Narrative Essay Brainstorm: The Outsiders by Michelle Cearley https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1 Post ONE comment about what needs to be included in the draft in order to have an appropriate context with the novel and meet the rubric requirements. en-us 2014-10-06 23:33:18 UTC 2026-03-23 16:52:10 UTC hello@padlet.com Mrs. Cearley user_1412638330 https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36467751 It needs first person POV with Randy as narrator

]]> 2014-10-07 16:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36467751 Describe the stabbing https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489649 Da Jack Brown

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:06 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489649 Austin Mondello https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489673 You need to add on fiction to make it intresting

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:10 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489673 Kiara Gutierrez https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489707 You need 5 literary devices

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:19 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489707 Daniel Castaneda https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489718 Dialogue and Natural

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:22 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489718 JackLittle https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489720 You need to make sure you include that they were drunk

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:22 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489720 abby harms https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489727 use a lot of good imagery during the fountain scene

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:23 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489727 Abby https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489731 I think that the emotionn of just loosing your best friend should be added into the after thought of Randy.

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489731 Sarah Doherty https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489732 Somthing not expected...make it intresting

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489732 Amber Capshaw https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489744 Emotion. How does Randy feel about just losing his best friend?

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489744 Torin Hight (Tornova) https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489745 give emotion in dialouge

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489745 Caylee Callaway https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489756 At least 5 figurative language uses

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:31 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489756 Darshini https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489757 Stick with the book

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:31 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489757 Alexis K. https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489763 It needs emotion. People's reactions to his death. Many feels.

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489763 Nick Woodhouse (Confused Walrus) https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489766 create new paragraph after dialogue.

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489766 Hannah Lever https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489786 give Randy lots of feelings of sadness and anger

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489786 Kaleigh Gallagher https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489787 Use varied sentences

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489787 Alexis Evans https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489799 I think that it should inclued Randy's feelings for the greasers before and after the insident

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:39 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489799 Kayla Brown https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489803 you will need imagery and dialouge

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:43 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489803 Ashlin cathey https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489812 use literary devices

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:46 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489812 Jack Brown  (spacekittes158) https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489829 Describe the stabbing to make it intresting

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489829 Katherine Norman https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489834 you will need dialoge

]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489834 nathan palmer https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489836 not that descripted

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]]> 2014-10-07 18:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489836 janae ferguson fergusonj1 https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489868 the go to fast.

]]> 2014-10-07 18:16:06 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489868 Jordan Neece https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489893 Use imagery to describe the situation

]]> 2014-10-07 18:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489893 ivy https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489902 emotion of how randy and his friends felt

]]> 2014-10-07 18:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489902 sophia gavin https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489910 maybe bring a new side of randy ,and be very descriptive make pepole want to rread chapter 5

]]> 2014-10-07 18:16:22 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36489910 taneesha https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36490169 use detail in the scene when bob dies

]]> 2014-10-07 18:17:39 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36490169 Zoey https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36490229 more Dialogue and describe more

]]> 2014-10-07 18:17:57 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36490229 rohan mortha https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36490471 dont say something over and over again

]]> 2014-10-07 18:19:13 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36490471 Ashlin Cathey https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/oc24qvd4ks1/wish/36491000 Give descripted details

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