https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d Made with charm en-us 2019-10-07 12:54:44 UTC 2019-10-10 18:53:52 UTC hello@padlet.com bbrittnay55 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394413089 The peer editing was a helpful process because i got a understanding of my essay from another person's point of view. A point of view that could fix my errors and give me a better understanding. The construct feedback help improve my writing because i got an understanding of the way thing's/essays should be written. I got a better view of how i should introduce my topic and how to end off my esssy. The peer editing also shows me how essays should and how they are going to be graded and how i should structure my essay.🗿]]> 2019-10-07 13:05:17 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394413089 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394415004 The Peer editing process is helpful because without it I will not be able to see my errors in my paper. Such as grammatical mistakes, topic sentences, transition words, background information as well as conclusion. Recently my peer has graded the essay and said it was a 3 only because the introduction and conclusion. My conclusion doesn't describe how the traits make her successful and the introduction needs more background knowledge. However I have provided evidence and have a good structure towards the expository essay. I've also have only 2 grammatical errors and getting evidence from both texts "i couldn't imagine wanting to dye my hair blond" and "College Admissions Guide: Process And Prep" that supports the claim Mendoza is unique and confident. ]]> 2019-10-07 13:08:26 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394415004 tyrahannd https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394415998 Do you think that Christina Mendoza could be a successful person in college? In the story "I couldn't imagine dying my hair blond". She started as hating herself for what she looked like and being different form the others. At the end she came to realize that she is beautiful and unique in her own way. Christina Mendoza could be a successful college student because she is unique, and self-reflecting. 

Mendoza is unique because she is different from other people. No one is ]]> 2019-10-07 13:09:51 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394415998 campbell_ela381 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394416696 Campbell

The peer editing process was helpful because it identified that I needed a claim in the introduction.   Through my editor's comment in "grow" it states, Ms. Campbell "you must include a claim in the introduction that identifies two traits of Christina Mendoza."  This comment helps me improve the introduction and follow the outline for the essay.  The peer editor also pointed out that my essay needed a concluding transition in the conclusion.   This comment helped me meet the criteria required in the rubric that states "does the essay have a ear conclusion that summarizes the ideas. "  These are two ways the peer editing process helped me improve my essay.

]]> 2019-10-07 13:10:50 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394416696 jaylonnk https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394416746 Yes it was helpful. It was helpful because I realized my mistakes and where I need to put different information that I need. The construction feedback was what made me realize what I need to work on in my essay. I needed to put my claim and explain more than I thought I needed to put. 💭]]> 2019-10-07 13:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394416746 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394417304 10/7/2019                       8-326

The peer edit process helped because it helps to identify errors and mistake. The peer edit identify the mistake that I made. It was helpful because in my essay it showed the mistake and what I need to work on. The peer edit helped me to not make the same mistakes and It helps others to identify problem. The peer edit helps because your work is being judge by other student so they would find the problem because they don't expect what to come up next so there brains focus on the text.]]> 2019-10-07 13:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394417304 addmetra123 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394417633 The peer editing process was helpful. The construction feedback help to improve my writing  because now I know what i need to grow on, and what i did good on. My editor comment in ''grow'' it states Aaliyah you need ''more background information'' this comment will help me on my next writing because now i will add more background information. she also stated ''grammar and punctuation'' this what i need to go over with. This is how the peer editing helps my writing.  ]]> 2019-10-07 13:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394417633 victoriamck1208 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394417887 The peer editing process was helpful to me. It was helpful to me because it advised me on how to edit my essay better. The constructive feedback helped me to improve my writing because my peer editor wrote for me to work on things like "use more background information" and it also said "add more in the conclusion" So this showed that I need to work on those things. It also helped showed what I did good on in the essay. That is why peer editing was helpful.]]> 2019-10-07 13:12:22 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394417887 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394419093 The peer editing process was helpful to me because my editor helped me know that i didn’t really have any grammatical errors, had all my evidence and information to support it, clear intro and conclusion . For content and analysis i got a 4 and says that i have background information on the chats he traits. In command of evidence i also have two pieces of evidence and it supports the claim. In addition to Coherence and Control of conventions I have no grammatical errors and my conclusion restates the claim.  ]]> 2019-10-07 13:13:54 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394419093 jeanshadey https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394419750 Peer editing  process is helpful  to  me  because it helps me get feedback from my classmates  they tell you  what you did wrong and right  when you  read your  own  work  you may  not  see your mistake but when  you're peer does you see it  the feedback help  me because I had to fix my transition world  and thing I spelled  wrong  that how feed back  and peer  editing helped me improve my writing. ]]> 2019-10-07 13:14:34 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394419750 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394419986 The peer editing process was helpful because the person that is editing your essay tells you the mistakes you did to fix them. Your editor can tell your errors and your spelling mistakes. That your editor can tel you that you need more deviance and information to support your claim. I need to add more information for my character trait and state more evidence for my back round information. The feed back helped me by helping me know what mistakes i need to fix.]]> 2019-10-07 13:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394419986 aa8721033 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394420087 2019-10-07 13:15:00 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394420087 nembhard_justin https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394420573 JUSTIN Nembhard

The peer editing process was helpful because it shows me what I need to improve when doing someone else’s paper. Also its help me by reading someone paper that is Has a Three or Four on there paper so I can try to Do. It is helpful because it show how i must put my next essay Like put more  information on the text. Restate the claim and fix my punctuation. My  Feedback i got to me to put more background information in my essay.It also tell me what i need to do next time and make changes to my essay]]> 2019-10-07 13:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394420573 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394422412 I’m The constructive feedback help improved my essay by helping me know that my introduction was ok but I need to work on it. My evidence need to be more so I can explain my traits. My grammar is good but I need to improve. My introduction, claim and topic sentence need to get work on. The feedback tell me what I should improve on and what is already good. ]]> 2019-10-07 13:17:59 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394422412 maydjina89 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394424344
 Peer editing process helpful to me because with out it   I wouldn't  know my mistakes. The constructive feedback help me improved my writing by telling me that my mistakes.]]> 2019-10-07 13:20:42 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394424344 ladainanr1995 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394424595 How the peer editing process helpful to me is when now when i am doing a essay i will know how to write an expository essay. i will know how to the write the claim correctly. Also know how to push my work so my work could be better.]]> 2019-10-07 13:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394424595 ljnewman1226 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394425294 The peer editing process was helpful to me because it helped me realize what I was missing in my essay. For example missing the punctuation after my transition words. As my peer stated "put punctuation after using transition words." The construct feedback helped me improve my writing by showing what I need to improve on in my next essay. My peer says " next time use the college text so you can compare it to Mendoza more." She also said "I like how you used the evidence from the story to support my claim."]]> 2019-10-07 13:21:53 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394425294 larcherciara097 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394425297 The peer editing process is helpful to me because it told me what I did good at and how I can fix the errors that I made. My peer said that “I really liked how you used evidence from another article to help support your claim.” My peer liked how I used to article to support my claim. My peer said that “ I liked how you compared Mendoza to the college. My peer liked how I compared Mendoza and the college. The construct feedback help me to improve my writing by telling me how I can use Good transitions my peer said that “Next time be sure to put punctuation after your transition words.” When I use a transition word I have to put a comma after the word. My peer said that “ I like how your writing was structured.” My peer liked how I made my essay line up.]]> 2019-10-07 13:21:53 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394425297 maydjina89 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394430021 2019-10-07 13:28:01 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394430021 maydjina89 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394430056 2019-10-07 13:28:04 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394430056 maydjina89 https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394430096 2019-10-07 13:28:07 UTC https://padlet.com/brizard4/omf4dmhqyj1d/wish/394430096