Lesson 11- Point of View Charlotte Doyle by https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6 Write a journal entry that describes a plot event from Captain Jaggery’s point of view on your blog or in your response journal. Consider how he would describe his internal thoughts, the setting, and characterization of others. Based on what you have read so far, would he use figurative language and/or imagery? Explain why/why not using details from the text. When finished, reply to a classmate’s blog post or journal entry from another character's point of view. en-us 2017-02-02 13:09:14 UTC 2025-10-02 16:15:45 UTC hello@padlet.com Narelle Reaves https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151493434 I was sitting in my room reading the Bible and I heard a knock on my door, I called out "enter!" and Carlotte walked in and I got up and gave an eligant bow, thanked her for visiting with a nice and warming hand shake. After that I offered her a seat, I saw the look on her face and saw that she seemed so suprised as if she had never seen such fine furniture. I then talked to her about how she felt with being around the crew, she said nothing. I was beginning to think she had something on her mind that she wanted to talk to me about but was too scared to tell me. Was she scared of me? I then offered her her some tea and biscits, thinking she was a bit parched. I began to talk about the ship once more and poured myself some tea, Talking about her discomforting sea sickness, she said that she had a good recovery indeed. I told her to try to get some more fresh air and that it would help. I talked about the two families who were supposed to come with her, I then thought of my dear daughter,Victoria I showed Carlotte a small picture of her and began to feel emotional, I had missed my dear five year old so very much. But I held in the tears.I told her that she has the freedom of the ship, I told her to show the crew a little softness and to listen to their stories, I told her that they had no tenderness. I still saw that same look that I saw before, she said that I reminded her of her father,I then felt very touched. I asked if we were friends, she replied with a yes. She then pulled out a dirk from her pocket. I was surpriesd I asked where she had got it from, my face grew stern, I asked her where she had got it from, she had said that the person who escorted her to this ship. She gave me the dirk,I studied it and told her to keep it under her mattress. It had truly scared me to death, but I guess it was for her protection. She had to keep it.]]> 2017-02-03 16:43:31 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151493434 Savannah https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151493494 I was in my room, reading the bible on my knees. I heard a knock I shouted "enter" it was charlotte. When she came in I]]> 2017-02-03 16:43:39 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151493494 Simone https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151493526 I was laying down in my bed and was frighten when I heard someone knoking on my door, I walked to the door and called out "Enter!" Charlotte walked into my room , I elegantly bowed and gave her a freindly handskake. I told her to make herself at home and offered her seat, i saw a astonishing look on her face as if she has nerver seen any furniture like the furniture I had. i started to talk to her and we had a long conversation about how she felt around the crew, said nothing i offered her tea and food; we were eating while we were talking. she was complaining about being sea sick. We ended off in pleasure an she sweap away.

]]> 2017-02-03 16:43:43 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151493526 Eduardo https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151493617 i was reading my bible when charlotte came in then she said "could any greater contrast to my meeting with zacariah" which in my responce was:"Miss Doyle how kind of you to visit"]]> 2017-02-03 16:43:52 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151493617 Connnor Christopher Lotts https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151493657 Desciption of Captain Jaggery: Captain Jaggery is a nice, polite character, but seems to be a little bit harsh.  He thinks that the only way to earn respect from the crew is violence.  He thinks they're all just like animals that need to be bullied to do what you want.  He loves the sea very much, and also thinks money is more important than comfort.  He also is a Christain and thinks the crew has something against him, and thinks that they mean trouble.
Questions:  He probably would use figurative language and imagery. He would describe his internal thoughts as justified and best for all. He would describe the setting (the sea) as the best place on Earth. He thinks that his way is the best way, so other characters should be obedient, so he sees them as worthless savages that do what he says if he treats them badly. He sees Charlotte as a well-manored lady.]]> 2017-02-03 16:43:58 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151493657 Joro Okesola https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151494026 When I was in the middle of reading the bible, I heard someone knock on my cabin door. I told who ever it was to come in. When I saw it was Charlotte, I told her to sit down and told Mr. Hollybrass that he should go. I said that I knew that my crew wasn't the neatest, but I asked her to be nice to them.]]> 2017-02-03 16:44:52 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151494026 Joy Cobb https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151494379 I was in my room having tea and a talk with kind Miss.Doyle when she gave me a dirk. She said the nice man Mr.Grummage, who is said to have brought her down to the Seahawk a business associate of her fathers, gave it to her. She then handed it to me, seeming surprised and upset when I gave it back to her saying I don’t want it. I told her to put it under her mattress. She said then that she kept it under her mattress in her cabin. After she and I were discomforted, to patch up our last conversational awkwardness I talked to her calmly. I then guided her out of my room.]]> 2017-02-03 16:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151494379 Ryan Wilson https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151494587 I was reading the bible when Charlotte walked in. I requested her to be kind to the crew. I showed her a round robin. I warned her how to sign it.     After I talked about the crew, Charlotte handed me a dirk. I was shocked she had one. I asked roughly where she got it. I insisted she keep it for safety. Captain Jaggery would use figurative language because he is expressive when he gets a feeling.]]> 2017-02-03 16:46:20 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151494587 Parth Patel https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151494742 I was reading the bible and Charlotte came in. I told her to be kind to the crew. I welcomed her and gave her tea and buscits. I was telling her about my daughter. She had big eyes and a lovely mouth. I was thinking to aboard my daughter on the ship but she is too delicate.Then Charlotte got up and tried reaching for the picture but I took it back. We were talking about how Charlotte felt about the crew. I was tthinking of having Charlotte being Victoria's sister.]]> 2017-02-03 16:46:46 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151494742 Iremide J. Akoda https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151495075 2017-02-03 16:47:38 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151495075 Ahone Fofou https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151495424 I was reading the bible and Charlotte walked in. I exclaimed to her to be decent to the crew because he fears "a crew such as mine has little liking for good taste or, alas, order." As the conversation was going on I offered her some and some biscuits. I was telling Charlotte about my daughter. My daughter has large eyes with a sweet mouth. Her name is Victoria and she is five years old. She is very lovely said Miss.Doyle. She tried reaching for the picture of Victoria but I drew it back. I lingered at the picture in a most affecting way. I could "never for a moment take my eyes from the child's face" as hung the picture up on the wall in my room. I will offer Miss.Doyle freedom of the ship and she can join me for any meals whenever she chooses. She responded "It's kind of you to say, sir." Charlotte is like Captain Jaggery's little spy because he gives her freedom of the ship and she spies on his crew members for him so it is like they are undercover. This is Captain Jaggery's point of view]]> 2017-02-03 16:48:42 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151495424 Soraya B. https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151495738 I was in my room reading,and than I heard a knock exspecting Charlotte "Enter!" I said as Ms.Doyle came in I offerd her biscuts and tea.We sat down and I started conversation for instance on the crew members they can "have no natural tenderness" I said, as we moved on i talked about my longing daughter that i miss so very much.After our conversation i asked for Ms.Doyles needs only to come in suprise by a dirk she has pulled out from someone named Mr.Grummage. Gladly i have made friends with Ms.Doyle and she will be helping me keep an eye on these lousy seamen. In hope no one has told her of my past I ask questions. I tell her about watching out for trouble of the round robin sign I hope she understands I have my ways and im not cruel to these seamen for no apparent reason. One day I hope to have my wife and child on this ship,one day I will. That was all for today with Ms.Doyle,we are much alike and I hope that for what happend in the past will stay in the past.]]> 2017-02-03 16:49:44 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151495738 Chris https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151496287 I was in my room at the time when I heard a knock on the door, it was Charlotte.  I told her to come in  at have a seat.  I continued to read my bible then I said "You seem surprised, to find such things in my cabin".  Then Charlotte replied "It's very nice."  "How gracious of you to appreciate it".  This affects the main plot of the story because you really get to see how a character is deep down inside. ]]> 2017-02-03 16:51:18 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151496287 Jacinth Sampson https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151498817 I was in my room reading my Bible when I heard a knock on my door and I thought that Charlotte Doyle was at and she came in and I offerd her with tea and biscuts]]> 2017-02-03 16:58:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151498817 Taylor F. https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151499598 I  finely fully dressed reading the bible when ms. doyle came in I stood on my feet and "made a elegant bow" then i sat down and said "how kind of you to visit "then she stuck her hand out I took it grasously" then we started talking then i told her about my 5 year old  daughter victoria and telling her how much i want my wife and daughter here but while i was saying that i was thinking do i really want them here]]> 2017-02-03 17:00:55 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151499598 Kayla S. https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151499740 As  I was in my room reading the bible I heard a knock upon my door  then i said Enter it was was Ms.Doyle i stood on my feet and made an eligant bow. I offered her a biscuit and tea we started a conversation and the topic of my daughter came up and how much i miss her.Then suddenly she pulled out a dirk and said Mr.grummage gave it to her whoever that was. Then she asked for her trunk but wasnt positive of its location so i sent her guardian Mr. Barlow to acompany to retreive her trunk.]]> 2017-02-03 17:01:16 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151499740 ANTONIO ALLEN GOMEZ https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151500216 I was in my room reading the bible when i heard a knock on the door. Enter, i said, Charlotte walked in with the first mate and i told the first mate to leave. I said, "How kind of you to visit". Then i offered her biscuts and tea. She tasted a biscut and said " delicious". I showed her a picture of my daughter and said "her name is Victoria". Charlotte said "she's very lovely ,sir ". Before she could grab the picture i put it gently back on the wall. We talked a while about how Charlotte felt about the crew.]]> 2017-02-03 17:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151500216 Sergio Sacay https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151504547 As I was reading the good news i heard a disturbing knock that broke my silence. Apparently it was Mr.Hollybrass so, I had said "Enter!" for them to come in. As my guests were coming in, i saw that one of them was Ms. Doyle. As they walked by i had wondered if Zachariah had told Ms. Doyle about my atrocious past. At that moment I had felt a little shiver go down my spine. A few minutes later we had tea and clarified the behavier of the crew members. During this period of time I felt very brave, but very nervous while talking about this topic.]]> 2017-02-03 17:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151504547 Connor 2 (plot from first person, Jaggery) https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151506548 I was in my room reading the bible in a chair when i heard a loud knock.  "Enter." I said.  Charlotte came in the room, with the first mate.  Charlotte looked astonished by the room.  "Miss Doyle, how kind of you to visit." I said.  She moved closer with her hand out.  I took the hand.  I told Mr. Hollybrass to leave, and had Charlotte sit down.  We talked about the crew, ship, and Charlotte's school.  I told her about my daughter, Victoria, and suggested that they might make good siblings. Then I showed her a round robin. "Miss Doyle, those who sign such a thing--a round robin--mean to make dangerous trouble. For me. And you. If you ever see one about the ship you must tell me immediatly. It might save our lives." I told her in a dark tone. I quickly changed the subject. Later she pulled a dirk from her pocket. It turned out that Mr. Grummage gave it to her. I told her to keep it, though she looked as if she would throw it overboard whenever she had a chance. Then five bells struck. "Forgive me, I must return to the deck. Let me find someone to go with you to your trunk. Do you know exactly where it was stowed?" I asked. She shook her head. "A Mr. Barlow had charge of it." I told her I'd get him to lead her there. I toom her hand and we left.]]> 2017-02-03 17:22:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151506548 Daniel Kifle Jr. https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151525303 2/3/17
After talking to Charlotte about her dad I brought up the fact that I had a daughter, Victoria that was 5 years old and how some day she can come aboard this ship but for the moment she is too delicate to be broken then charlotte said, “She’s beautiful” she said. And at this point I was thinking of making Charlotte Victoria’s sister but prevailed. Charlotte is a fine woman and is very nice and a good soul.

]]> 2017-02-03 18:22:43 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151525303 Kameron Wolfe https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151559395 2/3/17                                                                                                                          Captain Jaggerys point of view of the events is he wonders if his crew is plotting against him and how charlotte got that knife then charlotte told him a lie and said Mr. Grumage gave it to her and Captain Jaggery asked charlotte if she could spy on the crew to see if they were acting wierd  and if she saw a symbol called a round robin to contact him.]]> 2017-02-03 20:10:39 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151559395 Carmen https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151559431 captain Jaggery's POV I was sitting in my office waiting to have some tea and talk with miss.Doyle . I heard a knock on the door, it was Miss.Doyle "Enter" we talked fora w 

]]> 2017-02-03 20:10:50 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151559431 Trixie Nnadozie https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151559658 (Captain Jaggery's point of view)

I was sitting in my chair, praying with my bible in my lap, when I heard a knock coming from the door. "Enter." I said, as the girl, Charlotte Doyle came into my cabin. "Mr. Hollybrass, that will be all." Mr. Hollybrass saluted and went away. Ms. Doyle extended her hand, and I shook it. "You seem a bit suprised to find such fine thing in my cabin." Charlotte blushed. "It's very nice." I offered her some]]> 2017-02-03 20:11:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151559658 Malayna https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151559959 2/3/17
I was sitting in my cabin, reading my bible when I heard a knock on the door. ''Enter,'' I regarded. Charlotte stepped in, with Hollybrass trailing behind her. I stared at her as she looked around my cabin,. She looked curious, but nervous. ''Ms. Doyle,'' I said ''how kind of you to visit.'' She extended her hand, wishingto shake mine. I sent Hollybrass to his ways and offered Charlotte a seat. ''You seemed surprised to find such things in my cabin.'']]> 2017-02-03 20:13:25 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151559959 Alex https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151559993 02/03/2017
 Captain Jaggery's Point of View

I was sitting in my cabin, reading The Bible, when I heard a knock on the door. "Enter" I commanded. Charlotte stepped forward, with the first mate trailing behind her. I could see her gazing at every aspect of my cabin looking amazed. "Miss Doyle," I said, "how kind of you to visit." She reached her hand out willing to shake mine. "Mister Hollybrass," I said briskly, "that will be all." I offered a seat to Charlotte. Charlotte seemed appreciate the looks of my cabin]]> 2017-02-03 20:13:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151559993 b https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151562830 2017-02-03 20:28:03 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/151562830 Savannah https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/152527540 I was sitting in my room reading my bible when I heard a knock, I shouted “enter” it was Charlotte I rose to my feet and gave an elegant bow. I asked “would you be good enough to sit?” She then sat, I offered “some biscuits” and “a tin of Scottish thins.” She seemed to want to talk. She was talking about what she was doing on the ship I then brought up how I had a daughter and showed her a picture. After a wile of talking she took a knife out her picket I was very surprised. She said she’d got it from the person who brought her here in protection I told her to keep it under her mattress that way she wouldn’t at any time give it to anybody else. After that I told about some important things that if seen to bring to me like the round ribbon. After our talk I sent her to her trunk to get her clothes and everything was settled.]]> 2017-02-08 16:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/152527540 Amrita Captain Jaggery's first point of view https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/152653296  I was sitting in my cabin reading the bible when I heard a knock and I had said "Enter". It was Ms.Doyle and and Mr. Hollybrass. When she came in she "made an elegant bow" as I rose. As a wonderful surprise I said "how kind of you to visit". As I held Ms.Doyle's hand he told Mr. Hollybrass that will be all I said "would you be good enough to sit". She seemed to be surprised to see such fine things in my cabin as she blushed I found her kind to appreciate it. I offered her some tea and with that I offered "a tin of Scottish thins". Then we started the conversation of my daughter about her "large eyes,her mouth sweet." and that her name was Victoria and that she is only five. She is too delicate but soon I hope her mother and Victoria will board with us one day. Ms.Doyle started tearing up when I showed her the picture and was about to touch but I took it away. I said that both Victoria and Ms.Doyle could be "charming sisters" but I truly miss her as my eyes lingered over the picture. I asked if she was comfortable in her cabin and she answered with a yes and I offered her the freedom of the ship and that she can join me whenever. That there is no harm in being friendly with them and to show them a little softness. As she complimented me with a praise I added we are friends right and she answered with a yes then I added that if there is any chaos on the ship that she will inform me and she said she will]]> 2017-02-09 00:45:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/152653296 Amber Deol https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/152841567 I was sitting in my romm reading the bible when I heard a knock on the door. I said " Enter" . I saw it was Ms. Doyle and Mr. Hollybrass. It looked like Ms. Doyle was scanning my room. When she came in I roseed to my feet as she made an elegant bow. Then I said "how kind of you to vist". Then she moved ]]> 2017-02-09 17:00:14 UTC https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/152841567 Amber Deol 2 https://padlet.com/rtaylor53/o9rmirpr0xv6/wish/152949657 I was sitting in my room reading the bible when I heard a knock on the door. I said " Enter" .  I saw it was Ms. Doyle and Mr. Hollybrass. It looked like Ms. Doyle was scanning my room. When she came in I rose to my feet as she made an elegant bow. Then I said "how kind of you to visit". Then she moved forward and held her hand out. I took it graciously and said to Mr. Hollybrass that would be all.

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