https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik Thank you for being a part of our writing process. Please add a personal comment after reading Genesis' Hero's Journey. You may remain anonymous or you can add your name after your post. en-us 2020-06-09 18:00:47 UTC 2021-06-07 20:32:17 UTC hello@padlet.com 22danieladiaz https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/636746864 I like the ending and I like how you added a message at the end. I also liked the characters you created, and the way she found out about the witches was my favorite part.]]> 2020-06-22 23:42:08 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/636746864 22carolinabadamo https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/637596903 I love how you added lot's of inner thoughts and dialogue. Your whole story has lot's of great detail and twists. Great job! :)]]> 2020-06-23 15:09:37 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/637596903 22aurorarobinson https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/638678667 I love it! I love how relatable it was in the beginning, and I love how you used the inner thoughts and wrote them like it was an actual book, for ex: "I felt a flash of relief" like thats next level stuff. I love the story and the ending made me want a part 2! I could see this as a book. Good job!!!]]> 2020-06-24 12:27:37 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/638678667 https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/638763651 I love how realistic it was at the beginning when they were at the school and I loved the amount of detail you added in the story. I would definitely recommend it to a friend! Good job!]]> 2020-06-24 13:45:17 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/638763651 22majasarzynska https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/638856766 I love how you can actually relate to your book. I agree with everyone. you added lots of detail which made the story a lot better. You made the ending like a mystery so it made me want a part 2 sooo bad. I would recommend this to a friend as well. Good Job!!!!!!!!!!!! :D]]> 2020-06-24 14:52:13 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/638856766 22eloratanasovski https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/640025250 I loved this story! Genesis you should be proud this was amazing!! I loved the concept of the whole story! Also how you phrased everything, and your words! (I had to look up a word you used!) You should definitely make a sequel, containing who gave Anna the armor and more battles with witches! You did an amazing job with this story!!!]]> 2020-06-25 14:05:17 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/640025250 22laurazhong https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/640371541 I love your story! There was lots of detail and interaction between the characters. There we many twists and I really liked it! G]]> 2020-06-25 19:50:51 UTC https://padlet.com/pjames71/o9odzn5xjg5udzik/wish/640371541