Opening by english2 english2 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo How can you hook the readers in and make them want to read more by writing a good opening? You and your friend were going home after school one day. While you were on the bus, you found a bag containing $50,000 on your seat. Write a story about what happened and how you dealt with the money. en-us 2019-09-27 01:24:35 UTC 2021-09-20 15:23:01 UTC hello@padlet.com HAILIE 3a02 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745197507 Conversations between the police and me.

'You can start now.' 

'Hey, I am Amy and what happened now is my roommate disappeared....]]> 2021-09-16 07:15:21 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745197507 Hoi Chi 3A15 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745547554 Conversation between John and me:

"Hey, what happened to you?"

"I don't know, I just felt that I'm not being controlled by something! It is very strange! Ahhhhhhh!"

]]> 2021-09-16 10:13:04 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745547554 WILLEM 3B25 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745580759 A shocking statement about what the mum said:
The telephone owned by my classmate called Jack rang. He picked it up and heard a loud voice came from his mum: ' Come back home! Quick! Emergency! Or else your dad is going to suicide!!!!!!!' ]]> 2021-09-16 10:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745580759 Andy 3A28 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745616709 ‘Help’ saying by some one with a scary voice outside my room. I am not sure whether is Tom’s , who is my roommate , he just leaving our student hall. Being curious with it, I take a look in the corridor by opening the door slowly.]]> 2021-09-16 10:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745616709 Halyn 3B19 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745717489 Flashback of the reason why my roommate left:
When I opened the door of the store room, a shocking scence have shown to my eyes. And now, I realised why Ian left the school hall. As the room was full of...]]> 2021-09-16 11:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745717489 3A06 Kiki https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745718554 "You have seen Jennifer Lopez before? The one who appears in the Coin Master advertisement?" Shelly, my roommate, seems excited.
I told her the day I met Jennifer Lopez in the supermarket when I incidentally attacked her village, and finally, we exchanged our friend ID in Coin Master.]]> 2021-09-16 11:58:46 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745718554 Hannah 3A04 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745732724 Flashback:
Sitting and crying desperately in the corridor with heart broken into pieces. Teasing at myself of what I did to Amy and made she leave. Holding tightly with the reason of why she left.]]> 2021-09-16 12:06:22 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745732724 3A05 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745743933 I was shocked by Christine's pale face. With tears, she murmured in a trembling tone, "I cannot stay here. " "Wait...What do you mean? " "It's fate. " "But..." She put her finger on her lip. Then left the school hall and disappered into the darkness. ]]> 2021-09-16 12:11:28 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745743933 Kyle 3B23 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745749737 Flashback of why my roommate left:
I looked at the dead body of John. His body was full of blood and his eyes were wide open. I cleaned up the evidence and left the scene. This was a risky night for me. ...]]> 2021-09-16 12:14:20 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745749737 James 3A26 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745787520 The telephone in our room rang. Sam picked it up. The voice on the phone said,"I'm watching you"]]> 2021-09-16 12:32:30 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745787520 3A29 Kelvin https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745826099 "Get away from me!" Jeremy said. If I hadn't brought him to that place, we would be safe now...]]> 2021-09-16 12:44:00 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745826099 Savanna 3B16 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745836641 ‘I’m not gonna stay in the hall anymore,’ Alexis said, holding her huge teddy bear as tied as she could. 

‘What happened to you, dude?’ I asked her, while sitting down next to her. 
]]> 2021-09-16 12:48:14 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745836641 Gabriel 3B33 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745880059 An anonymous number dialled Andy's phone. 'Come to Kwai Chung Container Terminal within 30 minutes, or else your girlfriend will die.' The anonymous man said.]]> 2021-09-16 13:03:35 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745880059 Jaden 3C15 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745903318 I saw him standing there and called out his name. With a shook expression on his face, he ran away.]]> 2021-09-16 13:11:55 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745903318 Hazel 3A15 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745978556 Flashback:
I looked at the letter my roommate Mary wrote to me “ I know you are a murderer and I won’t let you kill me, I am leaving forever and you will never find me.]]> 2021-09-16 13:34:58 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1745978556 Emily Ng 3D07 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746001062 On the night of the full moon, the wind was blowing towards me from the direction of the door. I wake up and walk to the door. ‘Jane, did you forget to lock the door? Hey, where are you?’ She is gone! Where does she go? I decided to go out and find her.]]> 2021-09-16 13:41:37 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746001062 Emily Wong 3A12 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746026842 When I was sleeping, the telephone rang. A man said ,'give me $6,000,000, otherwise I will kill your friend .Also ,don't try to tell anyone or call the police .If you do that,I'll abduct your boyfriend.']]> 2021-09-16 13:49:23 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746026842 Henry 3B30 s19112811 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746027943 He shouldn't be like that. He forgot to submit papers, forgot my birthday, and on that day, he even forgot to bring himself back to the dormitory.]]> 2021-09-16 13:49:44 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746027943 3B32 Haron https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746086804 Flashback: Slowly, I got out of my bed and sneakily followed him through the empty hallways and into the school basement. I walked up and peeked through the door, and saw his hands covered in blood and there was a body lying on the floor...]]> 2021-09-16 14:07:57 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746086804 3A03 Cherry https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746132979 Flashback : I hadn't seen her again since that day.She might not know how confused I was,but now,I was still here waiting for her to come back.]]> 2021-09-16 14:22:32 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746132979 Sophia (actually i don't know which kind this is) https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746150911 The teacher calling her? I saw. The teacher questioning her? I watched. The teacher dialing her home number? I heard. But I didn't do anything.]]> 2021-09-16 14:28:16 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746150911 Pneuma 3B31 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746327817 Tom closed his eyes, and started to fall down from this towering building.
‘No!’ I cried helplessly…

I opened my eyes and was hyperventilating. My body was covered by a cold sweat.
‘Phew! It was just a nightmare.’

 ]]> 2021-09-16 15:26:40 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746327817 Mandy 3B17 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746391763 ‘Today at Hong Kong university station, a 20-year-old girl was stabbed eight times by a…’ I closed the TV, looking at the bandage on the girl. I wish that i could turn back time, with the incessant remorse in my heart.]]> 2021-09-16 15:48:17 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746391763 3B04 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746403524 "What have I done?" I questioned myself and looked at the corpse laid on the floor. The blood dyed my tee, from white to red. "You've killed her" A sound in my head.

]]> 2021-09-16 15:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746403524 Jacky 3B20 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746789986 "Three, two, one... Cheers!" The light of the camera flashes at us ,then it dims out, as slowly as if time itself stopped from its long journey to take a glance of pity at me and Tom.




]]> 2021-09-16 18:51:29 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1746789986 Rachel 3B07 https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1747115512 Intimidate, kidnapping and death. Things I never imagined would happen around me. ‘Everything happens with their reasons.’ Why these three words became the reason of my roommate leave?]]> 2021-09-16 22:56:28 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1747115512 3C11 Ethan https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1754369441 The moment I loaded my pistol, the moment I hold down the trigger, the moment the bullet flies out of the barrels and hit him right in the chest, what I had committed will never be forgotten.]]> 2021-09-20 15:10:44 UTC https://padlet.com/english213/ojci9tybcogo/wish/1754369441