Conventions Wall by Breana Hunter https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug Write your grammatically improved sentence. Remember to either sign-in using Google or write your name. No name equals no credit!!! en-us 2017-10-02 20:28:54 UTC 2025-10-29 17:53:49 UTC hello@padlet.com Phoenix Rose https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1820297477 It didnt ask me to change anything. ]]> 2021-10-15 19:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1820297477 It didnt ask me to change anything. 2133307 https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1820420908 2021-10-15 21:10:26 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1820420908 Bayley Distel 2125168 https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1824254680 It did not ask me to change anything. ]]> 2021-10-18 14:10:10 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1824254680 Lara Baxter 2123387 https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1825026250 It didn't ask me to change anything.]]> 2021-10-18 18:37:08 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1825026250 Johnny Heberlein https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1825082575 It didn't tell me to change anything.]]> 2021-10-18 19:00:02 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1825082575 Silas Perlman https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1825108333 It had me fix a word that I used twice in the same sentence.]]> 2021-10-18 19:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1825108333 Charlie Metzger https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1825127359 I didn't need to change anything except for when I accidentally put couldn instead of couldn't.]]> 2021-10-18 19:20:47 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1825127359 Kelsie Brewer https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1825419981 It didn't ask me to change anything except when I said the same word twice and spelled a word wrong.]]> 2021-10-18 22:24:44 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1825419981 Nathan Rodriguez https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1827312819 I did not need to change anything.]]> 2021-10-19 14:09:01 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1827312819 Colton KZ https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1827315299 There was anything to change.]]> 2021-10-19 14:09:38 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1827315299 Kiva C https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1827333194 It did not ask me to change anything]]> 2021-10-19 14:14:14 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1827333194 https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1827352892 It only had me change a few errors with spelling.]]> 2021-10-19 14:19:17 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1827352892 Kaiya Howard https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1827355460 It only asked me to change spelling]]> 2021-10-19 14:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1827355460 Brody https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1827611894 It did not tell me to fix anything]]> 2021-10-19 15:29:34 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1827611894 Jack Gelwick https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1828231582 I changed “Oh no, cmon Lila, now you're going to be sick!”
to “Oh no, cmon Lila, now you're going to get sick!”]]> 2021-10-19 18:58:19 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1828231582 Grace Klepper https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1828237426 It didn't ask me to fix anything]]> 2021-10-19 19:00:52 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1828237426 Darian Lewis https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1828274971 It did not ask me to fix anything.]]> 2021-10-19 19:17:27 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1828274971 Alexis Wera https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1828281884 I didn't change anything ]]> 2021-10-19 19:20:45 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1828281884 Leila Huynh https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1828617535 I changed, "The car was filled with silence as everyone was occupied by their own thoughts;" to "The car was silent as everyone occupied themselves with their own thoughts;"]]> 2021-10-19 22:30:40 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1828617535 Lincoln Gentry https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1830468793 It did not want to chang anything]]> 2021-10-20 14:02:58 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1830468793 Chase R https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1830706710 It did not tell me to fix nothin ]]> 2021-10-20 15:06:22 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1830706710 Whitney Dewicki https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1830803069 It did not need to change anything. ]]> 2021-10-20 15:33:29 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1830803069 Mignayah Greene 2145397 https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1830974523 It told me to fix some of my punctuation and so I added the correct punctuation to my sentences. ]]> 2021-10-20 16:26:06 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1830974523 Payton Ethridge https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831225505 I did not need to change anyhting]]> 2021-10-20 17:52:06 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831225505 Addy H 2123379 https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831230920 I didnt need to change anything]]> 2021-10-20 17:54:03 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831230920 I had been expecting a package that day, and it was finally there! 2173568 https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831285295 2021-10-20 18:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831285295 Erin Woodworth https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831399312 I needed to add capital letters to certain words like "denver"----"Denver"]]> 2021-10-20 19:00:05 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831399312 Maleia Stern https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831417232 “Umm... I am fine, but there is something weird going on,” I said in a whisper.]]> 2021-10-20 19:07:46 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831417232 Ella https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831423124 I didn't say anything I really needed to fix, just some slight misspellings on a few words]]> 2021-10-20 19:10:21 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831423124 Alaina R https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831446318 It didn't tell me to fix anything except i forgot the ' in don't. ]]> 2021-10-20 19:20:04 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831446318 Maddie Otero https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831447380 I just needed to fix my punctuation. ]]> 2021-10-20 19:20:32 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831447380 Riley Henry https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831849628 Nothing to change.]]> 2021-10-20 23:19:02 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1831849628 I fixed some stuff https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1832389974 2021-10-21 03:28:54 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1832389974 https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1833598771 Once they were ready for us we went into the room and I sat down in the big chair and the doctor stitched and stapled in while my mom read to me so that I would not notice they were doing that. ]]> 2021-10-21 14:01:58 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1833598771 ananymos https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1833872678  i fixed a lot of things]]> 2021-10-21 15:12:42 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1833872678 Allan Paul https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1834092087 I had nothing to change.]]> 2021-10-21 16:22:27 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1834092087 Trenton Moret https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1834380924 I had grabbed from my suitcase in my hand. Then “Hey that is my shirt not yours,” my older brother said
Changed to: I had grabbed my shirt from my suitcase in my hand. Then “Hey that is my shirt, not yours,” my older brother said
]]> 2021-10-21 18:12:15 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1834380924 Colbie Giles https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1834486977 I did not need to change anything.]]> 2021-10-21 18:59:35 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1834486977 Adriana Arrastia https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1834823300 I just fixed some words I misspelled.]]> 2021-10-21 22:46:20 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1834823300 chayanne m https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1834986915  I went back to the front of the whirlpool and met up with Aiden. I looked around and saw a bunch of floating on the water.]]> 2021-10-22 00:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1834986915 I think I'm good on punctuation, Thanks though. 21207323_1 https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1835009518 2021-10-22 00:49:08 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1835009518 Shaun Graeser https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1835231439 I put my dialogue in the proper format]]> 2021-10-22 02:25:25 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1835231439 Liliana Akbary 2126400 https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1835369286 The only thing I really fixed were my spelling errors. ]]> 2021-10-22 03:30:55 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1835369286 Sophia Bui https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1835615579 Grace and I pushed open the heavy front doors of Westridge Elementary with a strong thrust.]]> 2021-10-22 06:29:30 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1835615579 Grant McKissack https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1836553057 i fixed some of my wording and spelling errors]]> 2021-10-22 15:10:22 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1836553057 Alana Bradley https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1836980169 There were a few misspellings but not much that needed to be fixed]]> 2021-10-22 18:20:45 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1836980169 I had to change nothing. 2212427 https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1837047747 2021-10-22 18:58:34 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1837047747 Abby O. https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1845264635 "I know it's hard to imagine, but I was even more shy back then." (Sentence used to have two "but"s)]]> 2021-10-26 14:51:32 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1845264635 DionMontez https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1851428467 I only had to fix my spelling]]> 2021-10-28 14:05:10 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1851428467 Kieran Tucker https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1866343055 It kept saying to change spelling when it didn't realize that was how a write and some of it were metaphors.]]> 2021-11-04 02:27:34 UTC https://padlet.com/blhunter1/ol9lwhsk44ug/wish/1866343055