Post your essay introduction and thesis statement by Kate Scheel

Dr. Kate

schk2 — 2024-05-22 17:22:24 UTC

Write a draft introduction and thesis statement for your topic.

Remember that the thesis statement is one sentence long and includes the counter argument, the stance/position you will take on the issue and your three reasons to prove your position is correct.

Ahmed Alshamsi

2024-05-22 18:50:15 UTC

The scientists says since the 1830s the climate change have begun, and the weather start to get warmer and warmer. Ever year we see new record for the hottest weather for ever county, so all of us are affected by the climate change. It important for us to solve this huge problem, because if we don’t solve the climate change problem sooner or later the will the earth and the atmosphere will be damaged by the climate change. Some people argued that human-made climate change is occurring but that the extent to which climate is changing and the precise impact of human activity is uncertai, but the climate change have a lot of effects on the earth here ~~are~~ and three important effects are higher sea levels, hotter temperatures and the rise of global hunger.

Ceylon

2024-05-22 18:53:06 UTC

Climate change ~~always~~ has been a hot topic of conversation. Because of its profound effects on both natural ecosystems and human society, global warming has drawn more and more attention from scientists. It is characterized by its persistence and unpredictability. These events are predicted to become more frequent and severe as global warming picks up speed, presenting significant challenges to communities everywhere. According to scientists, 2023's summer was unusually warm. It was already the warmest summer in the Northern Hemisphere, since about 1850 (Erdenesanaa, 2024). Scientists saw unusual extremes in 2023 in the North Atlantic's high sea surface temperatures and the Southern Ocean's low sea ice extent, both outside the range of the daily time series from 1982 to 2011 (Kuhlbrodt et al, 2024). This extreme climate change requires our attention. While some people say there is no need to worry at all, because they feel that global warming will not affect the era in which they live, global warming needs immediate attention because global warming affects ocean temperatures and sea ice, increases human exposure to heat and causes natural disasters such as wildfires.

(Erdenesanaa, 2024)

(Kuhlbrodt et al, 2024)

Sheng Qin

2024-05-22 18:54:11 UTC

Humans have already heated the planet by roughly 1.1 degrees Celsius, or 2 degrees Fahrenheit, since the 19th century, largely by burning coal, oil, and gas for energy. （Plumer, 2021). The earth is getting warmer every year by humans. In today’s world Nations have delayed curbing their fossil-fuel emissions for so long. Although the temperature is not distorting our daily lives, we should worry about the increasing temperature because it may cause extreme weather events, melting ice rising sea levels, and ecosystem disruption.

Plumer, B., & Fountain, H. (2021, August 9). A major new report finds some of the devastating impacts of global warming are now unavoidable. New York Times.https://www.nytimes.com/2021/08/09/climate/a-major-new-report-finds-some-of-the-devastating-impacts-of-global-warming-are-now-unavoidable.html

Melody

2024-05-22 19:02:29 UTC

Since 1970, the Earth's temperature has risen faster than in any comparable period. The world has already warmed by about 1.2 degrees Celsius on average. The National Climate Assessment found that since peaking in 2007, the United States emissions of heat-trapping gases have declined, but the reductions are still insufficient to meet international targets for avoiding catastrophic climate change. If carbon pollution is not further reduced, the serious climate risks facing the United States will continue to increase. Scientists have found that extreme heat waves could make parts of the Middle East too hot for human habitation. Rising temperatures also pose significant risks to China and India. Each year, 4.9 million people could die from extreme heat. Although climate impacts affect both ecosystems and humans, some people believe that climate change is a natural phenomenon and not caused by human activities, but people should be worried because climate have an impact on the ocean, on the natural disaster and on the ecosystem.

Sehyun Kang

2024-05-22 19:04:47 UTC

In the past the global warming problems has not been taken seriously since people didn’t know much about this. However these days climate change problem is now considered as urgent matter because many people now acknowledged severity of global warming problem through media, even in 2023 the temperatures reached its highest among past 100000years. Although some people still thinks it is problem that can be solved later and it is not that serious problem. global warming is a serious problem because the warming is already accelerating, the sea levels are rising and there is destruction of ecosystems and enviornment.

andreoni, M (2024) It’s confirmed: 2023 was the planet’s warmest year on record and perhaps in the last 100,000 years. By far.

andreoni, M(2024) The consequences of all this additional heat played out around the world. Canada has its most destructive wildfire season on record.

Zhong, R(2024)

Scott liu

2024-05-22 19:10:14 UTC

It was found that man-made warming began earlier that in the past. The warming phenomenon caused by the increase in greenhouse gases first appeared in the tropical ocean and the Arctic in 1830, that is to say, the climate warming seen today began as early as 180 years old. In recent years climate warming has been a hot topic, and the frequency of extreme weather events has increased like wildfires and melting glaciers or something like that, making people care more about it. People tend to choose products which are ‘green’ or ‘eco friendly’, it is good to see this trend. Despite we are facing these environmental problems and their exit, there are still a lot of people who don’t believe our earth is facing a serious environmental problem, they think the news just exaggeratedly reported and trying to mislead people for their views. So the question is ‘Is there any evidence that can surely prove the climate warming problem is exit or serious?’ While some people refuse to accept the existence of global warming, climate warming is a serious problem because warming is affecting our life, ~~For example 2023 is the hottest summer in 2000 years,~~ and it will cause drought conditions to occur more frequently and ~~, affect our food supply. So climate warming is killing our food supply and~~ the amount of carbon dioxide is increasing.

Queenie

2024-05-22 19:11:26 UTC

Global warming has been the focus of people's attention to global climate since the 19th century, when relevant scientists published reports on the increasing annual temperature of the earth. This is closely related to our lives. It also gets a lot of attention in the social media we use today, as well as some popular news sites. Popular news website The New York Times also reported on it. Although many people cannot accept the problem of global warming caused by the climate crisis, the climate crisis deserves immediate attention because the amount of Antarctic sea ice has reached a record low, the unbearable heat around the world has not been alleviated, and the shocking ocean temperatures have threatened normal human life.

Erdenesanaa , D.,Abraham,L .,(2023). Elena. S .(2023). Gerry ,M.& Erdenesanaa ,D.& Aaron ,B.(2023) . Bill .M. (2024)

Nathan

2024-05-22 19:15:20 UTC

According to scientists, global warming is becoming increasingly severe. Due to global warming, some glaciers are rapidly melting, which has also forced some animals to migrate to other regions and also impact on the ecological environment of the Earth. Global warming not only affects the lives of animals, but also our human lives. For example, climate change and increased carbon dioxide pose a threat to freshwater, clean air, fuel and energy, food, medicine, and other essential conditions for human survival. Some people argue that global warming will not have a significant impact on humanity, we don't need to worry about these, we need most is to build more factories to promote the economy, but how should we live if the Earth no longer exists? Global warming is a very serious problem. So we need to worry about the impact of global warming on the Earth. That’s because global warming will affect the Earth's ecological environment, it will affect our survival on Earth and it can cause many diseases.

Can you put the three highlighted phrases into one sentence rather than using three sentences.

Murphy

2024-05-22 19:16:00 UTC

Global warming has become a problem that all people have to face. The global temperature has been rising year by year since the Industrial Revolution.Now ~~a day~~, although people have realized the harm caused by global warming, people still cannot control it. While many people think that global warming ~~does not need to be taken seriously~~ cannot be controlled, ~~global warming does need to be taken seriously because it will melt glaciers, raise sea levels, and destroy regional ecosystems .So how do people solve the problem of global warming?~~ people can find ways to solve the problem ~~from these three reasons, there are several ways~~, by reducing greenhouse gas emissions, planting large areas of green plants and educating people about environmental protection.

(As written, it was not clear whether you were proving that global warming exists or whether you were proving that global warming can be controlled. I think that you mean to prove the later)

Richard

2024-05-22 19:18:06 UTC

Artefacts are found in many places all over the world in olden times. People kept these objects in museums and as their private collection. Nowadays, people have known how these things are important, and they realize that these things are evidence of history. People launched campaign which advocated the repatriation of artefacts that had been exhibited in the museum. While some people claim that first come first serve, these items should be returned to their descendants because artefacts are the heritages of ancestors, indigenous people need to reconnect with their culture, and people should have ethic on ancient people.

Wing Sze Ngan ( Sarah)

2024-05-22 22:26:56 UTC

Climate change is a severe problem in the world. Since the industrial revolution in 1800s, the temperature has increased near 1 degree Celsius according to NASA. 1 degree Celsius is not a significant , but it represents a warning to our earth. In 2023, which was a year in post COVID-19, the Earth's temperature has recorded an increase of 1.48 degrees Celcius warmer than before. According to the climate scientists, the goal is to keep the temperature rise within 1.5 degrees Centigrade. ~~For~~ 1.48 degrees Celcius, which is nearly reaching the limit, can bring numerous challenges and impacts to the societies, even the world. Although many people still do not worry about climate change, urgent and coordinated action should perform by all stakeholders, such as governments, industries, even the public because climate change is harmful to people, even security, climate change can bring impact to the Natural World, which can lead to the loss of biodiversity and the Arctic Ocean and Arctic Sea may melt very soon. Please rephrase as it is difficult for me to identify the three reasons.

Abdulla Ahmed

2024-05-22 23:24:00 UTC

Museums and art galleries fill a number of roles in society. It could inculde anything made by humans for exaple:art, tools, and documents.“The history of Indigenous art in Canada begins sometime during the last Ice Age between 80,000 and 12,000 years ago” (Vastokas, 2013,p.1). The question what these objects should be returned to the indigenous or it should be in the museam in porpes of study and education. Although some people believe infigenouse artefacts should be returned, they should be kept in a museam because it could be used of porpes of study, and it could be used for education, and to prevent the sale of the artefacts on ~~could get into~~ the black market.

Rico Ye

2024-05-22 23:26:51 UTC

In museums, people can see various ancient objects. These objects made or used by ancient indigenous peoples are usually discovered by archaeologists，then sent to museums or purchased for private collection. However, many of these ancient objects were traded or even looted without the permission of local indigenous peoples（Hunt 2019）. While many people would argue that these objects are better off in a museum, the objects should be returned to the descendants of the indigenous people because the indigenous people made them and these ancient objects belong to their producers, these ancient objects are the heritage left by the ancestors of indigenous peoples, and these are also the inheritance of their culture.

Bao

2024-05-22 23:42:58 UTC

According to statistics, carbon dioxide has become one of the biggest contributors to global warming, rising from only 280 ppm in 1800 to 425 ppm in 2020 (Dyer, 2024）and it is rising every year. Now that global warming has affected people's lives, it has reached a record high in recent years. Therefore, global warming is closely related to people, and if we do not pay attention to climate warming, the earth and people's daily lives will be destroyed by gradually increasing temperatures. Some argue that people cannot have a huge effect in climate change,however people can make an impact on decreasing e effects of climate change by driving electric cars, preserving trees and ~~do not use~~ not using plastic bags.

Zhenjie Li（Leon）

2024-05-23 00:05:10 UTC

Climate change is a common problem in human life. As temperatures continue to rise, the issue of global climate change has evolved from an environmental concern to a global crisis that demands urgent attention and concerted action. Global climate warming has potential and direct problems of varying degrees, and the ramifications of global climate change are far-reaching and multifaceted. Some people argue that it is not necessary to address climate change， but climate change needs to be addressed because it will cause environmental damage, economic instability and harm to human existence.

Yuchen Lu. Yukki

2024-05-23 00:09:04 UTC

The issue of global warming has become one that affects everyone. Since the Industrial Revolution, the average global temperature has increased by 1.2 degrees Celsius annually. Since 1970, however, the rate of increase in global temperatures has surpassed all previous periods. According to a credible government research, the United States is warming far faster than the world average, and Americans are already experiencing severe and worsening effects of the climate crisis, with worse to come. Furthermore, the United States' whole geography is being severely damaged by the climate catastrophe, from protracted droughts in the Southwest to rain-induced flooding in the Northeast. This sentence needs a subject. Who is the discoverer? ( Milman,2023,Nov,14) have discovered that the Middle East may see significant heat waves brought on by global warming, rendering the region unsuitable for people. Although some believe that global warming is a normal occurrence of the climate, people should be concerned about the increasing rate of global warming since it has led to record low Antarctic sea ice; unbearably high temperatures in Africa, which have negatively impacted both human and animal survival; and babies born within unstable climates due to global warming may have mental health issues and brain abnormalities.

Steven

2024-05-23 00:12:29 UTC

In the last few years, the increasing number of people pay attention to the topic of the increasing temperature of the earth. Most countries, however, remain positive about the potential climate catastrophe caused by rising temperatures. Still, some people believe that rising temperatures are a natural phenomenon of natural changes, and we should not worry too much. They always believe that human beings should not take actions to curb global warming, because it is against the law of nature, and may even lead to more and more serious and irreversible negative consequences. However, W we should worry about the situation that the temperature of the earth has been increasing because more and more animals and plants are becoming extinct, the earth's sea level is rising, and more and more natural disasters are harming human beings absolutely.It is obvious that global warming has had an impact on the activities of living things. Whether in terms of climate, water or air, the negative impact of global warming can not be ignored under the threat of heat. In addition, research has shown that factory production, the widespread use of motor vehicles and other activities do indeed drive the rate and progress of global warming. As I am reading, I am looking for the three reasons that you will use to prove your claim. It is not clear to me whether the three reasons are 'extinction of plants and animals, rising sea levels and more natural disasters' OR 'the threat of heat, widespread us of motor vehicles'. The thesis statement should be the last sentence of the introductory paragraph.

Tristan Arbelaez

2024-05-23 00:14:06 UTC

Global warming results from the increase in the greenhouse effect, a process in which thermal radiation emitted by the Earth is trapped in the atmosphere due to greenhouse gases Their presence is natural and necessary to maintain the planet's temperature at habitable levels. The problem is that emissions of gases such as methane and nitrous oxide have skyrocketed compared to the pre-industrial era.

Scientists attribute the global warming trend observed since the mid-20th century to human expansion of the “greenhouse effect,” the warming that occurs when the atmosphere traps heat radiating from Earth into space., Some of these earth-harming materials are mainly: Carbon dioxide, methane and nitrous oxide.

Many are the effects derived from the well-known global warming or climate change, but the truth is that the origin of this problem, which is causing serious problems not only at the environmental level, but also at the social level, is not known for certain.

Some of the disadvantages of the global warming are: Hurricanes, cyclones, typhoons, droughts, floods, rains or snowfalls increase their degree of violence due to global warming.

While most members of the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change believe that current climate models over estimate the concern, climate change is a concern because we can have a better style of life for all people investing in renewable energy protects national security, it is our duty to preserve the planet for future generations, taking action now will stimulate investment and create jobs and better opportunities.

Cary

2024-05-23 00:19:28 UTC

Canada's climate is warming twice as fast as the rest of the world, and northern Canada is warming even faster, nearly three times the global warming rate, the report said（Dickson，J，2019，April1）Marjorie Shepherd, director of climate research at Environment Canada, said global warming has not been uniform, with some regions warming more than others, and Canada's average temperature has increased by 1.7 degrees since records began in 1948. Since 1948, the average annual temperature in northern Canada has increased by 2.3 degrees Celsius. The united nations report says there is no doubt that humans are the main cause of climate change（Bein，S，2021，August，9） This is usually caused by people's carbon emissions such as heating systems, car exhaust and some facilities that burn coal，Global warming will melt the glaciers and cause the sea level to rise, while the high temperature will cause forest fires in some areas and make some animals unfit to live, such as penguins or seals. w While some may argue that global warming is not a problem, global warming is harmful to human beings because ~~This~~ it will cause glaciers to melt, sea level to rise and ~~we will lose~~ the loss of some coastal land, and many animals will be unable to adapt to the environment and become extinct, such as penguins and seals, and global warming will also lead to forest fires. It looks to me as though you have five reasons. You need to revise the thesis statement so that you have only three reasons.

Kevin

2024-05-23 00:19:42 UTC

From the 19th century, scientists began to study the problem of climate warming and published many reports on climate warming. A lot of people have started to talk about it, some people have no feelings about it because they think that a lot of people are promoting fake news and they don't think that climate change is a problem that people should worry about, but in the opposite, some people think that it is obvious from many natural environmental changes that climate change is a problem that people should worry about that. The question arises of whether people can be should be worried? Although some people do not see a reason for concern, people should be worried because the glaciers are shrinking, and a lot of the natural environment is being affected and secondly it's obvious that many extreme natural disasters are becoming more frequent.Third, people's survival also began to have great hidden dangers.Rather than asking a question, you want to make sure that you make a specific claim for your thesis statement. Revise this last sentence to add the counter argument and the stance/claim.

Tiffany

2024-05-23 00:20:37 UTC

Back in the day (I would replace this phrase with something more formal, such as "In the past," or "In the past) , there were plenty of historical monuments left over by ancient indigenous people. As time ~~goes~~ went by, more and more artifacts ~~are~~ were found, and they are mostly placed in museums. These artifacts have become significant with huge value since they represent the abundance of history from past centuries. Yet, in recent years, ethical questions have arisen, such as "who should possess cultural artifacts?" and "where do these monuments really belong?" These questions and conversations involve justice, cultural preservation, and other related issues. It is essential to consider whether these objects should remain in museums or be repatriated to their original land and country. For instance, the United Kingdom has returned 32 gold and silver treasures stolen from the Asante Kingdom more than 150 years ago. Artifacts, including 15 items from the British Museum and 17 from the Victoria and Albert Museum, track back to the 19th century, where the mess period between the British and the Asante people resulted in these objects being looted from the court of the Asante kings(UK returns looted Ghana artifacts on loan after 150 years). Although there are some advocates who claim that artifacts should be left in museums as they could give people opportunities to learn about historical significance globally, these objects should be returned to indigenous people because these objects belong to their ancestors, are part of their cultural heritage, and they have the right to connect with their culture.

Harold

2024-05-23 00:20:56 UTC

Should people worry that climate change will be one of the causes of human extinction? With the rapid development of The Times, the environment has also changed. The influence of various factors leads to a gradual rise in temperature. Such a slight change would pose a fatal threat to humanity. Reports of the effects and causes of rising temperatures are also coming into the public eye. People are also beginning to consider the changes and effects of climate zones.Some people think that there is no need to worry about climate change, because climate change is a shield for people to use low cost and high price environmental protection products, but people need to worry about climate change, because the melting of glaciers will lead to the rise of ocean water level, destroy the balance of marine ecology and death caused by high temperature.

Fedor Zhurkevich

2024-05-23 00:21:16 UTC

Debates about the correct location of artifacts made by prehistoric native people often occur after they have been discovered. In the past, many of these objects were removed during the past colonial era and placed in museums, often without the approval of the native people. The current debate is whether these objects should be in museums or whether they should be returned to the ancestors of their creators. Opponents argue that museums serve as important institutions for education, while proponents argue that these artifacts are important for cultural identity and justice. In order to maintain cultural identity, correct historical injustices and promote self-determination of native people, this article argues that these objects should be returned to native communities.

Angela

2024-05-23 00:23:07 UTC

The catastrophe that climate change has brought to the world alarm is reshaping the natural environment and human existence. The one of the reason is the temperature has been rising since the industrial revolution and until now the temperature is increasing every year. "According to the European Climate Agency Copernicus, the year experienced the 1.48 degrees before the industrial era, which means it is almost close to the degree that the Paris Climate Accord mention of the degree should be below 1.5 degrees extreme. "(Borenstein, 2024, Jan 09, para 3). Due to the temperature was caused by every year (this sentence needs a subject). All of us will be affected by this unusual natural disaster. In this case, it will not only affect ourselves, but also our children and the earth. While some people consider that temperature rise are natural phenomenon and not caused by human activities, ~~but~~ actually humans need to be worried because if they don't stop it, the ~~natural would not only affect the~~ natural disaster will occur like ice mountain melting, effect of genes of species also ~~the human's the~~ devastating of economy.

Yardrey

2024-05-23 00:27:03 UTC

Global warming is becoming worse, but in the last hundred years it hasn’t been emphasized. In recent years the weather conditions are getting worse that some people realize global warming is the culprit. While some people still think that global warming is not a problem because they haven’t felt anything，~~but~~ climate change is real, because the weather is getting worse, people's health can also be affected, and the melting of icebergs caused by global warming will bring deadly disasters.

Jason Wang

2024-05-23 00:29:49 UTC

Global warming has become a serious problem that all people have to focus on.'A report to President Lyndon Johnson in 1965 noted that the effect of burning fossil fuels was likely to be 'deleterious from the point of view of human beings.' '(Johnson,1965).Due to the over-exploitation and use of resources, and the neglect of environmental protection, human beings have led to global warming, sea level rise.Although some people believe that global warming has little effect on humans, global warming has a negative effect on humans as seen in the increase in greenhouse gases, deforestation and air pollution from industry.

Zisen Ding (Joseph)

2024-05-23 00:32:01 UTC

Global warming is accelerating and 2023 is the hottest year on record(Andreoni,2024)．In the past, Thailand has experienced an out-of-control orange pole season, Canada has experienced one of the most destructive in history, and the more developed industrialization will lead to China, Greece, India and other countries will be hit by high temperatures．However, Statistics show that the Earth has not been this warm in 100000years(Andreoni,2024). Monitoring agencies say the current average temperature is 1.48 degrees Celsius, but if it rises above 1.5 degrees Celsius, coral reefs could disappear and the number of people affected by extreme temperatures could double(Andreoni,2024)．While many people believe climate warming should not be worry, people need to worry about climate warning because climate warming brings bad weather, N negative effects on health, and even cause climate collapse is possible.

Zhe Zhang

2024-05-23 02:03:30 UTC

Is climate issue on the hazard?

Since 1850s industrial revolution, trains,autos and series of burning fossil fuels vehicles came into existence and ,emission of green house gas into atmosphere increases rapidly, especially the chief criminal, carbon dioxide.At the same time,urbanization process speeds up, in order to build more constructions and with more lands are utilized,decrease in forest even increase the concentration of greenhouse gases to make situations even worse.The question is “Is climate issue on the hazard?”In north China 2010,pests grew faster and plants growth period increased, it caused huge loss in harvest.In last year December, a climate agreement “United states framework convention on climate change “was placed which concluded urgent global energy transformation requirement . Many people have a sense of potential crisis of climate but that’s highly limited and these positive awareness are not performed into daily route. While many people refuse to take significant action, people should address the climate issue because of ecosystem disruption,increased incidence of extreme weather events and ,human health problems ~~and so on bad consequences~~.

Remember to add a space after a comma or a period (, or .)

Ricky

2024-05-23 04:08:13 UTC

In the last hundred years, the issue of climate warming has been an important topic of climate change. There have studies have shown that deaths from excessive heat are increasing. Although some people will think this is the normal change of the world that it does not care, the other think that global warming will destroy people’s survival. People need to worry, because global warming is bringing more deaths, and it's also bringing ocean warming leading to more extreme weather and rising sea levels

zayla

2024-05-23 21:20:59 UTC

Global warming is a continuous heating of the Earth's surface due to human activities which cause a large amount of greenhouse gas trapped in the Earth and leads to trapping of heat hence global warming. It has ~~always~~ been a large issue among human beings as it will bring a series of harm to our world. People argues that we do not need to worry about the global heating issue as they believe it will be solved, but I ~~think that~~ we should worry about this large issue because of the unstoppable rapid increase in world temperature, the large harm it will cause in short and long term. I only see two reasons here. You need three. Or do you mean that short term harm and long term harm are two separate reasons?

Ashlyn

2024-05-24 21:47:25 UTC

Over time, objects symbolic of ancient indigenous civilizations have been collected in museums around the world, bringing together the wisdom and culture of ancient indigenous peoples. However, over time, more and more people have begun to question whether these objects should continue to be kept away from their true homelands, and many believe that they should be returned to the descendants of the ancient indigenous peoples. With the revival of traditional values and cultural practices, future generations will be able to explain how these objects were combined and the purpose for which they were made. Their perspective on the achievement of these objects will be unique. Many ancient Aboriginal objects were illegally looted during colonial times, which was an injustice. By returning objects, a more equal and respectful relationship can be established with the descendants of indigenous peoples. This helps to heal the wounds of the past.

While I can detect a claim here that objects should be returned and some reasons (looting is an injsutice, healing of wound) , you need to put the claim in the format given in class. That is, you need the counter argument, the claim/stance and the three reasons in one sentence.

Franklin

2024-05-25 22:54:09 UTC

In many regions of the world, a rising trend in frequency and magnitude of temperature extremes is currently observed. Heat waves and extreme temperatures can have devastating effects on human societies and ecosystems as well as on economies and agriculture. The climate of our planet has undergone significant transformations from the past to the present day particularly since the onset of the industrial revolution in the 1800s. While most people argue that climate change is a natural cycle, scientists now see it as a serious and pressing situation that required immediate action because of the environment, the impact on developing countries, and human health and safety impacts.

Shamma

2024-05-26 22:12:33 UTC

The word "climate change" refers to a considerable adjustment in the circumstances inherent in the terrestrial environment. This is due to both internal and external factors. Climate change has been a major global issue in recent decades. Furthermore, climate change affects life on Earth in a number of ways. These climatic changes are having a wide range of repercussions on the environment and ecosystem. Experts are more concerned about the past year's world heat record and the carbon dioxide in the forest, as well as what is causing the global heat and how to solve it. I don't see the thesis statement. It should be in the form of a counter argument + stance + three reasons.

Aizere Nurlan

2024-05-26 23:31:41 UTC

In 1938, steam engineer Callendar took a break from day job and began painstakingly checking records from 147 weather stations. By calculating all the collected data, he noticed that global temperature had risen 0.3C over the previous 50 years.

Climate change skeptics still continuing to defend their position and there are some of their claims: “This is the coldest winter we’ve had in years! So much for global warming”, “Climate change is natural and normal”, etc., however in fact, we should be worried about global warming, our common problem and risks: global average temperature has increased by at least 1.1 Celsius since 1880, droughts are becoming longer, and sea levels are rising.

Dyer, G. (2024): Why climate change is not an environmental issue

Golgowski, N. (2019): People may lose their homes by 2050 due to coastal flooding

McMichael, A. J. (2013): Environmental and ecological changes

Yoder, K. (2023): Global boiling - it’s like global warming, but way more worrying

Emilia

2024-05-28 23:01:43 UTC

According to NASA's climate data collection, the earth’s temperature has increased by nearly 1 degree Centigrade since the Industrial Revolution in the 19th century. Climate data for 2023 shows the earth is 1.48 degrees warmer than in the past, which is on the verge of exceeding climate scientists’ goal. Recently years witnessed a period that the temperature of the earth has been rising. Global warming has aroused people’s concern and there are different opinions among them. Although some people claim that it has little effect on human life, climate change will bring endless challenges to human life because it will harm marine life, increase extreme weather and cause disease epidemics.

Mubarak

2024-05-29 00:54:47 UTC

Debates concerning the proper place of ancient artifacts from communities are frequently sparked by their discovery. Many of these artifacts ended up in museums after being taken without authorization in different eras. The question of whether these items should stay in museums or be given back to the inventors' ancestors is currently being debated. While some contend that museums are important for teaching, others think that returning these relics is essential for upholding historical injustices and maintaining identity. The idea of reuniting the relics with their people is heavily advocated in this article. By doing this, we can honor their culture, make up for historical wrongs, and give indigenous peoples the power to direct their own destiny. Can you put the components of the thesis statement into one sentence?

Maryam (Maria)

2024-05-29 07:53:06 UTC

As public perceptions of global warming are changing, it is imperative to increase public understanding of the issue. As Mondal claimed in 2024 In addition to being a necessary component of life on Earth, carbon is also a key player in climate regulation. The ecosystem is being negatively impacted by the sharp rise in carbon emissions brought on by human activities like the burning of fossil fuels and deforestation. Despite the widespread belief that global warming is not a concern, it is a concern. because extreme weather events such as heat waves, droughts, floods, and others are happening more frequently and intensely throughout the world. I see the counter argument and the stance, but I'm not sure about the three reasons. Are they heat waves, drougnts and floods?

Lily

2024-05-29 15:50:57 UTC

Up to now, plenty of museums around the world host artefacts which comes from digging by archaeologists, plundering form other countries. However, there is an increasing number of people argue recently that the artefacts should be returned to ancestors or their original countries. They are protecting their national culture rights. The artefacts are most important cultural fortune which present history and cultural inheritance. The question is that if the artefacts should be returned? Although some people argue that it can spread culture to residents who want to learn form history and the museums can repaire objects to their original appearance, The artefacts should be returned because possession is illegal, disrespecting the owner and restoring national integrity.

Hillary

2024-05-29 15:56:41 UTC

In 1896, a seminal paper by a sweedish scientist first predicted that changes in atmospheric carbondioxide levels alter the surface temperature through the greenhouse effect . Carbon emissions around the world is increasingly putting the globe in danger which recorded an increase of 1.5 degrees in the recent past.

Although many people claim that we need not to worry about the warming, we need to be bothered because global warming causes heavy rains which brings àbout floods, causes hurricanes and wildfires.

Zeyno

2024-05-29 17:00:59 UTC

Since 2023 was the hottest year of all time, scientists are worried that climate change will become a global issue in the following years. In the past, climate scientists predicted that climate change would be a problem; however, it has come far faster than expected. Even though the consequences weren’t seen, and some people argue that global warming is not absolute and essential, the climate crisis is undeniable because there is a water shortage, the frightening impacts on human health, and the increasing number of natural disasters show that people should be concerned about it.

Bessie

2024-05-29 19:12:42 UTC

Nowadays, Ancient indigenous objects on display in museums, are often looted from indigenous peoples by European armies during the colonial period. Whether to return the ancient indigenous cultural relics has ~~always~~ been a hot topic of discussion for decades. While some people argue that objects created and used by ancient indigenous people should be saved by museums or private collections, it is more beneficial to return indigenous cultural relics to the indigenous people who made or used these objects because it contributes to indigenous cultural recovery and self-confidence, strengthening global cultural diversity and the ownership of the objects belong to the indigenous people.

Ross

2024-05-29 21:53:29 UTC

Global warming is a major issue facing humanity, with a wide range of impacts, but it is not easy to immediately draw attention to. As time goes by, the temperature gets higher and higher (Kolbert, E.2024）， People will suddenly find themselves in irreversible danger. Although the signs of climate change are not always obvious, their consequences are serious. For example, rising sea levels pose a threat to coastal cities, potentially leaving millions homeless and causing significant social and economic problems. At the same time, the constantly rising high temperatures pose a huge threat to people's health, which may lead to health problems such as heatstroke and dehydration, as well as an increase in deaths related to heat waves. Carrington, D.2022）。 But some people believe that the greenhouse effect is easy to solve, and there is also literature on how to make temperatures drop. So some people don't care about the impact of rising temperatures, and don't care about people experiencing temperature increases.The purpose of this paper is to study various problems harmful to human beings caused by rising temperatures, such as economic problems, heat stroke dehydration, and sea level rise.

You need a thesis statement in the format given in class. That is, you must have the opposing view followed by the stance and three reasons.

Ashlyn

2024-05-29 21:56:10 UTC

Museums around the world have collected many artifacts that symbolize ancient indigenous civilizations, which demonstrate the wisdom and culture of ancient indigenous peoples. However, as time goes by, more and more people are questioning whether these artifacts should be away from their true homes. The issue of the return of cultural relics is particularly important in today's society because it not only involves cultural inheritance, but also historical justice. Some people believe that cultural relics should remain in museums because museums can better protect and display these cultural relics. However, cultural relics should be returned because of indigenous descendants can provide unique insights into cultural relics, many cultural relics were illegally looted during the colonial period, and the return is a manifestation of correcting historical injustices, the return of cultural relics contributes to cultural understanding and communication.

Xiaoxue Du (Snow)

2024-05-29 22:16:15 UTC

If one wants to visit artifacts that were made or used by ancient natives, many people think that they have to visit a museum. However, not all of these objects have a clear provenance; they once belonged to indigenous peoples and their descendants. Most of the items were not authorized by the indigenous peoples to be in the museum before they were placed there. Couldn't indigenous peoples take care of the objects used and created by their ancestors themselves?

You need to add the counter argument to this statement: Future generations of indigenous peoples should be the custodians of objects made and used by indigenous peoples in ancient times, for legal, ethical, and cultural reasons.

Kelvin

2024-06-05 21:05:55 UTC

Global warming has increased over the years and the effects have been seen from around the world. Due to accumulation of toxins such as carbon dioxide and monoxide from cars and industries. The release of these toxins has not only destroyed the ozone layer which has led to a rise in temperatures causing climate changes, but the effects of global warming have also affected living creatures. A report from the world health organization says that 24.3 percent of deaths are caused by environmental risks such as air pollution, chemical exposure and natural disasters such as floods and famine in different countries. Although some may people argue that the recent climate concerns which presented are usually false or miscalculated because in the recent years many countries have been finding ways to reduce the effects of climate change by switching to electric vehicles and protesting large scale industries, but the effects of it are seen daily as most people are blinded by unofficial news or information. If global warming is not prioritized it may have an impact on nature and the animals in it, the ocean may be affected such as increased sea levels due to melting ice which may cause floods and may also cause hunger as crops are destroyed from lack of good weather system.

Chris

2024-06-07 17:32:35 UTC

Since the end of World War II and the collapse of colonial systems, people around the world have gained the same right to survive in the world. But there has been an issue of Western imperialism plundering the cultural property of indigenous peoples during the colonial period. Tiffany Jenkins' in her report on indigenous artifacts. writes that in the world famous British Museum, many aboriginal cultural relics (such as Türkiye's Elgin marbles, China's Yuanmingyuan porcelain, Australian aboriginal bark and emu statues), which were called "trophies" by the West, were obtained through plunder and injustice(Jenkins，2016). Nowadays, there are also many controversial incidents regarding the return of indigenous cultural relics. So, the emergence of these events has sparked an argument worth in-depth discussion. Should these objects be returned to the decendants of the indigenous people who made or used these objects or should they be left in museums? Some people believe that these items do not need to be returned to the indigenous people who originally owned the cultural relic, because these relics no longer belong to them, and placing ancient relics for museum visits is also a form of protection. Although some people believe that cultural relics do not need to be returned to the indigenous people because they no longer belong to them， it cannot be denied that these cultural relics should be return because these cultural relics were originally produced or used by the indigenous people, and it is only natural for them to be returned, secondly, returning cultural relics to indigenous people can promote the dissemination of indigenous culture and demonstrate support for indigenous culture and thirdly, it can promote or improve the relationship between countries.

Kaho

2024-06-07 17:58:53 UTC

Having historical items is a significant honor for people, as well as a severe responsibility. people must evaluate several aspects before deciding whether to return these items to the museums or retain them.

The Elgin marble was transported to Britain in the early 1800s and currently on exhibit at the British Museum. For years, the Greek government has demanded its return, sparking worldwide discussion on property returns (Al Jazeera, 2023). This case serves as an example of reevaluating the cultural and historical significance of property, as well as the interaction between international law. moreover, During World War II, the Nazis steal art and cultural artifacts across Europe, frequently targeting Jewish households and organizations and capturing numerous artworks under pressure. efforts have concentrated on locating and restoring looted art to its legitimate owners or descendants in accordance with international restitution and historical justice principles. This restitution procedure remains difficult, requiring considerable provenance investigation as well as navigating legal hurdles across borders, emphasizing persistent moral issues regarding cultural assets and the long-term consequences of war robbery. While people argues that these artifical objects should be returned to the descendants of the indigenous people, the others argue these must be returned to museum correctly, because of aspects of preservation of cultural heritage, ethical consideration and tourism and economic benefits.

Gloria

2024-06-07 18:09:13 UTC

Indigenous heritage is a testimony and history of ancient indigenous cultures. However, Indigenous cultural heritage has been subjected to destruction as well as looting in recent modern times. The Americas are working to reclaim indigenous artifacts from the outside and stop exhibits to respect indigenous cultures. (Jacobs & Small, 2024). Returning artifacts promotes education and cultural studies in indigenous communities. (Woolf, 2023). Additionally, connecting Indigenous artifacts to their culture through restoration (Baker, 2023). While some people believe that these artificate should be be let in museuams, these artifacts should be returned to the descents of those who made them because the return of indigenous artifacts not only honors the history and culture, but also preserves indigenous rights and develops the culture of education.

Kelly wang

2024-06-07 18:10:30 UTC

The return of many indigenous artifacts, which were acquired during the colonial era, has sparked heated debates about cultural heritage and the redress of historical injustices. Museums in Europe and North America have large collections of artifacts that reflect a turbulent history of conquest and cultural domination (Daley, 2015). During this period, explorers, colonizers, and missionaries collected or sometimes forcibly removed artifacts from indigenous peoples around the world. These artifacts, ranging from sacred relics to everyday tools, were brought back to Europe and North America, where they were often displayed in museums as trophies of colonial conquest and curiosities from foreign lands. While supporters of keeping these artifacts in museums argue that these institutions play a key role in conservation and education, others argue that indigenous artifacts should be returned because they support cultural continuity, address historical injustices, and are consistent with international norms on cultural sovereignty.

Ruichen Li

2024-06-14 05:53:04 UTC

With the rapid development of today's society and the attention paid to history in various countries, more and more people know that the objects belonging to their ancestors appear in museums in other countries. Some people think that the museum should return these cultural relics to the descendants of the indigenous people, because these cultural relics should belong to them and should finish what they started. While some people believe that the advantages of returning cultural relics outweigh the disadvantages, there are many uncertain factors, such as how to determine their ancestors, the protection issue after the return and the security issue. Therefore, in order to properly keep these historical relics, this paper holds that museums should not return historical relics.