Use of reflection by Nick White https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection Made with good vibes en-us 2016-09-01 13:44:32 UTC 2016-09-26 10:18:03 UTC hello@padlet.com You have stated your choice of a reflective model but do not appear to have used it.  nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/121080013 2016-09-01 13:45:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/121080013 Please use a recognisable reflective model nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/121080219 2016-09-01 13:45:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/121080219 The use of 'I' is acceptable in a reflective text. Your over use of 'I' has given the text a descriptive feel. nickwhite26 https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/121080454 2016-09-01 13:46:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/121080454 The use of more examples from practice would give your reflective discussions some depth catejohns https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/124415449 2016-09-16 16:41:55 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/124415449 The use of examples from practice that were challenging would provide you with the basis for a richer analysis catejohns https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/124415947 2016-09-16 16:43:14 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/124415947 It is clear from your writing that you show care and compassion.  As a nurse we need you to use reflection to rationalise the care that you give and how you prioritise your thoughts https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/124559223 2016-09-18 12:13:47 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/124559223 You need to apply more of the theory to your scenario. This will enable you to achieve better refection. https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/126309281 2016-09-26 10:15:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/126309281 You need to refer more to your scenario to raise the level of reflection. Otherwise, you will produce a theoretical essay rather than a reflective one. https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/126309470 2016-09-26 10:17:03 UTC https://padlet.com/nickwhite26/academicreflection/wish/126309470