Interview on Mumbai and on the Indian economy by Torre Laurence https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq Post your audio and write a review on one of your friends' work. en-us 2017-11-23 18:33:32 UTC 2023-09-07 17:33:38 UTC hello@padlet.com Post your audio laurencetorre https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/209770803 2017-11-23 18:35:52 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/209770803 laurencetorre https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/209771491 2017-11-23 18:40:38 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/209771491 Lauren Mélody sharuka noemie https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/209939936 2017-11-24 15:10:36 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/209939936 Lauren Mélody Sharuka Noémie : Mumbai and the indian economy https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/209947386 2017-11-24 15:50:15 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/209947386 Fanny, Emilie, Milo, Rémi https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/209967731 One day : one country]]> 2017-11-24 18:37:48 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/209967731 https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/209968182 2017-11-24 18:42:36 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/209968182 Mathis, Paul, Camille, Sébastien https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/210005371 2017-11-25 07:24:10 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/210005371 Wissem, Antoine , Enzo, Matthieu https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/210212742 Get aware of India's situation as fast as you can ]]> 2017-11-26 22:31:09 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/210212742 Chems, Octave, Marie-Agathe, Flore laurencetorre https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/210483975 2017-11-27 16:10:34 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/210483975 Liudmyla, Sarah, Jade, Adèle laurencetorre https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/210485608 2017-11-27 16:12:26 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/210485608 sharuka_sivanathan https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/210515623 First of all, we congrat you for your work. We find that your work is very interesting and captivating. A lot of things in your audio are considerable. Indeed, to start the background sounds immediately captive us with all  the applauses and the noises of motorcycles. It's very realistic.
Then, your audio is very well structured and organized and the speaking time of each of you is fair.
To continue, the very particular tone that the journalist takes permit us to understand all the context of the interview. 
Furthermore, the pronunciation is really good even if sometimes there is some mistakes in the pronunciation of some words. Also the questions that the journalist asks are very well structured.
Then the three special guests give very relevant answers to the journalist's questions by taking tones adapted to their roles which permit us  to very well understand how India's economy increase and what are the problems in Dharavi.
Moreover, your interview is even more comprehensible, thanks to the use of the numerous vocabulary and important elements that we saw in class.
However this interview would have been even better if the journalist had bounced on what the special guests said.
Finally, your overall work is very good, we see the effort you supplied to do your recording.

Lauren Noémie Mélody Sharuka comment for Fanny, Emilie, Milo and Rémi's recording]]> 2017-11-27 16:54:23 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/210515623 https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211333402 2017-11-29 11:18:18 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211333402 Barnabé, Denis, Adèle T, Abel laurencetorre https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211347844 2017-11-29 12:13:42 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211347844 Killian, Marvin, Florent laurencetorre https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211348298 2017-11-29 12:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211348298 Gabriel, Lucas, Jeanne, Maelie laurencetorre https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211348715 2017-11-29 12:17:23 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211348715 Commentary on Flore's group https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211448554
Well done ! 
Your oral is good.
You resume all the elements that you study in class, in particular on the Mumbai’s shanty town and you reuse the vocabulary that you learn, so it's a good job. 
The intonation of the journalist is very good and it seems realistic but sometimes there is a lack of fluidity. Lastly, be careful on the pronunciation of some words like « dire poverty »… 

From Gabriel, Maelie, Jeanne and Lucas to Chems, Octave, Marie-Agathe and Flore. 

]]> 2017-11-29 15:32:58 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211448554 Fanny Emilie Remi and Milo's group https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211576208 Good Work !
 Your exhibition is well structured and each character is audible and relatively comprehensible. We understand each character and their role. On the other hand the pronunciation could be more fluent (except Mr Rajani ^^ )
  However, the notions of the course stand out and give us a vision on India on different points of view but the interviewer doesn't bounce enough on what has just been said.
The whole remains very satisfactory and interesting. Well done !

]]> 2017-11-29 19:01:02 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211576208 To https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211632053 2017-11-29 20:53:01 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211632053 About Noemie's Lauren 's Sharuka's Melody's production Overall, it was a great work. I’ve been able to refresh my memory about the elements of the texts that were used in this interview. So that means you haven’t gone into insanity and you haven’t invented random stuff. It seems like you’ve mastered and acknowledged it even though sometimes i discover new diseases in your sentences :))).What i mean is that you have to give the impression that you speak naturally and with ease. In a way it’s nice to try complicated sentences but grammatically it has to stay rock solid.Sharuka’s speech was perfect nothing to say. Noemie on the next french lesson i’d like you to explain to me what is a “triangle of swampy” and how do you die like “insexts”. Picking up words directly from the text was smart in order to respect its meaning but i don’t know if it wouldn’t have been better if you explained with your own words. Then, A lot of mispronunciations have been done throughout the recording.Finally, although you were laughing, it seems that you were quite nervous: you need to relax, to be as clear as possible, because i actually haven’t understood everything about Rishi Rajani: it was like a high level of stuttering as dark as wissem’s not so sacrate intentions(lewd). Melody do you dream of shakespeare because it looks like madness.Anyway, it was a funny listening and a pleasure to comment. Antoine Wissem Matthieu Enzo https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211635217 2017-11-29 21:02:42 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211635217 Comment for Barnabé's group https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211644174 I think that its a good work, you make a good usage of the lesson's vocabulary. There is no big pronunciation mistakes, there's a good restitution of the documents. But I'm conviced that the work may be divide better, the questions ask to Daharavi's habitent are closed and than the answer are very short, twice are just "yes" or "no" (and she is too happy for a destitute woman but its a detail). Yet the part of Rishi have a good development and show his mentality. The one of the teacher  is good to, just a little hesitant. Concerning the presentator, he his very uncertain at the beginning but become fluent quickly. 
Mathis, Sebastien, Camille et Paul]]> 2017-11-29 21:32:42 UTC https://padlet.com/laurencetorre/onc8n8wvh4wq/wish/211644174