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      <title>2-8 영어Ⅱ 말하기 수행평가 초안 업로드용 by Borobol</title>
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         <title>말하기 수행평가 안내</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. 초안 업로드 기한: ~10/17(월) 23:59<br>2. 동료 평가 기한: ~10/23(일) 23:59<br>3. 발표: 10/24~28 2시간 실시 예정</div>]]></description>
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         <title>초안 업로드 예시</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>[2122 봉소현]<br>○ 지문: 2022 9월 고2 모의고사 41, 42번<br>○ 지문 내용 요약: FOMO는 놓치는 것(소외되는 것)에 대한 두려움이고 JOMO는 놓치는 것(소외되는 것)에 대한 즐거움이며, 우리는 JOMO를 통해 FOMO를 극복해야 한다.<br><br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Good morning, everyone. The passage that I chose is number 41 and 42 in 9월 모의고사. It is about what FOMO and JOMO are; FOMO is the fear of missing out, and JOMO the joy of missing out. Since I’ve become very interested in social psychology lately, these two interesting syndromes made me research them more. Today, I’d like to introduce you to how FOMO syndrome affects today’s real estate market.<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Have you ever <strong>hear </strong>about panic buying? Panic buying occurs when consumers unusually buy large amounts of product in anticipation of a high price increase, or a shortage. Since the outbreak of COVID-19, there have been many panic buying events worldwide. As house prices and stock prices have risen at record levels all over the world, many young generations in Korea, especially people in their 20s and 30s, bought apartments or stocks by pulling everything together, which is called 영끌, or by taking out too many loans to invest in the market, so-called 빚투. The anxiety about falling behind others like FOMO is one of the main factors influencing panic buying<strong>.</strong> As a growing number of loans are taken out by individuals, the unrelenting surge in household debt has become the biggest downside risk to the Korean economy. Due to the economic instability, many people who have been overbuying real estate and stocks due to anxiety are now causing damage not only to themselves but to the entire economy.<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Likewise, FOMO syndrome not only has a detrimental effect on our physical and mental health but also influences the property market, and finally harms the entire economy. We sometimes think everyone makes money but me and others might have rewarding experiences that we are not missing out on. Like the solutions mentioned in the passage, however, it will be necessary for us to accept JOMO in our lives, which is to be satisfied with the present and to be aware that we can miss out on anything at any time. Let’s enjoy missing out. Thank you for listening.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>동료 평가 댓글 예시</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>[2123 정해인]<br>1. 과제 수행<br>1) 전체 문장의 개수: 15개 이상<br>2) 번역기 여부: 사용하지 않고 자신의 말로 성실하게 썼음.<br>3) 서론-본론-결론 3단 구성: O<br><br>2. 내용 부합 여부: FOMO의 개념을 경제 분야, 특히 부동산 분야로 연결시켜 소개한 점이 인상적이며 공부한 지문 내용을 심화시켰음. 빚투, 영끌 내용을 소개한 부분을 강조하면서 읽으면 내용 전달이 더 잘될 것 같음.<br><br>3. 기본 어법: 본론 첫 번째 문장의 hear을 heard로 고쳐야 함.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>2809신지원</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>[2809신지원]<br>&nbsp;○ 지문: 자이스토리 P 2번<br>&nbsp;○ 지문 내용 요약: 천연자원이 풍부한 나라들이 그것에 지나치게 의존하는 경향이 있어서 경제활동을 다양화시키지 못하고 그로 인해 경제 침체가 발생한다.<br>&nbsp;<br><br>Hello, everyone. I'm going to talk about number 2 of P which is about outcome of high natural resource dependence. The higher resource dependence, the lower productive diversification and rate of growth. It is called the curse of resource.<br>&nbsp; The curse of resource is represented diverse aspect. There are excessive goverment spending, social conflict about distribution, national collapse when natural resource are all used, etc... First, countries&nbsp; such as Kwait, where population is small and payment of resource is big, give huge benefit and welfare to calm social dissatisfaction. This influence the countries' labor force to destroy by reducing labor willingness. Second, if the nation doesn't have ability to distribute the wealth from resource, social conflict can be deepen and civil war can break out. Especially, the earn from resource isn't distributed fairly, because a lot of resources are located in the third world which don't have ability to do so. Third, there are possibility of national catastrophe when natural resource are burned out. Even if the various curse of resources happens, as long as there are resources, the wealth solves the basic economic problem. But the resource are finite. This means that if resources are all used, there is nothing to fill the gap in the economy, which can lead to the collapse of the country like Nauru.<br>&nbsp;Almost members of the OECD do not rely on resources. In other words, in order to become an advanced country, it is necessary to reduce resource dependence and use resources efficiently.<br>&nbsp; Countries that don't have been cursed yet but are highly dependent on resources should develop new industries for future. Also, it is essential to reduce their dependence on resources and to increase competitivenes in other fields. Thank you for your time.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-16 08:27:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>2821 최다해</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>[2821 최다해]<br>-지문: 수능특강 12 4번<br>-지문 내용 요약: 정보 기술의 발달은 오히려 물질과의 상호작용을 증가시켰다.<br><br>Hello, everyone. The passage that I chose is 수능특강 unit 12 no.4. It is about information technology's effect in material exchange. Information technology's development increased the amount of material moving around the planet. After I read this writing, I thought about 'Amazon'. Amazon is the best online mall in the world. Amazon uses one of the information technology: data mining. Data mining is one of the main technology that made Amazon success. Today, I will introduce how Amazon uses data mining.<br>&nbsp; Do you know what data mining exactly means? Data mining is a process which finds correlated data in big data. Here is how Amazon do data mining. First, Amazon records all the shopping lists of all consumers in database. Second, Amazon analyzes this record and apprehends a consumer's interest. Also, it apprehends products which the consumer would like and Amazon's stock. Then Amazon sends the email that only fits to the consumer. The consumer who is given the email would want to buy the products in the Amazon's algorithm email. The consumer clicks the button 'buy now', and material exchange occurs. The material exchange will occur all over the world. In fact, today, Amazon is the best online mall in the world. Data mining, one of the information technology, occurs more material exchange.<br>&nbsp; I think not only Amazon but many online malls would use big data system. But I want to say that they should not stay there. If they do data mining process in addition and inform individual consumer's recommending goods, they will develop more. If you are dreaming opening an online mall, I suggest you to use data mining process! Thanks for listening my presentation.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-16 14:23:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>2811 오승효 초안</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>[2811 오승효]<br>○지문: 자이스토리 L06&nbsp;<br>○지문 내용 요약: 명성, 칭찬, 관심에 대한 욕망은 박탈감을 느낀 경험을 기반으로 하고 있다.<br><br>Hello, everyone.</div><div>The passage that I chose is number 6 at unit L. The topic of passage is "The desire for fame has its roots in the experience of deprivation."&nbsp; Because I have interested in psychology, I chose this passage.</div><div>Now, I'm going to talk about how the deprivation experience of childhood appears when he becomes an adult.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div><div>People essentially have a dependence desire which they want to satisfy in the relationship with important person. Dependence desire means a mind which want to be considered as the important subject regardless of any conditions or circumstances. If one child have grown with a lack of this desire like the example of passage, the child would be seemingly mature and independent when he becomes an adult. And this state of mind is called 'Pseudo Independence'.&nbsp;</div><div>Pseudo Independence means what have grown into a state that lacks of dependent desire and today appeared in a state of being independence. An adult of this type continually wants to fill up deficiencies from important person. And the behaviors are appeared like excessively supporting his parents or forcing his children to be independent against children's level. In this way, the damage of deficiencies is passed down from one child to the next generation child at all.</div><div>&nbsp; &nbsp;</div><div>Although it was started just from fewer caring, the damage of deficiencies can pile up like a river rises. And Pseudo Independence can affect the very person who experienced deficiencies and others around him. Only more caring and attention can overcome this phenomenon. Let's have an interest to others in this world. Thank you for listening.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-16 16:01:50 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>[2820 주민정]</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>-지문:자이스토리F 17번<br>-지문 내용 요약:침입종들은 인간이 의도적으로 도입한 결과이고,생태계에 피해를 가져왔다.<br><br><br>&nbsp; &nbsp; Hello,everyone.The passage that I chose is number F 17 in 자이스토리.<br>&nbsp;It is about intentionally introduced species.I have been heard that alien species attack native species.But l want to know the case of natural species attacking alien species.Today I'm going to talk about effect of native species on introduced species.<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Have you ever heard about alien species?Ailen species were deliberately introduced from different countries for food.Not only made they positive results,but also made negative impact.Alien species became a threat to native species and ecosystem.For example,nutria have strong reproduction and a good appetite.Nutria attack native species and damage the crops .But,native species such as 삵 feed nutria<br>국립생태원 announced that nutria's fur and bones were found in 삵 poo.<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Native species attack lately alien species,That's because it takes time that native species recognize and understand alien species as food.we don't have to worry about the ecosystem.That's because natural species have now recognized alien species as food and they are going to eat up many alien species.Thank you for listening~<br><br><br><br>&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-16 16:22:45 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>2816 임현주</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>[2816 임현주]<br>&nbsp;-지문: 자이스토리 G 20<br>&nbsp;-지문 내용 요약:&nbsp; Human Library에서는 다양한 사람이 책이된다. 그리고 자신의 다양한 경험들을 이야기하는데, 상대방은 그들의 이야기를 듣고 그들을 알아가면서 편견을 해소한다.&nbsp;<br><br>Hi. Everyone. The passage that I chose is number 20 in Xi story part G. It introduces the Human Library. Human Library is the place where people tell other people about their life story. This place helps people know other people for real and makes them avoid a hasty judgment.&nbsp;<br><br>Let's think about the library. We often think that the library is the place where people read and borrow some books. Then, how think about the library that people are the books? Human Library is a non-profit international organization and movement that first started in Copenhagen, Denmark, in 2000. Human library aims to address people's prejudices by helping them to talk those they would not normally meet. At this time, people of the role of books experience prejudice, social exclusion, stigma, and so on. Thus, a various poeple, a beggar, a soldier, or a billionaire, they can be a book. Participant can only ask questions that learn about the other poeple and challenge their prejuice. During listening the writing, you have some curiosity that Human Library is located in Korea. That Human Library is really located in Korea. 서울휴먼라이브러리, 시흥 사람도서관, 광명시 사람책도서관, and so on. If you try to search them, you can find quite a few libraries.&nbsp;<br><br>The library that consist people without books can still be awkward. But, i'd like to highlight that this campaign helps people to be able to break dowm prejudice. So, I think this Human Library need to be known all over the world. &nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-17 09:38:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>2810 양현선</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>•지문: 자이스토리 K 1<br>•내용 요약: 안전성과 기능성만 건축 환경의 설계에서 고려되어야 한다고 생각한 반면 건축 환경 디자인은 인간의 감정, 행동 등에 영향을 미치기 때문에 건축 디자인도 고려해야하는 사항으로 여겨진다<br><br>Hi, everyone. The passage that I chose is K 1 in xi story. It is about the design of built environment that influences to people's experience and shapes their identity . Since I'm interested in architecture, I search for more information about it. Today, I'll talk about how architecture is related to people.</div><div><br></div><div>How did you feel in a small space? Maybe you feel stuffy.&nbsp; In other examples, you may feel relief in an open space and calm in a religious facility. Like this, we feel various emotions in various space.&nbsp;</div><div>And space also affects to our action and ability. In an experiment, as the ceiling is high, participants improve their performance for creative work. But as the ceiling is low, they improve their performance for simply repeated work.</div><div>And the passage G 11 says that your workplace show your personality. Because We tend to be the actualization of our behavior over time. As time goes on, the space that you live in also shows yourself by interior, lamp and so on.</div><div><br></div><div>In conclusion, space influences to emotion, performance and even ourselves by various ways. Thus we can try to design our personal space on our goals and psychological conditions. How about design your space whatever suits you? Thank you for listening to my presentation.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-17 10:44:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>2806 김소진 영어 초안</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>-지문: 자이스토리 P 3번<br>-지문내용요약: 사람은 온도가 높아질수록 시간이 원래 시간보다 많이 지난 것처럼 느끼는 체내시계(빨라짐)를 가지고 있다.&nbsp;<br><br>&nbsp; &nbsp; Hi, everyone. The passage that I chose is number 3 in P, Xistory. It is about the internal clock, which run faster as body temperature increases. Since I have interested in biology, I researched them more. My main topic for today’s talk is various factors of the phenomenon in which time seems to pass quickly.<br>&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;<br>&nbsp; &nbsp;There is physical clock given to all in the same way, however, there is internal clock that flow differently from person to person. Sometimes we feel that times flow too quickly. One of the reasons that we feel like this is the amount of dopamine produced by age. As we get older, internal clocks slow down because we produce less dopamine. In an experiment to determine the relationship between dopamine and time perception, mice that lowered dopamine pushed the lever two seconds slower than regular mice that were trained to push the lever every 20 seconds.<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; Secondly, amount of information is the one of the reasons. The time in memory is reconstructed by the amount of information. When&nbsp; we were young, every day was new, so there was a lot of information and we remember it in detail. But, as we get older, experience becomes more common and the amount of information that passes through our brain decreases. So people feel like time goes too fast.<br> <br>&nbsp;   In this way, there are many factors that affect the internal clock to feel like time goes quickly. Why don't you make our time longer with new experiences and changes? Thank you for listening.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>2803 김규린</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>[2803 김규린]<br>- 지문: 자이스토리 G 10번<br>- 지문 내용 요약: 그린프라이데이는 블랙 프라이데이가 환경에 가져오는 피해에 대한 의식을 높이는 것을 추구하는 것이다. 블랙 프라이데이를 보는 방식을 바꾸고, 사고 사는 우리의 사고방식을 바꾸는 것이다.<br><br>Hello, everyone.</div><div>The passage that I chose is number 10 at unit G. This topic introduces Green Friday, which seeks to raise awareness of the damage Black Friday causes to the environment. Recently, I've been very interested in environmental issues, so I decided to investigate into Green Friday. Today, I'd like to introduce you the actual case of Green Friday and the alternative.&nbsp;<br><br>Green Friday is a citizen movement that begins with Black Friday creating nonrenewable pollutants through overproduction and overconsumption of manufactured goods. Companies participating in the movement will charge customers the usual amount, donate 15 percent of their sales to the association, and use donations to fight global poverty and environmental movements. The movement can reduce carbon footprint to a meaningful level by refusing to overconsume and extending the life of the product. One of the most powerful ways to reduce it in your life is to use what you have for as long as possible.</div><div>Actually, IKEA participated in Green Friday. IKEA introduced a buyback service that buys IKEA furniture used by customers and resells it in the&nbsp; savings section of the store.<br><br>I have looked into Green Friday. It is wise to find a way to reuse and recycle existing products rather than to change them to new ones just because they are cheap. In the end, efforts must be made to make sensible consumption. Since there is only one Earth and its natural resource is limited, we must strive to protect the environment.&nbsp; Thank you for your time.</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>&nbsp;</div><div><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>2812 원정서 초안</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>지문 - 수능특강 11강 5번<br>지문 요약 - 호르몬은 거리에 관계없이 국소 효과 및 원거리 효과를 달성하여 신체가 매우 일정하게 유지되도록 기능한다.<br><br>Hello, everyone. The passage that I chose is number 5 in 수능특강. It is about hormones function to stay the body constant by acting through body fluids, such as blood regardless of the location or distance. Because I hope the Department of Nursing Science, I become interested in this passage. When I read this, I was curious about the symptoms of hormone imbalance. So, I research this. Today, I’m going to talk about the symptoms that are caused when hormones action doesn't function smoothly</div><div><br></div><div>Do you know reason that hormone imbalance is caused? hormone imbalance is caused by stimulation like stress to the pituitary gland. The typical symptom of hormone imbalance is extreme fatigue. High level of progesterone hormone can lead to extreme sleepiness and low level of thyroid hormone can lead to tiredness. secondly, It can cause stomachache. When estrogen hormone and progesterone hormone are secreted too much or too little, problems occur in the digestive organs. So, stomachache, diarrhea, abdominal inflation are caused. Finally, It can cause pimple. sweat secretion and skin pore are affected excessive secretion of androgen hormone. So, it causes chronic pimple. besides, there are various symptoms caused by hormone imbalance.</div><div><br></div><div>Like this, hormone imbalance can lower overall quality of life in physical and psychological aspect. this symptoms can be connected to all kinds of disease. Therefore, It is very important to quickly detect signals that tell you hormone imbalance and to treat symptoms. Thank you for listening&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <title>김하정 영어 초안</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>[2807 김하정]<br>-지문: 자이스토리 k07<br>-지문 내용: 자존감이 낮은 사람들은 자신의 실수를 과대평가하고 능력을 과소평가함으로써 부정적으로 생각한다.<br><br>Hello, everyone. I’m going to talk about the characteristics of self-esteem.<br>The passage that I chose is  k07 in the xi story. This explains low self-esteem; people who have low self-esteem saw themselves negatively. Reading this passage, I have curious about the solution and the difference in self-esteem , so I investigated it.<br><br></div><div><br></div><div>Have you ever thought about the characteristics of people who have high self-esteem?<br><br></div><div>People with high self-esteem have the characteristics that it thinks me that I am worthy of being loved. And they have high resilience. But people with low self-esteem have characteristics that it sharps about how they look at me and I treat me carelessly. The difference is how you treat yourself. To raise self-esteem, first, write your strengths. Second, you choose one for yourself, even if it's very little<br><br></div><div><br></div><div>Likewise, if the situation of you have low self-esteem was maintained, there are problems like the things mentioned in the passage. So let's make an effort to raise low self-esteem. Thank you for listening&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>2813 이민하 영어 초안</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>[2813 이민하]<br>-지문: 자이스토리 N-22<br>-지문 내용 요약: 사과(물체)가 태양을 향해 날아가지 않는 이유는 지구의 중력 때문이다.<br><br>&nbsp;Hello, everyone. The passage that I chose is number 22 of unitN in Xi-story. This writing was written about why objects in the Earth don’t fly off to the Sun. The answer about this question is ‘gravity’, the force of the Earth to full objects. I’ve been interested in physics. So, I’d like to speak about the phenomenon happened by gravity.<br><br>&nbsp;When you throw the ball to the sky, it stops in the air for a while and then falls faster and faster. In this case, the reason&nbsp; this phenomenon happens is gravity. As the ball is had force by you, it flies off to the Sun for a while. But, its velocity slows down and eventually stops and falls towards the ground. Because, the ball has mass and gravity acts on the ball in the direction of the Earth’s center, this phenomenon happens. Plus, when the ball falls down, its velocity changes consistently. This consistent change of it per second is called gravity acceleration.<br><br>&nbsp;Like this phenomenon, what I explain you, another phenomenon happened by gravity is various. I recommend that you look around and find such phenomenon in your life. That may be fun! Thank you for listening.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>2802 구민경</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>-지문: 자이스토리 K 6<br>-지문 내용 요약: 실수 효과는 개인의 인지된 매력도와 실수를 함에 따라 증가 혹은 감소를 말한다<br><br>Hi, everyone. The passage that I chose is number K 6 in Xi story. It is about phenomenon in social psychology called pratfall effect. This is the difference in attractiveness that people see as they make mistakes. Today, I'd like to introduce you to the pratfall effect in society.<strong><br><br></strong>What do you feel if you make people mistakes? It feels different from person to person. There are people who criticize and there are people who encourage. The pratfall effect shows humanity to the person who made a mistake and is loved.</div><div>For example, it's the same for celebrities like actors and idols. When an actor makes a mistake in them lines or an idol makes a mistake in them voice out of tune, it gives people more charm. But the opposite happens. People with low self-esteem don't put up with or like other people's mistakes or flaws.</div><div><br>Like this, the pratfall effect shows more interest and love for the person who made the mistake. And those who don't make any mistakes are less attractive and less like. Every human being makes a mistake. Don't be afraid of making mistakes, but I think you need to have some time to admit your mistakes. Thank you for listening.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-17 13:31:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>2817 임혜원</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>[2817 임혜원]<br>○지문: 자이스토리 M 14번<br>○지문 내용 요약: 아이들 대상으로 광고의 윤리적 문제에 관해, 광고주가 정서적 취약성을 이용하여 제품을 소유하는 것에 집착이 생기는데 기여한다.<br><br>hello, everyone. the passage that l chose is number 14 in 자이스토리 M. This is a fingerprint on the ethical issues of advertising for children, and helps advertisers take advantage of their emotional vulnerabilities to feel that they are losers who do not own products.&nbsp;<br>I wondered if children who have been exposed to these advertisements since childhood would have an impact on consumption habits when they become adults. l would like to introduce this curiosity.<br><br>How are your usual spending habits? Don't you spend too much? Have you ever heard of the Panoply Effect? It is a phenomenon in which they believe they belong to the same group by consuming a similar price range. By purchasing a specific product, it is differentiated by thinking that it belongs to a specific group and consuming it, and encourages the upper class as an object of envy, giving a relative sense of deprivation.<br>They spend excessively on luxury goods to prove and prove their worth. The problem is that it carries debt beyond this.<br><br>Some children who encounter advertisements that give relative deprivation to children with weak emotional vulnerabilities grow up to have bad consumption habits. Or I think it leads to more serious overspending. It will be difficult to solve this fundamentally. This is because companies have to induce to produce and consume goods to make money. However, excessive advertising marketing to children needs to be cautioned. We also need to be alert not to be misled by these ads. Let's live a healthy life because it's not good to feel deprived of someone and take on debt through excessive consumption. Thank you for listening</div>]]></description>
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         <title>2818 장현정 초안</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>○ 지문: 수능특강 73쪽 8번<br>○ 지문 내용 요약: 텔레비전의 빠른 화면 전환은 아이들이 다른 것에 집중하지 못하도록 한다.<br><br><br>Good morning.<br>The question I chose is question number 8 on page 73.<br>This text contains a fast screen switch on the TV that prevents children from concentrating on other things.<br>As I read these contents, I remembered the phenomenon related to "adolescent smartphone addiction" and looked for this phenomenon even more.<br><br>Smartphone addiction is the damage to physical, mental and social functions that users cannot easily live in their daily lives due to excessive use of smartphones.<br>For example, the Korea Information Technology Agency raises health problems for users, social issues such as family and friends, and academic or workplace issues.<br>In addition to excessive smartphone use, smartphone addiction causes problems such as mental health, school life, interpersonal relationships, sociality, aggression, criminal behavior, and suicide.<br>&nbsp;Smartphone addiction reduces self-control and leads to learning disabilities.<br>A 2017 study published the findings that smartphone addiction has a direct negative effect on learning immersion.<br>According to a 2015 study, the stronger the addiction to smartphones, the lower the ability to control behavior, which could lead to difficulties in learning.<br>These learning disabilities have higher academic performance than those with or without clear motivation for using smartphones.<br>In other words, teenagers who are addicted to smartphones can learn by simply killing time or habitually using them.<br>It reduces the time and effort to invest in learning tasks, which increases the probability of developing learning disabilities.<br><br>In conclusion, smartphone addiction shows a static direct relationship with the level of learning disability<br>Based on this, it shows that appropriate intervention in smartphone addiction is needed for academic purposes.<br>It's time for you to confirm what you knew about smartphone addiction during this exploration.<br>Keep in mind that you only use your smartphone when you need it (time killing, not habitually using it)!<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <title>[2814 이혜민]</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>지문 : 자이스토리 K14번<br>지문 내용 요약 : 신체적인 움직임은 정신적인 건강에 긍정적인 기능을 한다.<br><br>Hello, everyone. The passage that I chose is K 14 in Xi story. It is about positive function of physical movements on human’s mental health. Since I am really interested in medical science, just saying about various positive effects of physical movements on our mental health made me feel curious about how these effects occur. Today, I’d like to let you know what happens in our boddies while we make some physical movements.</div><div><br></div><div>First, I’ll explain how physical movements reduce bad feelings. Like the passage I chose says, physical movements help us get rid of negative emotions. While we make physical movements, hormones like serotonin, dopamine, and endorphin are secreted more frequently. Dopamine makes humans feel motivated to do something, endorphin helps us endure stressful situations and serotonin makes us feel happy and reduces depression. These hormones give us power to overcome depression and negative feelings.</div><div>Secondly, let’s see how physical movements make us feel comfortable. Have you ever felt uncomfortable while you are in stressful situaiton? For me, I’ve experienced uncomfortable feeling and couldn’t sleep well while I prepared for my test. When we are under stress, our boddies secrete hormones like adrenaline, which brings about fight or flight response, which makes our muscles rigid and our boddies tense. Physical movements relax our stiff muscles and our boddies, so we can feel more comfortable. Actually, when I was under stress due to preparing for my test, taking a walk for a moment reduced my anxiety and motivated me to study harder.</div><div><br></div><div>Physical movements effect our mental health by reducing our bad feelings and anxiety. Just sleeping in and being inactive will only compound your negative feelings. I’d like to emphasize that when you are under stress or feel depressed, exercising or making physical movements can help you recover from those negative situations. That’s all for today. Thank you for listening to my presentation.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>2819 조예승</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>-지문:자이스토리 G 14번<br>-지문 내용 요약: 음식 라벨이 설탕의 첨가량을 소비자들에게 분명히 전달하지 못하고 있다.<br><br><br>&nbsp; &nbsp; Hi, everyone. It is about the problem of a label that ingredients are not accurately represented. This writing treat about things that sugar is not easily labeled on the label for consumers to understand. These days, my interest is healthy eating habits, so I want to investigate about how to read the label correctly. Therefore I became choose this writing. so my main topic for today’s talk is how to read correctly label.<br><br>&nbsp;On the basis of my investigation, first basically check the expiration date. Second, check the Certification mark. it will be reduce process to analyze ingredient. Third, check the serving size. Calories and ingredients that are written on the label is written on the basis of serving size. For example, If serving size of the total amount of 168g of snack is 28g, the calories and ingredients on the label will be written based on the total amount divided by six times. Consumers should read labels carefully because they can fall into trap such as a serving size.<br><br>&nbsp;If you create a small habit like reading labels, you will be able to apply healthy eating habits to your daily life. And these healthy eating habits will improve the quality of our lives. Why don't we make a habit that is small but has a definite effect?&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-17 14:49:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>2808 박준서</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>[2808 박준서]<br></strong><br></div><div><br></div><div>지문: 자이스토리 K 14<br>지문 내용 요약: 신체 움직임은 부정적인 감정을 없애는데에 도움이 된다.</div><div>Hi, everyone. The passage that i chose is number 14 in Xistory unit K. It is about positive effect of physical movement. In this passage, author says that physical movement can dispel negative feelings. Since I am interested in practical dance, I searched more about this. Now, I'll talk about what i have found.</div><div><br></div><div>I am happy when I dance to music. Though I was exhausted because of school things like study and relationships, when I dance, my negative feelings flew away. It allows me to be myself away from someone I need to be. Clearly, It was not just me who felt that way.<br>In our school, there is a dance club called Bliss which is made up of 15 shining students. They can gain confidence and be healthy by practicing and performing their work.</div><div>Office workers who suffer from stress in their workplaces come to dance to stay active. They said they not only could feel free and joy but also could have their sense of self-respect when they move their body to music. Lastly, according to a paper, the aged's participation in practical dance helps them both mentally and physically. The fact that practical dance is beneficial to all of us is undeniable.</div><div><br></div><div>In conclusion, moving our body to music helps us live better life. I suggest you to dance when you have negative thoughts. I am willing to dance with you if you want! Thank you for listening.<br><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-17 14:59:36 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>2801 곽희선</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>지문: 자이스토리 E 14번<br>지문요약: 수작업 활동은 정신 건강에 도움을 줄 수 있다.<br>Hi, everyone The passage that I chose is number 14 of E in 자이스토리.</div><div>It is about that working with our hands gives us a greater sense of control over our environment and more connection to the worle around us. Since i am interested in books, so i read this passage so if reading can help mental health so i did research. Today, I’d like to introduce how reading can help mental health.</div><div>&nbsp;</div><div>Have you ever heard about bibliotherapy? bibliotherapy is biblion and therapia word derived from the Greece. It literally help mental health by reading. The background that first appeared ancient greece belief<strong> </strong>the refining influence of literature. Today, it has been used since the 1930s in the United States. Reading therapy has a preventive goal of finding ways to solve problems and a therapeutic goal of living a healthy life by providing appropriate reading materials. The proess of reading therapy, there are interactive reading therapy in which the reading therapist actively intervenes in therapy, and self-treatment reading therapy. Of these two courses, I recommed self-guided reading therapy. The reason is that self-reding therapy can lead to self-integration. And you become able to have a different point of view or point of view outside of your own point of view or perspective.</div><div><br></div><div>It’s okay to do manual activities when your feel your mental health isn’t good, but why not try self-guided reading therapy from time to time?</div><div>Thank you for your time.</div>]]></description>
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         <title> 2804김단희 </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>지문:xistory g13<br>지문 내용 요약: 전투 스포츠가 인기가 많을수록 전쟁에 참여할 가능성이 높다<br>Hello, everyone. The passage that&nbsp; i chose is xi story g13. The topic is the relationship between sports and violence. The more popular combat sports are, possibility they are to participate in the war. I was aware that the recent war between Russia and Ukraine resulted in a ban on Russian football tournaments. So , i investigate the relationship between sports and violence more. From now on, introduce how combat sports bans are related to war.<br><br>Have you ever thought that soccer or boxing, a combative sport, has with war? If sports are a substitute for violence, the more combative sports there are, the less combat happens.&nbsp; But there is a direct correlation between sports and violence, not an inverse correlation. So the more widespread and popular combative sports are, the more likely the society will participate in the war.&nbsp;<br><br>In the Middle Ages, the social class of knights emerged and the territorial battles of the empires began in earnest. In the Middle Ages, sports were transformed into military exercises such as horse racing, archery, and sword fighting. Therefore, ancient and medieval sports are not just games to enjoy, but also violent power struggles. Therefore, it can be see that sports are closely related to war. War cannot be rationalized for whatever reason.&nbsp; I think it is very appropriate to oppose the Russian war by banning Russian football. I hope that the future of sports will be transformed into a keyword related to peace rather than war. Thank you for listening</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-10-21 02:14:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>지문 : 자이스토리 k 22<br>지문 내용 요약 : 귀여움 공격성은 귀여운 생명체를 볼 때 꽉 쥐고 싶은 충동을 의미한다. 하지만 귀여운 공격성은 그 생명체를 해치기 보단 오히려 보호해주기 위해 나타난다.<br><br>Hi, everyone. The passage that I choose is number P 22 in Xistory. It is about “cute aggression.” It is impulse that when we see an adovable creature, we want to sqeeze it. I felt painful because I sometimes had an that urge. cute aggression is not about causing harm at all. Even it’s purpose is to protect an cute creature. I thought I was weird when I didn't know this. It's a symptom that everyone experiences after knowing it, but you may feel depressed when you think it's just your own problem. Based on these concerns, I will briefly explain the mental illness that really needs medical attention apart from these trivial things today.</div><div>&nbsp;Mental illness refers to a pathological mental state that affects things such as a person's thoughts, feelings, and behavior. Today, social awareness of mental illness is still not improved. You can confide in others when you visit the hospital due to other diseases, but you tend to be reluctant to confide in others easily when you go to psychiatry. According to data from the Health Insurance review &amp; Assessment service, the number of teenage depression patients has increased by 17.4% over the past five years.</div><div>&nbsp;I'd like to empasize that social awareness of mental illness needs to be improved. The national solution is education and campaigns related to it. The solution on a personal level is to improve one's own perception. Thank for your time.</div>]]></description>
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