https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr When Revising and Editing, what specific things do you look for? en-us 2018-02-06 18:57:48 UTC 2025-12-21 16:24:40 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228821175 I look for capitalization and punctuation mistakes.
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  Her parents took her to the animal shelter for homeless pets.
   The lady behind the counter smiled and asked "May help you?"
 "yes" we are looking for a puppy for our daughter,Lori."
 We want to get a small dog because he will stay inside most of the time,"Mrs.Jones said.]]> 2018-02-06 19:47:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228826157 23woodward_austin https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228827210 Walt Disney lived on a farm when he was a young boy. From an early age Walt liked to draw animals. He watched the farm animals carefully and made drawings of them. Walt's family did not have money for paper, but Walt was cleaver. He drew a pig on the wall of his house. Walt's parents were not happy. Then Walt's Aunt gave him drawing paper.]]> 2018-02-06 19:49:33 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228827210 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228827820 What is a city bird like? Many birds that live in cities are pigeons. These birds are usually found on city sidewalks and on building rooftops.
A pigeon weighs about half a pound! It can fly up to 60 miles per hour most pigeons live for 10 to 15 years. ]]> 2018-02-06 19:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228827820 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228828035 Lori wanted a puppy to play with, because she did not have any brothers or sisters. Her parents took her to the animal shelter for homeless pets. The lady behind the counter smiled and asked , "May I help you ?" 

"Yes , we are looking for a puppy for our daughter, Lori. We want to get a small dog, because he will stay inside most of the time," Mrs.Jones said. ]]> 2018-02-06 19:50:59 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228828035 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228828242 Lori wanted a puppy to play with.She did not have any brothers or sisters .Her parents took her to the animal shelter for homeless pets.The lady behind the counter smile and asked "May I help you."
"Yes , we are looking for a puppy for our daughter ,Lori .We want to get a small dog.He will stay inside most of the time Mrs Jones said,"]]> 2018-02-06 19:51:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228828242 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228828622 What is a barcode ? Look on the bottom of a cereal box. Do you see a group of black lines and spaces? That is a barcode ! A barcode identifies a product in a store . The thin lines , thick lines , and white spaces are used in a different pattern on every single product . It is like a fingerprint for an item in a store ]]> 2018-02-06 19:52:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228828622 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228829033 Lori wanted a puppy to play with,because she did not have any brothers or sisters.Her parents took her to the animal shelter for homeless pets.The lady behind the counter smiled and asked, "May i help you ?"

" Yes , we are looking for a puppy for our daughter ,Lori. We want to get a small dog , because he will stay inside most of the time, "Mrs.Jones said.]]> 2018-02-06 19:52:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228829033 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228829140 What is a city bird like? Many birds that live in cities are pigeons. These birds are usually found on city sidewalks and on building rooftops. A pigeon weighs about half a pound! It can fly up to sixty miles per hour. Most pigeons live for ten to fifteen years.]]> 2018-02-06 19:53:06 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228829140 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228829575 Lori wanted a puppy to play with because she did not have any brothers , and sisters. Her parents took her to the animal shelter for homeless pets. The lady behind the counter smiled and asked ''May I help you ?"
 ''Yes, we are looking for a puppy for a puppy for our daughter, Lori. We are looking for a small dog, because he will stay inside most of the time '' Mrs.Jones said]]> 2018-02-06 19:53:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228829575 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228829764 What would your mother say if you brought worms to bed? A little girl growing up in England did this, her name was Jane Goodall. Jane always loved animals, even when she was a little girl. Jane went to Africa when she grew up so she could study chimpanzees. She waited and watched wild chimps, until they were not afraid of her. She watched the chimps for many years, she saw baby chimps grow up and start families of their own]]> 2018-02-06 19:54:18 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228829764 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228830200 a barcode is a fingerprint for your ceral box so you can scan them in the store so when you walk out the alarm wont go off]]> 2018-02-06 19:55:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228830200 23baker_tara https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228830688 Lori wanted a puppy to play with. She did not have any brothers or sisters. Her parents took her to the Animal Shelter for homeless pets. The lady behind the counter smiled and asked, ''May I help you?'' I reply, '' Yes, we are looking for a small dog for our daughter, Lori . We want a small dog because he will stay inside most of the time,'' Mrs.Jones said.]]> 2018-02-06 19:55:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228830688 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228830836 Walt Disney lived on a farm when he was a young boy. From an early age, Walt liked to draw animals. He watched the farm animals carefully and made drawings of them. Walt's family did not have money for paper, but Walt was clever. He drew a pig on the wall of his house. Walt's parents were not happy! Then Walt's Aunt gave him drawing paper.]]> 2018-02-06 19:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228830836 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228830944 What is barcode ? Look on the bottom of a cereal box . Do you see a group of black lines and spaces? That is a barcode. A barcode identifies a product in a store. The thin lines, thick lines , and white spaces are used in a different pattern on every single product. It is like a fingerprint for an item in a store]]> 2018-02-06 19:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228830944 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228831403 What`s a city bird like? Many birds that live in cities are pigeons. These birds are usually found on city sidewalks and on building rooftops. A pigeon weighs about half a pound ! It can fly up to 60 miles per hour. Most pigeons live for 10 to 15 years.]]> 2018-02-06 19:57:12 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228831403 23kinsey_dominic https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228831697 What would your mother say if you brought worms to bed? A little girl growing up in England did this. Her name was Jane Goodall . Jane always loved animals , even when she was a girl .]]> 2018-02-06 19:57:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228831697 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228831709 what would your mother say if you brought worms to your bed.A little girl growing up in England did this,ki]]> 2018-02-06 19:57:56 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228831709 23lang_jaydon https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228831731 Lori wanted a puppy to play with because she did not have any brothers or sisters . her parents took her ]]> 2018-02-06 19:58:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228831731 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228832064 jane went to africa  when she grew up so she could study chimpanzees and she watchet the chimps for many years she saw baby chimps grow up and start families of their own.

]]> 2018-02-06 19:58:40 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228832064 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228833643 Lori wanted a puppy to play with, because she did not have any brothers, or sisters. Her parents took her to the animal shelter for homeless pets. The lady behind the counter smiled and asked, " May I help you? "
 "Yes , we are looking for a puppy for our daughter, Lori. We want to get a small dog, because he will stay inside most of the time, " Mrs.Jones said. ]]> 2018-02-06 20:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228833643 https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228835689 2018-02-06 20:05:32 UTC https://padlet.com/sofiacid_44/o7m26bbup5dr/wish/228835689