Feedback and Improvement Circle by Ayesha Khushnud - 68187/TCHR/KUN https://padlet.com/ayeshakhushnud/o7kam3hpsjtl4yzm Share your draft procedure and provide constructive feedback to your peers to help improve their writing. en-us 2025-03-16 07:44:51 UTC 2025-03-17 17:16:55 UTC hello@padlet.com ayeshakhushnud https://padlet.com/ayeshakhushnud/o7kam3hpsjtl4yzm/wish/3367668125 How to Participate in the Feedback Circle

  1. Post Your Draft

    • Share your procedure draft as a document attachment

    • Give your post a clear title that describes your procedure

    • In the description, mention any specific areas where youโ€™d like feedback

  2. Provide Feedback

    • Comment on at least 1 classmatesโ€™ procedures

    • Focus your feedback on:

      • Clarity of steps

      • Level of detail

      • Use of transition words

      • Completeness of instructions

    • Be specific and constructive in your suggestions (5marks )

    • Start with a positive comment before suggesting improvements (5 marks )

Remember: Good feedback helps your peers improve their writing!

]]> 2025-03-16 07:44:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ayeshakhushnud/o7kam3hpsjtl4yzm/wish/3367668125 ๐‘ฎ๐’“๐’๐’–๐’‘ ๐Ÿ๐‘ฉ(๐‘ฎ๐’๐’๐’ˆ๐’๐’† ๐’…๐’๐’„๐’”) https://padlet.com/ayeshakhushnud/o7kam3hpsjtl4yzm/wish/3368828520 https://docs.google.com/document/d/17PKk30kjvuaaO9FezXF1boaQ01PMHf4O1Rw9MzNm9DY/edit?usp=sharing

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https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1lRBdMlopsJQjeMu8YTZeiyWGe6z40NjeSDRuAySKBG8/edit?usp=sharing

]]> 2025-03-17 06:55:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ayeshakhushnud/o7kam3hpsjtl4yzm/wish/3368841516 Group 2C (Google Docs) https://padlet.com/ayeshakhushnud/o7kam3hpsjtl4yzm/wish/3368845636 Maryam, Izma, Fatima, Arooj, Aima

LINK

https://docs.google.com/document/d/17dsZBTUoowdSpy1i24cAF4edp49SENAUrF8P2MLyQIw/edit?usp=sharing

]]> 2025-03-17 06:57:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ayeshakhushnud/o7kam3hpsjtl4yzm/wish/3368845636 Group 1-A https://padlet.com/ayeshakhushnud/o7kam3hpsjtl4yzm/wish/3368884575 Kainaat Ashfaq, Addan Qazi, Mahnoor Rashid, Aaleen Ammar

]]> 2025-03-17 07:28:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ayeshakhushnud/o7kam3hpsjtl4yzm/wish/3368884575 Group 1B https://padlet.com/ayeshakhushnud/o7kam3hpsjtl4yzm/wish/3368895165 Nabeeha, Alizeh, Parizay, Mahum, Umaima.

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