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lin_lihui — 2023-05-18 05:16:40 UTC

a. ONE thing that is good about the presentation
b. ONE thing that requires improvement.
c. ONE thing that Ill work/focus on during my presentation

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2023-05-19 01:09:27 UTC

a. one thing that is good about the presentation
- good eye contact

b. one thing that requires improvement
- there are some fillers (e.g. um)

c. one thing that i'll work / focus on during my presentation
- more eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:10:23 UTC

a. all the members spoke loudly

b. your clicker

c. speaking loudly

2023-05-19 01:10:41 UTC

a. very loud very nice
b. some slides weren't hidden????
c. Eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:10:53 UTC

- most of them could project their voice
- However, they kept looking down to read from pld

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2023-05-19 01:11:25 UTC

-loud enough to be heard
-clicker was so confused
-eye contact

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caratinyteume_ — 2023-05-19 01:11:33 UTC

a. they were pretty loud when speaking which is good so that everyone can hear them.

b. they could be like a little more accurate with the description

c. eye contact

feetback

2023-05-19 01:11:35 UTC

a. they were very loud and clear
b. nil
c. eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:11:48 UTC

a. they had good eye contact
b. speak louder?
c. ill speak louder

sarah_woon_kit_xin — 2023-05-19 01:11:56 UTC

Very loud

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2023-05-19 01:12:09 UTC

A. they had good eye contact with the audience and are well prepared.
B. the person clicking should be more aware of the presentation
C. should reduce fillers.
( well done guys!!)

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2023-05-19 01:12:27 UTC

a. They had good eye contact with the audience
b. Speaking a bit louder
c.speaking loudly

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2023-05-19 01:12:59 UTC

Presenters spoke in a clear and concise manner. Their speech was fluent and not choppy. I also really like their inference. However, I did observe that some of the speaker's posture was not the best. Some of the speakers were leaning on the wall, or having crossed ankles. In addition, I think group 3 should improve on their eye contact with the audience.
Overall, I think group 3 did great, but they did have some area of improvements they need to work on.

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madhani_hridayaa_alok — 2023-05-19 01:13:31 UTC

a) One good thing good thing about their grp is that the seriousness that they showed and that they spoke loudly

b)The clicking of the slides were as bit messy but overall was ok.

c)Making eye contact with the audience.

pooja

palanikumar_pooja — 2023-05-19 01:14:53 UTC

a. they were greatly confident and spoke very loudly
b. they did not convert from one person to another person very smoothly
c.eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:15:18 UTC

a. They were able to project their voices very well
b. Pausing randomly
c. Eye contact

pooja

palanikumar_pooja — 2023-05-19 01:17:53 UTC

a. they very audible and explained their points well
b.nil
c.eye contact

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madhani_hridayaa_alok — 2023-05-19 01:17:55 UTC

a) The grp spoke really well and loudly.

b) They could maybe use more hand gestures.

c)Maybe speak as loud as them.

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2023-05-19 01:18:00 UTC

a. one thing that is good about the presentation
- loud voice

b. one thing that requires improvement
- eye contact: they were usually looking at the screen but not the audience

c. one thing that i'll work / focus on during my presentation
- having a loud voice consistently

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2023-05-19 01:18:04 UTC

a. They spoke loudly
b. More eye contact
c. Eye contact

2023-05-19 01:18:17 UTC

they spoke loud
more eye contact
eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:18:45 UTC

-loud and clear
-some parts were not relevant
-eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:18:49 UTC

a. they were clear in explaining their sentences
b. eye contact
c. speak louder

2023-05-19 01:18:54 UTC

a) good volume
b) eye contact
c) eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:19:07 UTC

a: They were loud enough
b: Stop stammering
c: eye contact

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caratinyteume_ — 2023-05-19 01:19:10 UTC

a. they spoke loudly and clearly

b. more eye contact

c. eye contact / speaking louder

2023-05-19 01:19:10 UTC

a. Quite loud and paraphrased
b. Some parts were strange
c.spek louder

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2023-05-19 01:19:11 UTC

a. they were loud and clear
b. more eye contact
c. eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:19:19 UTC

a. they spoke loudly
b. some irrelevant parts can be reduced.
c. eye contact
(great job!!)

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2023-05-19 01:19:20 UTC

-they projected their voices
-their eye contact
-they explained their sentences well enough

~COMMENTS

2023-05-19 01:19:22 UTC

a. Were able to project their voice
b. kept looking at pld
c. eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:19:39 UTC

a)They were loud and clear
b)eye contact
c)eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:19:47 UTC

a. One thing that is good about the presentation
-They were able to project their voices very well
b. One thing that requires improvements
-Fillers(e.g. uh,um)
c. One thing that I'll work/focus on during my presentation
-eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:20:00 UTC

a. Spoke loudly and clearly

b. Not to be fidgety and stutter too much

c. eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:20:04 UTC

Speakers were loud, and spoke briefly during the presentation. Speakers were also comfortable with the audience, and they stood with good posture. However, they do need to work on their eye contact with the audience.
All in all, great presentation as the speakers spoke confidently, loud and clear. It's just the eye contact that they need to improve on.

2023-05-19 01:20:31 UTC

a. They spoke with volume
b. i think some of the conclusions were weird and didnt related to the question. it didnt make sense and was a liitle weird to add
c. eye contact is something ill work on

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nurul_abby_fardyanna_binte_mohammad_nor_ridzuan — 2023-05-19 01:20:34 UTC

1. They are speaking at a maximum volume, and they are speaking very clearly
2. Their presentation, they block out which slide that they are not using.
3. They have put in a lot of detail basic on their presentation.

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nurul_abby_fardyanna_binte_mohammad_nor_ridzuan — 2023-05-19 01:24:27 UTC

1. They are very clear when they are speaking.
2. They put in detail of their own slide and their part of the slide.
3. They express their feeling and emotion of their favourite hawker centre

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caratinyteume_ — 2023-05-19 01:24:52 UTC

a. they were very clear cut when speaking

b. they skipped over some words

c. loud speaking

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madhani_hridayaa_alok — 2023-05-19 01:25:02 UTC

a)The grp is loud and clear.

b)Maybe can be a bit more formal.

c)Speak as confidently as them.

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2023-05-19 01:25:12 UTC

a. Able to project their voices
b. Stuttering at the start of the presentation
c. Blocking out the parts of the slide which they are not using

2023-05-19 01:25:15 UTC

they speak clearly and loud
more eye contact
speak louder

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2023-05-19 01:25:27 UTC

a. one thing that is good about the presentation
- loud voice

b. one thing that requires improvement
- laughing / stammering

c. one thing that i'll work / focus on during my presentation
- no laughing / stammering

2023-05-19 01:25:57 UTC

a. very confident
b. some irrelevant stuff?????
c. energy

2023-05-19 01:25:57 UTC

a) good volume
b) more seriousness, eye contact
c) attitude

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2023-05-19 01:26:21 UTC

-I loved how zen was walking around well talking .
-their voices were loud
-i loved their confidence

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2023-05-19 01:26:35 UTC

a. good pronunciation
b. eye contact?
c. speak louder

feetback

2023-05-19 01:26:40 UTC

a. they were very loud and clear
b. eye contact
c. eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:26:59 UTC

a. They spoke very loudly
b. More seriousness
c. speaking loudly

2023-05-19 01:27:31 UTC

a. I think that the way that the express their expressions.

b. They speak very clearly and loudly.

c. They also made eye-contact which is very good.

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2023-05-19 01:27:41 UTC

a. loud and clear

b. take it seriously, try not to stutter and giggle at the side.

c. stand straight

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2023-05-19 01:28:01 UTC

A. great confidence
b. more seriousness pls!!
c. stand straight!
(well done!!)

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2023-05-19 01:30:55 UTC

Speakers were relatively loud, but speech was a bit choppy. Conclusion for how hawker food has shaped my identity, and eye contact with the audience needs to be improved.
All things considered, I find the presentation great.

palanikumar_pooja — 2023-05-19 01:32:16 UTC

a. they explained their points well
b. they were laughing and had a weird accent and weren't really serious
c. eye contact

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madhani_hridayaa_alok — 2023-05-19 01:32:39 UTC

a)They speak clear and loudly

b)Maybe they can show more eye contact

c) I can be as clear as them

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2023-05-19 01:32:41 UTC

a. one thing that is good about the presentation
- confident & loud voice

b. one thing that requires improvement
- couldn't pronounce some words & took a while

c. one thing that i'll work / focus on during my presentation
- no laughing / stammering

2023-05-19 01:32:53 UTC

i think the slides were detailed ( not their presentation though )
i think that some members of the groups were taking it a little too lightly and they were laughing abit too much to take them seriously
eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:32:59 UTC

a. able to project their voices
b. small pauses
c. Able to express details very easily

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nurul_abby_fardyanna_binte_mohammad_nor_ridzuan — 2023-05-19 01:33:12 UTC

1. They are loud but they are not really sure of some difficult words.
2. They are talking a bit too fast.
3. They could give more eye contact.

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2023-05-19 01:33:32 UTC

a. They were very clear
b. Maybe they can show a bit more eye contact
c. Speaking loudly

2023-05-19 01:33:37 UTC

i think they spoke clearly, little soft but can still hear
eye contact
eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:33:39 UTC

-they projected their voices well
-their presentation was great
-they need abit more eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:33:52 UTC

a. able to project their voice loud and clear
b. stand straight and reduce swaying around
c. reduce stammering
(great work!!)

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2023-05-19 01:34:04 UTC

a: Loud and clear
b: Show more eye contact
C: Reduce stammering

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2023-05-19 01:34:15 UTC

a. they were loud
b. more eye contact
c. eye contact and speak louder

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2023-05-19 01:34:20 UTC

a. spoke clearly, no stutters

b. elaborate on the points

c. nil

~COMMENTS

2023-05-19 01:34:33 UTC

a. spoke clearly
b. eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:34:38 UTC

Speakers spoke loudly and clearly, although eye contact with the audience needs to be improved.
Overall, great presentation!

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caratinyteume_ — 2023-05-19 01:35:26 UTC

a. they spoke loud and clear

b. show more eye contact

c. eye contact

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nurul_abby_fardyanna_binte_mohammad_nor_ridzuan — 2023-05-19 01:39:49 UTC

1. They are very clear
2. They have put in a lot of effort in their presentation

2023-05-19 01:40:36 UTC

they were loud and clear

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2023-05-19 01:41:01 UTC

They were very loud and clear

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2023-05-19 01:41:35 UTC

they are very loud and clear

2023-05-19 01:41:55 UTC

a) loud and clear speaking

b)they are not really prepared for the presentation

2023-05-19 01:41:59 UTC

a. i can tell that they have put in effort into their slides and presentation, quite engaging
b. there is alot of uhhh- and slight stuttering
c. eye comtact

2023-05-19 01:41:59 UTC

a. good voice presentation
b. spelling on the slides were inaccurate, got some accent too
c. nice job guys!!!!!1

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2023-05-19 01:42:05 UTC

a. Very good eye contact
b. Cancel out parts of the slides which they are not using
c. Louder voice

feedbak

2023-05-19 01:42:10 UTC

a. good pronunciation
b. eye contact?
c. speak louder

2023-05-19 01:42:20 UTC

a. loud and nice elaboration
b. some slides ugly plus no reflection???????

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2023-05-19 01:43:05 UTC

a. one thing that is good about the presentation
- loud voice

b. one thing that requires improvement
- use of fillers (e.g. "um" / "so" / "like")

c. one thing that i'll work / focus on during my presentation
- don't use fillers

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2023-05-19 01:43:12 UTC

A. loud and clear
b. they could cancel out slides that is irrelevant and theyre not well prepared
c. eye contact
(excellent job guys!!)

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caratinyteume_ — 2023-05-19 01:43:29 UTC

a. they spoke loud and clear with very accurate description of the topic

b. i really don't know i think they did pretty well:) ( good job yalls!!)

c. loud voice

2023-05-19 01:43:39 UTC

a) content is nice
b) miscommunication, a bit soft, some words in the slides cant be seen
well done yuwen renee hridayaa sa

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2023-05-19 01:44:11 UTC

a: loud
b: well prepared
c: eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:44:14 UTC

a. loud
b. there were some 'umm'

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2023-05-19 01:44:15 UTC

a. loud eye contact

b. lots of stutters, unnecessary head nodding. Whispering during presentation

c. go with the flow

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2023-05-19 01:44:27 UTC

-their eye contact is good
-their voices are well projected
-i loved yuwen for speaking the truth that the hawker aunty doesn't remember her face.
-i loved their confidence!!

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2023-05-19 01:44:59 UTC

a. three people were loud
b. eye contact
c. eye contact

nice

2023-05-19 01:45:41 UTC

a. hridayaa, renee and yu-wen had incredibly good voice presentation. i think sarah did an excellent job too you just need to work on how u read off the slides and your voice presentation.

b. i think you guys had a bit of miscommunication halfway through so do work on that!

c. i hope my feedback helped you, awesome job everyone :)

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2023-05-19 01:47:04 UTC

Speakers spoke clearly and confidently, but their speech gets a bit choppy at times. Group 7 made eye contact with the audience and they had a lot of facial expressions and hand gestures, making the presentation even more interactive. I also really like group 7's conclusion.
All in all, awesome presentation!

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2023-05-19 01:47:38 UTC

a. everyone did great, i like your choice of words!

b. maybe can remove your masks next time cos a bit muffled.

c. awesome job guys! <33

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nurul_abby_fardyanna_binte_mohammad_nor_ridzuan — 2023-05-19 01:49:42 UTC

1. They put in some animations for their presentation so that their slide are getting other people's attention.
2. They are very clear when they are speaking.

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madhani_hridayaa_alok — 2023-05-19 01:50:53 UTC

a)They are loud and clear

b)Maybe can use more gestures.

c)I have to show some eye contact

2023-05-19 01:50:59 UTC

a) they put effort
b) explanation quite vague

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2023-05-19 01:51:39 UTC

a. very loud
b. eye contact
c. eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:51:46 UTC

a. Very well prepared
b. Pausing for very short period of time
c. Projecting your voice

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caratinyteume_ — 2023-05-19 01:52:13 UTC

a. they had good presentation formats (eg: i will pass the time to...)

b. its a bit muffled but its good

c. speak loudly

feedbak

2023-05-19 01:52:18 UTC

a. good explanation
b. very muffled
c. speak louder

2023-05-19 01:52:36 UTC

good teaawork well prepared
eye contact

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2023-05-19 01:52:49 UTC

a. loud, a bit of eye contact

b. be more confident, stuttering.

c. nil

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2023-05-19 01:52:57 UTC

-slides are quite neat and animated
- uses full sentences
- a lot of teamwork
- does not sound very confident
- can maintain eye contact
Otherwise, It's very good and it answers all the questions!

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2023-05-19 01:52:58 UTC

-their voices are loud but some of them speak to fast.
-the eye contact isn't the best but its still good.
-i love all their slides animations its very nice!
-i loved their confidence kind of and their teamwork i also loved how they always say "now i will pass the time to ...."

2023-05-19 01:53:06 UTC

a. loud n clear
b. some have little eye contact

2023-05-19 01:53:07 UTC

a) nice transitions and most sufficient volume
b) a bit muffled-try to take off mask when presenting, not much expressions
decent job everyone

2023-05-19 01:53:09 UTC

a) they were loud enough
b) explanation quite vague

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2023-05-19 01:53:11 UTC

a. They added some animations for the slides
b. Pauses

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2023-05-19 01:53:24 UTC

The presentation was very well prepared. Speakers spoke loudly and confidently. Speech is, however, often times choppy, and I think this group should work on their eye contact with the audience. On the bright side, I really like their conclusion made in their presentation and their fantastic teamwork!

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2023-05-19 01:53:24 UTC

very muffled and not clear

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2023-05-19 01:56:18 UTC

Good
-good projection of voice
-Very clear
-quite a lot of eye contact

Can be improved
-better communication
- should cancel irrelevant slides
- Change slides faster and choose correct slides
- a lot of fillers

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2023-05-19 01:57:33 UTC

a. one thing that is good about the presentation
- loud voice

b. one thing that requires improvement
- incomplete

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2023-05-19 01:57:40 UTC

a. they were quite loud
b. eye contact
c. eye contact and not finished

feedback :D

2023-05-19 01:58:02 UTC

a. Able to project voices easily
b. some part of the slides that are not done
c. Eye contact

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madhani_hridayaa_alok — 2023-05-19 01:58:03 UTC

a)They spoke clearly and very well.

b)They can make bit more eye contact.

c)I have to make my slides clearer.

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2023-05-19 01:58:08 UTC

a. They described a lot
b. Maybe they can have more eye contact, speaking a bit louder

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2023-05-19 01:58:30 UTC

-their voices were loud enough
-i couldn't see some of them because of the pillar
-one of them didn't complete their mental map:(
-they speak abit fast
-their presentations and conclusions are great!

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2023-05-19 01:58:49 UTC

a. good explanation
b. incomplete slides
c. speak louder

I LOVE pooja

2023-05-19 01:59:02 UTC

a. amazing voice prejection, nice choice of words, planned out very well

b. maybe caryn could hv stood up instead of sitting down as it looked like she didn't look part of the grp, also incomplete slides!! fardyannas font choice was abit hard to read.

c. awesome job everyone

2023-05-19 01:59:02 UTC

i overall like the presentation other than the little mess up.
i think caryn should have put in the effort to finish this assignment, she was given 2 weeks to do it but failed to finish it which kinda ruined the presentsation

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2023-05-19 01:59:34 UTC

a. fluent a bit soft

b. a bit soft, fond on Fardyanna's slide is hard to read

c. nil

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2023-05-19 01:59:37 UTC

Presentation was not entirely well prepared, speaker's spoke softly but eloquently. Eye contact with the audience should be improved.
Good try!

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2023-05-19 01:59:43 UTC

- left it incomplete despite having quite a lot of time
- very nice animation
- Should try having more expression in their speech