it glow like a firefly ?
Or shine like a diamond?

Maybe it just spins like a olympic gymnast.

Or does it rush like a race car]]> 2020-09-16 17:37:02 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752604533 Raven https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752604779 What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it smell as good as fresh rain on a Sunday afternoon  or like a sprinkle of joy flying around your house?


Or  does it taste  as good as  a ice cream with sprinkles and extra drizzle of caramel , and then BOOM! go away?

Does it  smell disturbing like a dead animal left on the side of the road.?
Or does it feel like a strike of lighting?

Maybe it just bird flying across my window like a sad day.

Or does it stay quiet?]]> 2020-09-16 17:37:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752604779 Brooke B. 00025431 https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752605116 What happens to a dream achieved? 

Does it come like the wind and leaves like the tide?
Or does it rise like bread being bake and fall like a soggy cupcake?
Does it feel like youre on top of the world

Or does it feel like your normal days?

Maybe it just ___________ like a ____________.

Or does it ____________?]]> 2020-09-16 17:37:10 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752605116 Jordan Breault https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752605417 What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it rise like a bird ?
Or drop like a tennis ball, and then bounce to success ?

Does it sit down like a grandpa  trying to rest ?
Or does it go like a shooting star trying to find its  way to destiny ?

Maybe its just trying to find its way like a centipede.

Or does it ?]]> 2020-09-16 17:37:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752605417 ginny 00025497 https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752606007 What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it reflect like a star on a lake?
Or light up like a lightning bug, and then then land on your hand?

Does it fill you up like cookies and milk?
Or fit perfectly like a glove?

Maybe it just sparkles like a eye?

Or does it light up the sky?]]> 2020-09-16 17:37:21 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752606007 Cleron Morrison https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752607010 Does it _____________ like a _______________?
Or ___________ like a ______________, and then ____________?

Does it ______________ like __________?
Or ____________ like a ____________?

Maybe it just ___________ like a ____________.

Or does it ____________?


Does is sour like a sour grape? Or speed like a roadster and then boost down the road? Maybe it just huffs and puffs like a wolf. Or does it Blow?]]> 2020-09-16 17:37:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752607010 Christian Baden https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752607718 Does it run like a child to their parents?
Or shoot like a basketball, and then scores?

Does it grow like a sapling?
Or blossom like a flower?

Maybe it just revives like a defibrillator.

Or does it jam out?]]> 2020-09-16 17:37:44 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752607718 Amaya 00028638 https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752608066 What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it feel like getting an "a" on a big test?
Or like a football team winning the super bowl?

Does it feel like becoming good at something you have struggled with?
Or make you feel like a explosion of happiness?

Maybe it's just like a one time feeling.

Or does it happen all the time?]]> 2020-09-16 17:37:48 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752608066 Dhruv 00025282 https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752609090 What happens to a dream acheived?
Does it fly like a bird flying?
Or does it grow like a flower
Does it come up like when your making tea in india?
Or does it maybe retreat like an army losing a battle
Maybe it just spirals high like a football.
Or does it make you feel energetic and pleased?


]]> 2020-09-16 17:38:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752609090 Christover https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752609618 What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it fizz like a soda rising when shaken?
Or feel warm like a blanket, and around your body?

Does it fill you with joy like a fireworks show?
Or make you feel safe like a parent's hug?

Maybe it just makes you feel cool like ac on a hot summer day.

Or does it just make you feel alive?]]> 2020-09-16 17:38:06 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752609618 Marah Carter https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752609782 What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it move steadliy like a young woman weaving a blanket?
Or rise like a muffin , and then melts over the pan?

Does it taste yummy like granny's homade Macoroni?
Or does it fly away like a bird freed of its chains?

Maybe it just ready for the future like a child with hope .

Or does it smile like a proud little girl that finished a friendship braclet?]]> 2020-09-16 17:38:09 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752609782 https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752609955 2020-09-16 17:38:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752609955 Isabella https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752610553 What Happens to a dream   achieved?_does it ____soar________ like a _____egale__________?
Or ___grow________ like a ______tree________, and then __________have braches__?

Does it ____explode__________ like __bombs________?
Or ____play________ like a ____insturment________?

Maybe it just __build_________ like a ____engineer
Or does it __just__dream bigger________?]]> 2020-09-16 17:38:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752610553 https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752613005 What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it roar like a lion?
Or soar like a eagle , and then fly?

Does it jump high like a frog?
Or scurry like a rat?

Maybe it just slithers like a snake.

Or does it stomp like an elephant?]]> 2020-09-16 17:38:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752613005 Jackson https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752614871 What happens to a dream achieved
Does it rise like the sea level?
Or ]]> 2020-09-16 17:39:12 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752614871 what happend to a dream luke lancaster https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752618549 Does it ______crumble ________ like __a dead leaf________?
Or ____dose it fly________ like a white dove __________?

Maybe it just ______crash_____ like a ___wounded bird _________.

Or does it ________fly
____?



]]> 2020-09-16 17:40:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752618549 Jordan Simpson 00032490 https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752648506 What happens to a dream achieved? Does it beam like the warm rays of sun? Or make you proud like a big smile and then you too smile back?Does it make you feel like you won?Or finish that really hard game, like an assingment that you finished before it was due ?Maybe it just a small feeling of hope, like a thought of you making it through life.Or does it make you wonder what possibilities await your arrival?

]]> 2020-09-16 17:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/752648506 Issaija Yohannes 00053999 https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/756318371 What happened to a dream achived 

Does it feel like a ballon in the sky

Or hover through the night

and then fly

 does it dive like a dolphin 

or flop and stop 
like a often

Maybe it just strong  
like a crash
or does it smash







]]> 2020-09-17 17:34:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/756318371 Lauren Thye https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/758899825 What happens to a dream achieved
Does it shine like a star ?
Or make itself clear like a diamond, and then stand out?

Does it feel soft and light  like feather?
Or rough and heavy like a boulder?

Maybe it just in the back of your mind like a forgotten memory.

Or does it live on waiting to be remembered again?]]> 2020-09-18 14:31:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/758899825 Emmerson Mack https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/759356768
What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it feel like a bird soaring ?
Or a dolphin jumping out the water, and then diving back in ?

Does it feel like a cheeta catching prey?
Maybe it just feels like your the one getting chased.

Or does it feel like a win?
]]> 2020-09-18 16:11:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/759356768 Lily Calhoun https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/759359611 What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it smell like a fresh batch of cookies?
Or taste like a bowl of ice cream, and then melt?

Does it fly like an eagle?
Or swim like a shark?

Maybe it just freezes like ice.

Or does it fall as snow?]]> 2020-09-18 16:12:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/759359611 Dominic Yeni https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/772764365 What happens to a dream achieved?

Does it hug you like the embrace of a family member?
Or does it  snatch you up like a robber?

Does it hop around merrily like a bunny?
Or does it jump and race around like a dog?

Maybe it just feels like your the one making it happy.]]> 2020-09-23 16:13:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kmanchester/onu12zcjs0dfwsak/wish/772764365