LMS 6- Jay Hour/Parent Feedback by usamimi74

Student's Name

usamimi74 — 2015-11-23 11:39:00 UTC

Parent's name

Feedback and comments

Emma Schmidt

2015-11-23 23:14:00 UTC

Pam Schmidt

3 things Emma did well:

1) She knew her presentation well.

2) She added some extra facts.

3) She enjoyed talking about the Jays.

2 things Emma could improve on:

1) Don't look at the screen quite as much - look at your audience

2) Stand still, don't move around as much

1 thing I loved:

I loved her enthusiasm about showing me her presentation!

Elle Evans Amanda Beers 3 things Elle did well: 3. She informed me on different information about panda species that I could not figure out by myself. 2. She not only had information, but she had pictures explaining what her topic could do. 1. She made the presentation fun for me to watch by adding in different colors and textures onto the slides. 2 things Elle can improve on: 2. Elle can work on not stuttering on some of her slides, because that makes it hard for people to understand her. 1. Elle can maybe stop fidgeting with her clothes or her hands and look at her audience and speak clearly and loudly. 1 thing I absolutely loved: 1. I loved how she researched about a topic that she didn't know much about. That's a great learning strategy!

2015-11-24 18:41:39 UTC

Caden Conrick

2015-11-29 20:31:09 UTC

Staci Conrick

3 things Caden did well:

1. Well organized slides

2. Had facts and extra talking points for each slide

3. Portrayed confidence while presenting

2 things Caden can improve on:

1. mention a few of the national parks and where they are located

2. Try not to make the nervous throat noise while presenting

1 thing I loved:

His enthusiasm for the National Park Systems following our most recent vacation!

Preston ONeill

2015-11-29 23:20:34 UTC

Dawn ONeill

3 things done well:

Including pictures of items that were being discussed

The flow of the presentation

The graph with the similarities and differences

2 things needing improvement:

Presenting with more flow

work on memorization

1 thing loved:

I loved the presentation overall because I studied greek philosophy in high school and it is a very interesting subject.

Aireanna Johnson

2015-11-29 23:33:59 UTC

Christy Johnson

3 things Aireanna did well:

1) She knew her presentation well.

2) Had facts about Warren Buffet's

3) She was interested in her topic.

2 things Aireanna can improve on:

1) Try to relax when presenting her topic.

2) Stop fidgeting with her hands.

1 thing I loved:

The research that Aireanna put in to learn about Warren Buffet's life and how he became the business man he is today.

Heaven Taylor

2015-11-30 01:19:47 UTC

Melissa Taylor

Three things Heaven did well:

1) she was very informative

2) her slides were very organized

3) explained things in different ways so that the audience could better understand it.

Two things she could improve:

1) combining some facts so that words don't have to be repeated.

2) be more confident about presenting because she knows what she is talking about.

One thing I loved :

1) is how passionate she is about this important topic.

Andru Schell

2015-11-30 01:44:39 UTC

Sally McCoy

3 things Andru did well

1) Included good information

2) Showed interesting pictures

3) He liked talking about the subject

Two things he could improve on:

1) Speak clear and slow down

2) Focus. Easily distracted

One thing I loved:

I loved that he enjoyed doing the presentation on a topic he is so interested in and sharing with me.

Makenna Codding

2015-12-02 01:20:42 UTC

Lisa Codding

3 things Makenna did well

1) knowledgable about subject

2) visuals to back up facts

3) good use of sources

Two things she could improve on

1) speak louder and with more confidence

2) stop fidgeting with hands

One thing I loved

1) finding out that cats can be used as service animals just like dogs