https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j Made with the help of a typing monkey en-us 2018-02-19 15:38:09 UTC 2025-10-07 17:03:11 UTC hello@padlet.com ramirezh2 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233289552 F: Change this to which- you needed a comma in between sentences 29 and 30 to use which WRONG
G: Change save to safe- safe is the wrong meaning WRONG
H: Change later to latter- the double consonants make the a short sounding WRONG
J: no change needed: this sentence sounds correct RIGHT]]> 2018-02-20 14:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233289552 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294386 How should sentence 28 be changed?]]> 2018-02-20 14:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294386 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294389 A: insert a comma after planned.
needs a comma to connect  two sentences right .

B:]]> 2018-02-20 14:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294389 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294440 2018-02-20 14:56:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294440 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294478 2018-02-20 14:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294478 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294485 2018-02-20 14:56:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294485 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294502 Mom's brithday present din't turn out as we had planned ,but she knew that we loved her.

A-Insert comma after 
planned.Comma is used for connucting sentances RIGHT
B-delete but.This a fanboy we need to conecct the sentace.WRONG
C-Change she knew to they knew.The narrtor is talking about one preason thay is plual.WRONG
D-no change needed.This is rarely needed plus the seatance dose not sound right. WRONG]]> 2018-02-20 14:56:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294502 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294509 F: Delete the comma. The comma is needed to combine the sentence. WRONG!
G: Change grabed to grabbed. The double consonants make the a short. RIGHT!
H: Change that to it. The it does not make sense. WRONG!
J: Make no change. The sentence is not correct. WRONG!]]> 2018-02-20 14:56:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294509 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294514 2018-02-20 14:56:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294514 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294516 2018-02-20 14:56:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294516 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294518 A: Insert a comma after planned-There needs to be a comma to connect two sentences.RIGHT
B: Delete but- There needs to be a conjunction after a comma to connect two sentences.WRONG
C: Change she knew to they knew- Mom is not plural and they is plural.WRONG
D: No change is needed in sentence 33- There needs to be a comma before but.WRONG

]]> 2018-02-20 14:56:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294518 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294519 F: Change this to which-its wrong because  which does not make sense in the sentence that means it doesn't sound right therefor its WRONG
G: Change save to safe -this is wrong because safe sounds like save but safe and save do not have the same meaning WRONG
H: Change]]> 2018-02-20 14:56:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294519 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294550 A-insert a comma after planned:You need a comma before a FANBOY RIGHT
B-delete but:It wouldn't make any sense WRONG
C ]]> 2018-02-20 14:56:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294550 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294571 2018-02-20 14:56:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294571 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294572 2018-02-20 14:56:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294572 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294671 F: Change this to which- it's wrong because which doesn't sound right in the sentence and it would need a comma to transition to the rest of the sentence
G: Change save to safe - That's wrong because safe has the same sound, but not the same meaning WRONG
H: Change later to latter - that's wrong because latter is a word but it's not spelt like that and not used correctly in the sentence
J: no change needed - that's correct because the sentence sounds and used correctly RIGHT]]> 2018-02-20 14:56:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294671 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294726 2018-02-20 14:56:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294726 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294779 Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 23?-A: Yet- RIGHT because, it sayś ¨Over time we formed a sort of friendship.¨                                                         B: In the same way-
C: For example-
D: Therefore-

]]> 2018-02-20 14:56:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294779 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294781 2018-02-20 14:56:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294781 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294785 2018-02-20 14:56:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294785 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294954 F-delete the comma after mom-WRONG because it is listing.
G-change me to I-RIGHT because I goes in the predicate.
H-change looked to looking-WRONG it is the past.
J-sentence 24 should not be changed-WRONG because it needs to be changed.]]> 2018-02-20 14:56:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233294954 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233295353 A= With fanboys you need to add a comma before but in this case.-
B= To delete the fanboy but would be confusing- WRONG
C= It's talking about one person not more than one. - WRONG
D= There needs to be a comma before but. - WRONG]]> 2018-02-20 14:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233295353 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233307164 2018-02-20 15:13:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233307164 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233757376 A- delete the comma-WRONG
B- changed grabed to grabbed-RIGHT
C-change that to it-WRONG
D-no change needed]]> 2018-02-21 14:40:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233757376 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233760657 F.delete the comma-Wrong it helps the structure.
G.change grabed,to grabbed-Right because there needs to be a double ]]> 2018-02-21 14:45:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233760657 kate_eaton https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233761237 A: Change grinning to grining- WRONG because grinning is spelt right
B: Change brought to brung]]> 2018-02-21 14:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233761237 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233762141 F: He turned and his golden eyes toward me almost looked embarrassed-wrong because you do not need the and also you need to add he after me.
G: When he turned his golden eyes toward me ,he almost looked embarrassed]]> 2018-02-21 14:47:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233762141 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233765526 2018-02-21 14:53:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/233765526 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234240824 A- yet -RIGHT,because it fits the best 
B-in the same way- is WRONG because it is the wrong transition
C-for example-WRONG-because there is nothing to compare it to
D-therefore-WRONG-is the wrong transition ]]> 2018-02-22 14:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234240824 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234240970 A:Change your to you're- You're you are going to do something RIGHT
B:Change attention to atention- Attention has TWO t´s WRONG
C:Change ingredients to ingredient´s- The ingredients do not own anything WRONG
D:Sentence 28 should not be changed-nothing needs to be changed WRONG]]> 2018-02-22 14:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234240970 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234241935 F.Delete the comma-deleting the comma would cause the sentence to sound incomplete so......it WRONG! 

G.Change grabed to,grabbed-grabed is not how you really a word so......it might be right?]]> 2018-02-22 14:43:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234241935 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234242024 A-change ginning to grining: it is spelled right WRONG. B-Change brought to brung: brung is not a word WRONG. C-change are to our: are is when you ask a question or a statement and our is if you are talking about you and other people RIGHT. D-no change needed: there is a change to sentence 13 WRONG]]> 2018-02-22 14:43:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234242024 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234242446 A: After sentence 10. Does not make sense. WRONG!
B: After sentence 11. Still does not make sense. WRONG!
C: After sentence 12. It still does not make sense. WRONG!
D: This sentence should not be added to this paragraph. RIGHT!!!]]> 2018-02-22 14:44:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234242446 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234245317 F: Delete the comma-WRONG because you need a comma for two different thoughts.                                                       G: Change grabed to grabbed-CORRECT because you need two Bs in grabbed (Also its underlined in red)
H: Change that to it-WRONG it would not fit as good as that J: No change needed-WRONG you need to change some spelling.]]> 2018-02-22 14:47:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234245317 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234245478 A-My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals that  warned me. WRONG because animals can't warn you 
B-My mother shrieked. As she warned me about approaching strange animals.WRONG because it dose not need the first period 
C-My mother shrieked about approaching strange  animals ,she warned me.WRONG because it dose not make sense 
D-My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals.RIGHT because it sands right ]]> 2018-02-22 14:48:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234245478 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234247645 A. subway cat seemed happy to be on his own again . RIGHT because when he was when he was on a leash he did not like it . So when he so when he was not on a leash he was fine. 
B.He was the subway cat,and now he was worried about having to find food . WRONG because he was not having a hard time finding food.
C.He carted his silly little self  straight to the door. WRONG because it does not rap up the story ]]> 2018-02-22 14:50:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234247645 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234247763 2018-02-22 14:51:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234247763 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234247958 2018-02-22 14:51:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234247958 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234248020 F:My mother shrieked about approaching strange  animals that warned me Wrong                                       G:My mother shrieked.As she warned me about approaching strange animals WRONG.   
H:My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals, she warned me WRONG.                              
J:MY mother shrieked and warned me about strange animals RIGHT.                      

]]> 2018-02-22 14:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234248020 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234249999 A:after sentence 10 WRONG, because it doesent make sense. ]]> 2018-02-22 14:53:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234249999 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234263374 2018-02-22 15:12:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234263374 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234263622 2018-02-22 15:12:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234263622 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234702212 2018-02-23 14:35:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234702212 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234702254 F: Besides I don't think we would of laughed nearly as hard if our cookies would have been perfect.-  RIGHT because you don't need a period between those sentences
G:Besides, I don't think. we would of laughed nearly as hard if the cookies would have been perfect.- WRONG because you don't need a period in between a complete sentence
H: I don't think i would we would have. laughed nearly as hard if our cookies would have been perfect ]]> 2018-02-23 14:35:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234702254 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234702532 F: my mother shrieked about approaching strange animals WRONG

 G:My mother shrieked.As she warned me about approaching   strange animals WRONG

H: MY MOTHER WARNED 
ME ABOUT APPROACHING STRANGE ANIMALS, SHE WARNED ME wrong

J:my mother shrieked and warned me about strange animals]]> 2018-02-23 14:36:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234702532 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234702555 A-delete the comma-WRONG because the comma is needed 
B-changed grabed to grabbed-RIGHT grabed is the incorrect spelling
C-change that to it-WRONG it is incorrect grammar to change that to it
D-no change needed-WRONG

]]> 2018-02-23 14:36:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234702555 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234702571 A-Yet: It makes sense and it sounds better RIGHT
B-In the same way: It doesn't make sense WRONG
C-For example: It doesn't make any sense
D-Therefore : It doesn't sound right]]> 2018-02-23 14:36:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234702571 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234703358 A- Delete the comma -Wrong- It is wrong because when you read the sentence with the comma and without comma, with a comma sounds better.     
B- Change grabed to grabbed-Right- It is right because you need that other consentant to make the vowel a not say its name.
C- Change that to it-Wrong- When you read the sentence with that it doesn't sound right and what is that. You need a subject before that  to be that.
D-No change needed-Wrong-It is wrong because there is a change needed in sentence 4.]]> 2018-02-23 14:37:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234703358 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234703835 F-He turned and his golden eyes towards me almost looked embarrassed.This is a werid  sentence ,and thier is no coma.WRONG
G-When he turned his golden eyes toward me ,he almost looked embarrassed.This ]]> 2018-02-23 14:38:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234703835 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234703861 2018-02-23 14:38:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234703861 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234704175 A: Yet. It shows that even though subway cat got mad they still formed some kind of friendship. RIGHT!!!!!
B:In the same way. There was nothing that was the same  in the sentence and in the sentence before. WRONG!!!!! 
C: For example. There is no example. WRONG!!!!!
D: Therefore. People usually don't be friends when they don't know each other and get mad at one another. WRONG!!!!!]]> 2018-02-23 14:38:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234704175 https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234705564 A: Yet. Yet looks and sounds correct. RIGHT B:In the same way. Does not sound right. WRONG C: For example. Does not show a example. WRONG D: Therefore. Does not sound right. WRONG]]> 2018-02-23 14:41:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ramirezh2/o8ya8mkhf35j/wish/234705564