https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn With your partner, write one Padlet response answering the following questions: 1. Is the writer young or old? Male or female? 2. What tone does the writer want to communicate? 3. Does the writer care about this piece of writing? How do you know? 4. What aspects of the text led you to these conclusions? ***Include both group members’ names in title of Padlet post for credit!*** en-us 2017-10-03 19:46:55 UTC 2026-03-17 04:32:54 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194046950 1. Young female
2. She wants to give inspiration with a positive outlook in life with the use of her idol, a comedian.
3. She cares about her writing because she talks about what she loves, and specifically states that she isn't writing it to win the competition.
4. Knowing that she is unsure of whether to go into the show business, she will appear to be younger since it hints that she has not graduated. She is a female by following a classical stereotype that girls like acting and movies while boys tend to be more athletic. She talks about how she wants life to be like at the end, noting that she has a positive representation on life. Most people care about what they write when it is about something they love, so it would be okay to compare that to the writer.]]> 2017-10-04 19:00:34 UTC https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194046950 https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194047931 1) A young female

2)Chill, casual 

3) Yes, she gives many reasons to back up her idea

4) She puts in memories of her uncle, making hats for her dog, and also flashbacks to middle school. She admired Harpo, also she makes it known that she wasn't in the writing competition to just win. Lastly she encouraging writers to be unique.]]> 2017-10-04 19:02:46 UTC https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194047931 https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048265 1) Young Girl because she said "i don't plan i will go into show business", saying she is still in high school or college and she also says "i'm the youngest of 5 sister and the quietest' indicating she's a girl.
2)Positive attitude about life.
3)Yes, because she puts in information, detail and inspiration for other readers. 
4) She puts in flashbacks to middle school, and days with her uncle. She also gives advice on how to live life and she explains all her experience with detail.

]]> 2017-10-04 19:03:31 UTC https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048265 alexiashinojos https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048286 1. Young girl 
2. Inspirational tone
3. Yes, she does because this is her college application essay. She put a lot of detail in her essay. She seemed really passionate about what she was saying. 
4. The ending was motivational. She was encouraging the readers to be themselves, and to do what they love. ]]> 2017-10-04 19:03:37 UTC https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048286 https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048304 1. The writer is a young female
2. The tone the writer wants to communicate would be that you should follow you dreams and make sure that you are your own person.
3. The writer cares about this piece of writing because she talks something that she was interested in rather than something that she had no interest in but chose to write about anyways.
4. The aspects that the writers used would be ]]> 2017-10-04 19:03:39 UTC https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048304 https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048322 1) Young and Female
2) Casual, simple, and relaxing tone
3) Yes, because she expresses her thoughts and feelings directly without any stories.
 4) At the end she states that "It's ok to fall down. Learn to laugh at yourself. Learn to laugh at your family, Wear weird clothes...". It is motivational and it states what she believes in

]]> 2017-10-04 19:03:42 UTC https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048322 https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048357 1 Female
2 Light tone
3 Yes she does. Because you can tell in her tone of voice that its okay to be yourself. You only have one life. Don't be afraid to step out of your comfort zone. Live the life that YOU want and NOT what others want.
4. The aspects of the text that led me to this conclusion is when she said "I didn't need to win a competition or write an essay to feel validated." "I was learning who I was, and that was important in my life."]]> 2017-10-04 19:03:44 UTC https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048357 https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048400 1- a young boy
2- he want to inspire the readers of the essay to be the most amazing version of themselves
3- yes, the way he wrote it. he uses the word I alot and talks about things in his life. 
4- the narrator writes as if the films had a very high impact on his life and helped shape him as a person and how he sees people and wants to help people see themselves today  ]]> 2017-10-04 19:03:50 UTC https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048400 https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048428 1. Young female
2.Inspirational and reminiscent because she was reflecting on her childhood and talks about how its ok to be different 
3.No because its unorganized and off topic throughout the whole writing
4. Her being off topic and the theme of the whole essay. ]]> 2017-10-04 19:03:53 UTC https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048428 32857 https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048642 1) the author is a young female . she states that she is the youngest of 5 sisters and gardening with grandmother.

2) the author has a casual and relaxed tone. the tone that she wants to communicate in is more persuasive 

3) the author is very passionate about this piece of writing because she goes on and on about how she loved the marxs brothers in the essay she wrote for the contest even though she did not win.

4) well in the passage she states that shes a sister of 5 and shes the quietest and the youngest. then  also the writer has spoken in a passionate way towards her piece of writing. you also know that she loves what she wrote about because she admits the fact that her role model

(harpo ) is the best example of her self ]]> 2017-10-04 19:04:22 UTC https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194048642 15732 https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194050609 1) young female
2)Kinda like a remembering a distant memory, or telling a story of the said memory.
3) The writer cares about the memory and happy feelings she gets when she remembers those summer mornings watching the person she looks up to due to his humor and music.
4) the voice and tone of the narrator of the essay.]]> 2017-10-04 19:08:33 UTC https://padlet.com/badavis2/oe1juwzmfcgn/wish/194050609