My Most Memorable Day – Our Paragraph Wall by Ainura Nurzhanova https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7 Welcome to our class writing wall! Post your paragraph about your most memorable day using the Hamburger structure: Top Bun: Topic sentence Filling: Supporting details Bottom Bun: Closing sentence πŸ” Read at least two classmates’ paragraphs. πŸ’¬ Leave 1 kind comment and 1 suggestion on each! en-us 2025-04-13 21:11:47 UTC 2025-04-16 17:40:30 UTC hello@padlet.com πŸ“Œ MODEL PARAGRAPH nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407952248 🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun):
My most memorable day was when my class went on a field trip to the mountains.

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We started the day with a long bus ride, singing songs and sharing snacks.

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When we arrived, we hiked up a trail and saw beautiful trees and a waterfall.

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After lunch, we played games and took lots of fun pictures together.

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That day was unforgettable because I had fun with my friends and learned new things about nature.

]]> 2025-04-13 21:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407952248 πŸ“ Parts of a Paragraph – Student Guide nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407952545 2025-04-13 21:29:18 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407952545 πŸ” 1. Main Idea (Top Bun) nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407953955 πŸ” 1. Main Idea (Top Bun)

πŸ”Ή Tells what the paragraph is mostly about
πŸ”Ή Usually the first sentence
πŸ”Ή Helps the reader understand the topic
πŸ‘‰ Example: My dog Max is the best pet ever.

]]> 2025-04-13 21:32:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407953955 πŸ₯¬ 2. Supporting Details (The Filling) nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407954517 πŸ”Ή Gives more information about the main idea
πŸ”Ή Includes facts, examples, or explanations
πŸ”Ή Makes your paragraph interesting and clear
πŸ‘‰ Example: He always greets me with a wagging tail.
πŸ‘‰ Example: Max plays fetch better than any other dog I know.

]]> 2025-04-13 21:34:28 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407954517 🍞 3. Closing Sentence (Bottom Bun) nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407955090 πŸ”Ή Restates the main idea in a new way
πŸ”Ή Brings the paragraph to a strong finish
πŸ‘‰ Example: That’s why Max is such a special dog.

]]> 2025-04-13 21:35:51 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407955090 Arailym's paragraph nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407956169 🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun):


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]]> 2025-04-13 21:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407956169 Gulbike's paragraph nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407958554 🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun):


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]]> 2025-04-13 21:46:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407958554 Gulzat's paragraph nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407958832 🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun): My most memorable day was when I heard of my brother’s birth, that I always dreamed of.


πŸ₯¬ Supporting Detail 1: I was playing in the yard with my friends,when I heard the news.


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]]> 2025-04-13 21:46:57 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407958832 Diana's paragraph nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407958963 🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun):


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]]> 2025-04-13 21:47:24 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407958963 Aidana's paragraph nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407959119 🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun):

A memorable day in my life was when my family took me on a surprise trip to the mountains.

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I was amazed by the beautiful scenery and fresh mountain air.

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]]> 2025-04-13 21:47:50 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407959119 Gauhar's paragraph nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407959276 🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun): I will never forget the time I become Mum


πŸ₯¬ Supporting Detail 1: I feel so happy when I pass exam


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]]> 2025-04-13 21:48:15 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407959276 Aset's paragraph nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407959404 🍞 Topic Sentence (Top Bun):my most memorable day was when I played volleyball for the first time


πŸ₯¬ Supporting Detail 1: I started to play with a local volleyball team


πŸ… Supporting Detail 2: I've touched the ball for the first time


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]]> 2025-04-13 21:48:41 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407959404 πŸ’¬ Comment Prompt – Peer Feedback Guide nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407970623 After reading a classmate’s paragraph, leave a kind and helpful comment.
You can use these sentence starters:

πŸ‘ Say something positive:

  • I liked how you started your paragraph with...

  • Your details made me feel like I was really there!

  • I think your most memorable day sounds really fun because...

✏️ Give a gentle suggestion:

  • You could add one more detail about...

  • Maybe your ending could explain how you felt.

  • I wonder what happened before/after that – could you include it?

]]> 2025-04-13 22:20:36 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3407970623 nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3411221188 2025-04-15 18:46:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3411221188 nurzhanovaainura https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3411231330 2025-04-15 18:56:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nurzhanovaainura/oc4s7t2jykkmrui7/wish/3411231330