Essay by Maryam Masyitah https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline Made with wonder en-us 2018-11-15 09:44:31 UTC 2023-07-16 19:17:00 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Babyhead.png Parents’ Role in Sibling Rivalry. maryammasyitah https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/304792351 GS: Sibling rivalry means competition among siblings.
Sibling spend most time together especially during childhood.
LS: Sibling relationship is complicated but it is mostly influenced by parental treatment.
Thesis statement: I agree / It is agreed (stand) that parents can reduce sibling rivalry (topic) by keeping an eye on children and enlightening each child’s ability. (2 reasons)

Topic sentence Para 2: To begin with, Parents can curb sibling rivalry when they are more attentive towards their children.
OR
Parents can curb sibling rivalry when they keep a close eye on their children.

Supporting details:
1. It is important to assess how often sibling rivalry occur and how children react to it.
Explanation - It is essential to acknowledge how each child is feeling.
2. Furthermore, let children know early that name-calling, bullying, and physical assaults are off limits.
ex -For instance,  If they are having a fight, help them solve the minor disagreement.
ex- However, parents must never allow physical assault as it can cause a long-lasting effects.

Concluding sentence: In brief, although it is almost impossible to prevent sibling conflict, but parents can reduce it by paying more attention towards their children. their behaviour is impacting others.

Topic sentences Para 3: Next, Parents need to let children to find their role and celebrate it.

Supporting details:
1. To begin with,  children don’t understand stand that each person is different and may have different strengths.
2. Hence, Parents need to focus on each child’s strengths and make them know the positive things they bring.
3. On the contrary, Parents should never point out the differences between each child negatively.
4. Sibling rivalry mostly will occurs even when they are adult over sports and scholastics achievements. 
5. Parents must aware of the negative feeling that children may build.

Concluding sentences: Thus, Nothing creates more conflict among siblings than parents who favor one child over the others.

Conclusion: In conclusion, Parents play a key role in teaching children how to get along with each other and reducing conflict between them. 
SuggestionTherefore, parents must be alert of their children behaviours and be fair to each children to reduce sibling rivalry.]]> 2018-11-15 13:55:14 UTC https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/304792351 The effects of sibling rivalry. maryammasyitah https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/304800373 Intro: 
Gs: While a burly kid on the playground may be the stereotype of a childhood bully, a new study suggests some of the most damaging bullies are ad close to home as you can get.
Ls: According to a study, a childhood bully typically comes from siblings who tease, make fun of and physically hurt their brothers and sisters.
Ts: It is agreed that these type of treatments can give negative effects as they grow up because it can develop mental problems and parasomnias.

B1:
TS: First of all, youngsters who were bullied by siblings are likely to report depression at age 18 as those who werenybullied by siblings.
Sd1: nearly twice as likely to report anxiety as they enter adulthood.
       Ex: They will feel scared to face the outside world as they don’t even have a support from their siblings that supposedly back them up in any situation.
Sd2: Besides, they will have the tendency to hurt themselves.
       Ex: For instance, when they are often being tease especially about their physical appearance, they will have low self-confidence and feel like they don’t worth living, so they will try to suicide.
Cs: In brief, the action of bullying among siblings can taint their emotional and mental health.

Body2:
Ts: Next, when someone is often being bullied by their own siblings, they can unconsciously developed parasomnias which mean they will often get nightmares, night terrors or sleepwalking.
Sd1: A house that supposedly be their safe haven has become a place that they are in constant fear because they can’t escape from their bullies. This will cause them to have a trauma.
       Ex: For example, a kid easily being affected by a dreadful event especially if it is involving them so they will unwillingly being disrupted by it to their sleep.

Sd2: Moreover, they will have continuously stress processed at night.
      Ex: The emotional of the bullies’ victims will be unstable.
Cs: Thus, the issues of bullies among siblings undoubtedly causes the victims to have problems with sleeping.

Conclusion:
In conclusion, (paraphrased)
Suggestion: Parents should be more attentive to their children so they can overcome this issue before it was too late.]]> 2018-11-15 14:10:24 UTC https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/304800373 Part 1: Cybercrime has negative impact on young adult maryammasyitah https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310024553 2018-12-01 03:19:37 UTC https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310024553 Part 2: Cybercrime has negative impact on young adult maryammasyitah https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310024656 2018-12-01 03:21:16 UTC https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310024656 Don’ts maryammasyitah https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310025125 1. Nowadays / In this global era / In a nutshell etc
2. Personal pronouns: we / I / us etc
3. For example use etc and many more. Just give what you know.
4. ]]> 2018-12-01 03:27:48 UTC https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310025125 Do’s maryammasyitah https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310025469 1. Parallel: for TS, starting of paragragrah, conclusion.
2. Paraphrase word. Avoid repetitive 
3. Use idiom, figurative figures, proverb correctly
4. Give specific stand! Agree or disagree.
5. Conclusion: for suggestions put : as a suggestion or as a recommendation. Must related to the topic( the correct authority)

]]> 2018-12-01 03:32:58 UTC https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310025469 Info maryammasyitah https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310025573 1. Catastrophe : disaster
2. These : pronoun( replace what you have mentioned )
3. While : opposite mean]]> 2018-12-01 03:34:24 UTC https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310025573 Agree : We can feed the world while also protecting the planet maryammasyitah https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310026986 INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH
General statement :
We can feed the world while also protecting the planet.

Specific statement :
The answer is by using the GMO's it brings advantage to people surrounding and also secure the habitat and environment in the planet.

Thesis statement :
It is agreed that we can feed the world while also protecting the planet because by producing using GM plants, farmers will take utilise less land to grow more food and also they use less amount of water.

BODY PARAGRAPH 1 :
Topic sentence:
We can reduce the usage of land to produce more food.

Supporting detail 1:
To produce higher yields from same crop land
ex
Supporting detail 2:
The crop yields can potentially double the transition from traditional crop to GMO'S crop is completed by local farmer.
ex

Concluding sentences:
GMO'S can minimize the utilization of land to provide more food.
PARAGRAPH
General statement :
We can feed the world while also protecting the planet.

Specific statement :
The answer is with uses by the GMO's it brings advantage to people surrounding and also secure the habitat and environment.

Thesis statement :
Besause by producing GMO's it takes less land to grow more food and also it uses less amount of water.

BODY PARAGRAPH 1 :
Topic sentence:
We can reduce the usage of land to produce more food.

Supporting detail 1:
To produce higher yields from same crop land

Supporting detail 2:
Can potentually double the transition from traditional crop to GMO'S crop is completed.


Concluding sentences:
GMO'S can minimize the utilization of land to provide more food.

BODY PARAGRAPH 2
Topic sentence:
Only little volume of water is needed used by GMO's crop.

Supporting detail 1:
Generally farmers cannot afford to irrigate their crop or purcase pesticides leading to a vicious circle of poor crop growth.
ex - From 1980 to 2011, the amount or irrigatation water required for fields planted with maize decrease by 53 percent.
Supporting detail 2:
ex

Concluding sentence :
In short,  by saving the water GM plants are able to protect the planet while also feeding  the world.

CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH :
In conclusion, the planet can be save in order to feed the world with the help of GMO's by reducing the usage of land to provide more food and also control water utilization for the crops.

Suggestion:
As a recommendation, GM technology should be implemented to overcome the most critical problem of insufficient food supply. the world is an wil be facing. 

 


]]> 2018-12-01 03:59:11 UTC https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310026986 Planet will be destroyed while trying to feed the world maryammasyitah https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310027001 *Introduction*

General statement:Having food is very important to human life as it maintains good health and to survive.
Specific statement:Hence,the production of food that is said to be genetically modified has gotten more improved through the years.
Thesis statement: It is disagreed that we can feed the world while also protecting the planet because it will cause pesticide emits poisonous gases and affecting living things survival rate.

*Body Paragraph 1*

Topic sentence :
To begin with, pesticides that are used in genetically engineered crops are toxic to living creatures.

Supporting detail 1 :
While pesticides are useful for the control of various pests, many of them are hazardous chemicals.
ex - This is due to some pesticides are able to mix with the air and may pollute the atmosphere. Not only do they affect animals but they can effect us, as humans.

Supporting detail 2 :
There are several threats of pesticide for land areas.
ex -First, the use of pesticide can damage agricultural land by harming beneficial insect species, soil microorganisms, and worms which naturally limit pest populations and maintain soil health. Next, it can weakening plant root systems and immune systems. It can also reduce concentrations of essential plant nutrients in the soil such as nitrogen and phosphorous.

Supporting detail 3 :
However, In addition, human exposure to pesticides is linked to health problems such as double a child’s risk of attention deficit hyperactivity disorder (ADHD), a condition that can cause inattention, hyperactivity, and impulsivity in children from a study found.


Concluding sentence :
In short, by pulling the pesticides for GM crops trigger cause more harm than benefits to living creatures.

*Body paragraph 2*

Topic sentences:  Last but not least, Secondly, we cannot protect the planet while feeding the world because living things cannot survived normally there are dangerous effects towards living things

Supporting detail 1: we need to eliminate the home of wild animals and prime oxygen provider which is rainforest to give space for GM crops and pasture.
Explanation: In South America, rainforests and other natural landscapes are destroyed everyday to make room for genetically engineered monocultures and pastures. 
This will cause more creatures especially living things in the forest will be extinct as they cannot adapted in the situation.
SD 2: when these GM food are being consumed by animals and human, the poisonous substances from the food will be transferred in the consumers body.
Explaination:
1. It will stay in the body system for a long period of time. Hence, it will harm the health of animals and human.
2. Studies observing the effects of GMOs on mice and rats linked genetically modified products to allergic reactions, liver problems, sterility, diseases, reproductive problems, infant mortality and excessive cell growth, which can lead to cancer.

Supporting details 3: As the GM crops are being modified to resist to the pesticides, the pesticides will developed itself to become stronger to be able to invade the plants. Then the scientists will make the crops to be better in resisting the pesticide. This cycles will be continued nonstop.
GM causing the pesticide to become more dangerous not only to the crop but to the human being too. Human and animals will be expose to the poisonous and toxin pesticides that will invade their body and make they cannot survived normally.

Concluding sentence: Hence, it is impossible to achieve both ambitions without sacrificing the others as to feed the world, the planet cannot function normally.

Conclusion:
In conclusion, it is believed that The whole world cannot be fed without affecting the planet as it damaging the natural cycle of life and the pesticides are poisonous to our health. As a suggestion, the government should regulate the use of GM crops in agriculture. we should avoid this happening by not over use the GMOs.]]> 2018-12-01 03:59:34 UTC https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310027001 Research: Agree : We can feed the world while also protecting the planet maryammasyitah https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310027649 Thank GS: As the technology become powerful in science and medical area, more people have longer life expectancy. Hence, it is increasing total number of people living on earth. 
LS: However, it is causing the food supply to shorten faster. Many believe that by trying to feed everyone, the planet will be destroyed.
TS: But, it is agreed that the world can be protected while meet the needs for food of the inhabitants of Earth by mantaining the condition of the soil and developing a better production of crops without using more space.

Body paragraph 1
Topic sentence
- New way of farming Protects the quality of soil.
Supporting detail 1
- GM plants are insect-resistant  
ex - Bt proteins, so farmers do not have to use insecticides on the crops.
Supporting detail 2
- produce their own pesticide
ex- Bt proteins are more safer than pesticides that are being use in conventional farming.
ex
- By using turn GM insect-resistant, it will reduce the usage of pesticide by 37%. This allowed conventional farmer to severely decrease their reliance on pesticides.
Concluding sentence
- The application of GM insect-resistant will not affect the quality of the soil.

Body paragraph 2
Topic sentence
- New way of farming Improves agricultural yields without using a lot of space.
Supporting detail 1
- vertical farming does not need a lot of space
ex- Avoid developing countries from starving out of food source. This is because they do not have any space to plant the crops.
Supporting detail 2
- The crops produced are guaranteed to be of a high quality

Concluding sentence
- Thus with the GMO's will help to increase the crops without expanding the agricultural farm.

Concluding Paragraph
Restatement of thesis
In conclusion, it is agreed that we can protect the environment while feeding the people by maintaining the condition of the soil and developing a better production of crops without using more space.
Suggestion
As a suggestion, the government should encourage farmers to use more GM technology.

]]> 2018-12-01 04:12:23 UTC https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310027649 Research: Disagree : We can feed the world while also protecting the planet maryammasyitah https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310027837 GS: As the technology become powerful in science and medical area, more people have longer life expectancy. Hence, it is increasing total number of people living on earth. 
LS: However, it is causing the food supply to shorten faster. Many researchers are trying to create a plan to make sure food can be produced without giving bad effects to the environment.
TS: But, it is agreed that it is impossible to feed the world without destroying the Earth as]]> 2018-12-01 04:17:27 UTC https://padlet.com/maryammasyitah/essayoutline/wish/310027837