https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y Made with charm en-us 2017-10-04 17:38:17 UTC 2017-10-06 17:32:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194784013 The scene was really good, jack could up his volume and dont turn your back to the audience. I could really feel the dramatic emotion and felt that the tention was high]]> 2017-10-06 17:17:33 UTC https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194784013 avahawkins https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194784270 Really great reaction from Jill! When Jack said abroad it was a really good moment and Jill starts to go off on her tangent, she is very realistic with the “immature” line. Really nicely delivered lines. Some volume needs to be amped up. But seriously, the line delivery’s were brilliant. Upped the drama which was great, don’t turn the back to the audience so much, but it gave really nice effect the first time. Father element was really well placed in the script as well. Jill, really nice job with the clothes, never broke action. Jack also never broke purpose which made the scene really intense and you could see what each character wanted through the line delivery’s. Awesome scene! ]]> 2017-10-06 17:18:11 UTC https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194784270 https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194784357 This is a very realistic scene, I really like that about it, and the are very realistic as well. Jack did a good job portraying a teenager who wants his own freedom. Jill is an amazing mother figure, she really makes me think about a worried mom who wants the best for her son even if he doesn’t understand. I really liked the end of the scene as well.]]> 2017-10-06 17:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194784357 https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194785348 I really liked how jack was very excited that he got into the collage he wanted to go to but also nervous at the same time to tell his mom that it was in Singapore. I also really liked how Jill added in the realism factor to this scene by asking jack how he would pay for collage. Great job]]> 2017-10-06 17:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194785348 https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194785361 I reaaaaally loved this scene. The beginning was great with the convincing laundry and Jack's approach into the situation was impressive. Also great intensity as the scene progressed. Jack, bæ, sometimes you need to speak up a little bit when you conceal your words, and Jill if you freaked out even more when you found out about the college, that would have been really fun. Loved the scene overall, especially the added dialogue.]]> 2017-10-06 17:20:16 UTC https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194785361 https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194785393 I like Jill's pantomime, you could really see her folding those shirts. When Jack was nervous to tell her, he got very quiet, and it was hard to hear his lines. Jack's frustration with Jill was very realistic. I could relate to a lot of his frustrations with his mom and his lack of freedom as a young adult.]]> 2017-10-06 17:20:20 UTC https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194785393 lindseycoffey22 https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194785434 This was a really great scene and a solid improvement from the first time around. You guys showed a typical mother-son relationship which made it more believeable. The only negative comment I have is that at least two timesdidn’t understand Jack’s lines, so to just speak up and more clearly. ]]> 2017-10-06 17:20:25 UTC https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194785434 timholtman https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194785562 This scene had a lot of great emotions and really believable characters. ]]> 2017-10-06 17:20:39 UTC https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194785562 mcammorto328 https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194785643 The reaction of the mom is believable. The topics like who's paying, the reaction of his dad, & him never being able to do anything contributes to the intensity. The mom's tone indicated her refusal to compromise. Jack's natural pauses were great and you can tell in the argument he was trying to hold back, but as the scene continued the escalation of tension rose.]]> 2017-10-06 17:20:49 UTC https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194785643 alexadigiovanni https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194789074 1.) A little more volume and diction from Jack but other than that emotion was COMPLETELY THERE.
2.) Jill, maybe a hit more gasping or visible shock after in the second half of the scene, yet you had real control in character that was channeled interestingly and it was very realistic!
3.) the writing was unreal in how the plot changes and the honesty in the text. This was my favorite scene so far 😁‼️]]> 2017-10-06 17:28:20 UTC https://padlet.com/gjillian10/o9nyabfnwq4y/wish/194789074