About my life by David Alejandro Pinzón Pinzón

davidalejpp — 2021-06-28 14:33:08 UTC

When I was 5 years old I studied at the Pompillos Jaramillo school where all my classmates except me fought and after recess I got very hungry and I asked for food from my classmates or the teachers who gave me money to buy something to eat and suddenly they would not give me To say that I don't eat at home and it is true since at breakfast I only ate one fruit because my mother had no money,

davidalejpp — 2021-06-28 14:36:12 UTC

the years passed and I had 3 uncles and they saw me that you are super skinny and they decided that I would choose one to be my father Because it helped me in my studies and Eliji and my mother were very happy and cried and then they told me that I have grandparents and that they came to Loja

davidalejpp — 2021-06-28 14:37:43 UTC

and I did not meet them until the day came and they praised me a lot because I had almost no clothes, I had a pair of broken shoes and only my dad was studying at the university

davidalejpp — 2021-06-28 14:39:00 UTC

and if he helped me but he didn't have so much money and my grandparents brought me so many clothes that I was surprised because I never had so many clothes and I cry because they had just worked on notebooks for me Where I did not have, I used them in old notebooks and then the years passed where I already had a bed of my own, my mother with work

davidalejpp — 2021-06-28 14:39:44 UTC

was a miracle because and then my grandparents gave me a soccer team to de-brace me, they helped me a lot and that was my life

davidalejpp — 2021-06-28 14:40:28 UTC

And then I was baptized and I had godparents and then we moved to other houses. When I turned 15 my family became happy and cheerful and that is all I experienced in my life.

davidalejpp — 2021-06-28 14:41:20 UTC

Andrea Alvarado

arevaloandrea293 — 2021-06-28 14:43:25 UTC

It is a very beautiful story, I love the plot is super interesting and has a very good ending.

Amy Herrera

amuherrera2905 — 2021-06-28 14:44:49 UTC

It is a good story, and the characters are so good, i like the order of the story and how yo relate this with a lot of description, congratulations.

Fernando Santin.

fernandosantin4 — 2021-06-28 14:47:48 UTC

he made a song to clear the animals from his house since every day they came to bother him there is a day leaving his house he met a princess named Sofia who wanted to help him, she drank a liquid that would help her to communicate with The animals and after that she asked them not to enter and this made them help her. She drove to the boy and told him that he was ready. She ate with him and they fell in love and lived happily ever after.

Daniela Contreras

2021-06-28 14:47:49 UTC

I like how history has a good development of the characters and in the way you ordered it. this incredible

Pablo Calvache

calvachepablo131 — 2021-06-28 14:49:15 UTC

I like your story because it is different from the others and it has a good grammatical structure

Horus Quezada

horusquezada — 2021-06-28 14:50:17 UTC

It is a very well developed story, the scenes and the characters are very good and striking