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SETTING

vogelroom112_gr — 2013-10-08 13:54:14 UTC

I am at the park with my son/brother I have been working on being a real mother instead of having my parents take care of him most of the time. He doesn't deseve it.

NEEDS

vogelroom112_gr — 2013-10-08 14:02:34 UTC

I need to get my son/brother and my parents to trust me to take care of my kids. I want to have them trust me so I can have another kid with my husband,Royce.

INCITING INCIDENT

vogelroom112_gr — 2013-10-08 14:09:40 UTC

At the park a man comes up to me and asks how old I was when I told him he said shame on me and takes his kid and leaves.

COMPLICATIONS

vogelroom112_gr — 2013-10-08 14:15:13 UTC

1.I go to the mall with Royce and Ben(my son/brother) we go to a store to get Ben some new clothes and the lady at the store refuses to sell the clothes to me.

2.I argue with her and she calls security and I have to go to mall jail.

3.When I finally get to call Royce and he tells me that he will be right there my parents show up instead and we all and up spending all day in mall prison.

HELP

vogelroom112_gr — 2013-10-08 22:40:00 UTC

When I can't take any longer my old friend Dolores sees us and bales us out.

LESSON

vogelroom112_gr — 2013-10-08 22:41:59 UTC

Dolores isn't that bad of a person all the time and that maybe I shouldn't take Ben with me all the time!

RESOLUTION

vogelroom112_gr — 2013-10-08 23:02:33 UTC

I think that I'm going to let my parents take care of Ben for a little bit after that incident I think I need a little time to tell myself that it dosn't matter what other people say you're a good mom/sister to him and he will love you no matter what.

SEEDFOLK REFERENCES

vogelroom112_gr — 2013-10-09 00:31:49 UTC

A.Royce from Curtis and Amir's chapters

B.Dolores from Maricela

C.She was young when she had her child