https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k Leave some encouraging feedback for your classmate based on the rubric! en-us 2017-09-27 12:55:31 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653383 - I liked that your project was about the prison fashion
- Good eye contact 
- Try to sound a little more professional and try to use less words like "basically, like, whatever, you know"
- You had nice drawings 
- You included a great variety of outfits that could be worn on different occasions
- You provided a great explanation for each outfit you designed]]> 2017-09-27 13:29:52 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653383 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653398 I liked your designs and the audience could tell you were passionate about your designs and the topic. I feel like you could have used the word "like" a lot less because it makes it seem like you aren't confident with your strong PowerPoint. ]]> 2017-09-27 13:29:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653398 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653415 Very good voice projection and eye contact]]> 2017-09-27 13:29:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653415 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653416 Nice elaboration on your answers to the beginning questions, especially with semi- specific and relatable examples!
The grammar and spelling in your PowerPoint could be improved a bit (ex. "Most forever 21 clothes is made here" - "is" should be 'are' and "...the rest is a darker or range" - "or range" should be 'orange'.)
Very nice examples of inspiration, color, and symbolism in your outfits.
Nice eye contact with the class.
Good detail in your drawings of your designs!

]]> 2017-09-27 13:29:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653416 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653422 - relax girl, you’re a little stiff
- creative
- use more vocabulary
- good eye contact and voice projection 
- creative outfits 
- really knows how to tie in the outfits to prison
- stay on topic 


]]> 2017-09-27 13:29:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653422 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653485 Use more professional vocabulary 

Be relatable but don't use like, you know, teenage vocab

Thank you for putting the iPad down

Good job at directing your presentation to us

Thank you for  giving us insight into your project

Nice creative ideas that have been well thought out

Good job!]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653485 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653541 - Good job keeping the audience’s attention 
-  Very creative/ cute clothes 
- I love how your autfits represent something...]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653541 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653599 She presented to us more than the wall. She was loud but not too loud as well. She was very creative in this project. Use better wording and not "yes that". Stay more on topic and don't go off the trail. She was kind of confusing in her wording. She kept repeating her words and phrases. Don't keep saying "you know" because maybe we don't. Very cute clothes though. ]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:12 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653599 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653625 - explain your prices
- very beautifully drawn pictures
- explain why prisoners should be given these special clothes ]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:16 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653625 shraitar000 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653643 - Very passionate
- Clothes were well thought of
- Great eye contact]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:19 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653643 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653657 Creative
Expensive clothes]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653657 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653685 - I like what you learned from the book 
- I like your inspiration, very creative 
- Good drawings 
- Good references to the book
- ]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653685 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653689 - I could tell you spend time on creating the outfits. 
- Good eye contact
- Be more confident!! Your project is good.]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653689 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653800 very passionate speaker.

You say um alot  you do not sound confident after too many um's.

Good comparison to the book and using other information rather than those on the slides.]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653800 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653842 Know your presentation. 
Diction.
Loud and clear 
Don’t move so much 


]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653842 bayonjoh001 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653854 Lots of artwork.
You sound very stressed. 
Calm down]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653854 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653907 She audiates her voice, energetic, commits her presentation with a strong eye contact, speaks with hand gestures, and even grants us with great visual representation on her PowerPoint. She gave a fantastic presentation by keeping the audience engaged, very good job.]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653907 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653938 Started off rough but your confidence builds up.
Good eye contact
Good explanations on your outfits and the reasons why you designed it like that.]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653938 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653952 - Absolutely loved how you started off your presentation and showed great confidence.
- Outfits are explained very well.
- Great presentation!]]> 2017-09-27 13:30:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191653952 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191654423 Good PowerPoint, you made good eye contact and spoke up
Good drawings and ideas with the clothing 
Loved how you incorporated the colors/designs into the statement you wanted to prove]]> 2017-09-27 13:31:42 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191654423 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191654564 -loved the deigns
-very creative 
-sounded very passionate about It 
-Expand your vocabulary ]]> 2017-09-27 13:32:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191654564 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191654757 Really easy going

Confident

Better vocabulary

Good eye contact

BOI MORE CONFIDENCE your drawings are actually really nice ]]> 2017-09-27 13:32:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191654757 https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191655952 -had really nice designs 
-have your sentences flow better
-enthusiastic ]]> 2017-09-27 13:34:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/olfoxef56f3k/wish/191655952