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      <description>How to write academically in IELTS Writing Task 2</description>
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         <title>Which factors are attributed to an academic writing style?</title>
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         <title>Can you make it sound more academic? </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>People have to protect old buildings because they still have a lot of benefits for the society.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Can you make it sound more academic? </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Children can’t choose what they should eat so parents must choose for their kids.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Can you make it sound more academic? </title>
         <author>camthunp</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Healthy and well-educated citizens are very important in any society.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-19 12:55:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Paragraph 1: What is the problem of this paragraph?</title>
         <author>camthunp</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>On the one hand, eating at home can be detrimental for many reasons. One of the key drawbacks is that it takes longer than eating conventional food. Everyone, especially workers and children, who are busy, would like something quick right now. As a result, they refuse to cook and opt for an alternative to save time. Another significant disadvantage is that having meals at home costs a great deal of money. For example, when you go to the supermarket and purchase some food, it is tricky to find some products that are both cheap and wholesome. Therefore, if you spend that money on something at the restaurant or groceries, you will have more options.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-20 00:51:43 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Paragraph 2: What is the problem of this paragraph?</title>
         <author>camthunp</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>On the one hand, eating homemade food can be highly beneficial for many reasons. One of the key advantages is homemade food is more wholesome and homemade food can save considerable money. Another significant benefit is you don’t have to move out when you are having meals at home and save your assets.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-20 00:53:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Paragraph 3: What is the problem of this paragraph?</title>
         <author>camthunp</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>When you are getting so accustomed to eating alone or with your family, then this is the perfect moment to get out of the door and try more new things. Eating out can be a little bit fancy but the food is definitely better than homemade cooking.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Paragraph 4: What is the problem of this paragraph?</title>
         <author>camthunp</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>On the one hand, there might numerous disadvantages in terms of time. They have to take much time to search several nutritious food, research ingredients and how to cook them. Furthermore, some of those dishes are difficult to cook or having many steps. Therefore, they have to waste much time on their home food and might be late for work.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-20 00:54:57 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Paragraph 5: What is the problem of this paragraph?</title>
         <author>camthunp</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The second benefit that should be taken into consideration is homemade better for health. In this modern age when people have lots of tasks in hand, ready meals and quick snacks gaining in popularity, are definitely innutritious than home-cooked food, which are able to provide the substances necessary for health.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-20 00:58:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Huy</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>People&nbsp;must have a conservation for the old building which are beneficial to them </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-20 02:32:53 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hanh Pham</title>
         <author>hanhpham22906</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. People have to preserve old buildings these day because they still has a lot of historical building values and benefit for the society.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-20 02:35:03 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Linh Chee</title>
         <author>trinhhalinhchi2005</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1.&nbsp; Age-old architectures need to be preserved due to their numerous benefits for the society.<br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-20 02:36:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Bảo Châu</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. People have to protect old buildings because they still have a lot of benefits for the society&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; -&gt; Old structure have to be preserve due to their numerous social benefits.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;<br>&nbsp;2. Healthy and well-educated citizens are very important in any society.<br>-&gt; Inhabitants who are healthy and well-eduated are extremely valuable in socity<br>3.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-20 02:36:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>bống</title>
         <author>glinhh1107</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. people has responsibility to preserve the old buildings which are beneficial for them.<br>2. in any society, it is extremely important for the citizens to be healthy and well-educated.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-20 02:37:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Phương Linh</title>
         <author>ngphuonglinh711</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>People with more education are often spared the health-harming stresses that accompany prolonged social and economic hardship.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-20 02:37:59 UTC</pubDate>
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         <author>nemo5112006</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. People have to protect aged constructions because they still have exact usefulness for society.<br>2. Healthy and well-educated residents are extremely essential in any association.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-03-20 02:42:45 UTC</pubDate>
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